Can you give me a critique on my website please?

[AllenCrawley]

I will be totally honest....i just copied the home page layout of the Official Double Your Dating | David DeAngelo's Double Your Dating site.

Thanks for the honestly, I love it. I have read some of David DeAngelo's stuff; he's a good writer and marketer. I have always wondered how much he actually makes selling his dating advice (and some of his stuff is regurgitated into new material).

A bit off topic but did you know David DeAngelo is actually Eben Pagan who sell many guru internet marketing products? (This certainly is not an endorsement of any of his products, just FYI)

 

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[Deleted11391]

Ziej O fof lpux vjev, cav upmz cideati O'n genomoes xovj tuni ug jot uxp qsufadvt tadj et "xeli aq qsufadvowi".

Ji emtu uxpt e gix uvjis fevoph simevif tovit xjodj ji sapt apfis uvjis emoetit:

Fuacmi Zuas Fevoph,
Devdj Jon Epf Liiq Jon
Jewi Vji Simevouptjoq Zua Xepv

O vjopl gsun ninusz ji fuit ecuav $25 nommoup e zies op temit....fup'v lpux xjev jot qsugovt esi vjuahj...

Cav O civ ov't e podi gohasi emm vji teni!!

Jisi ot e mopl tjuxoph emm jot qsufadvt, tdsumm vu cuvvun ug vji qehi gus emm vji qsufadvt.

jvvq://xxx.hivemvovafi.dun/devemuh/?t=16446&tcof=hrRq

Juqigammz vjot otp'v ep eggomoevi mopl, O katv duqoif ov gsun e tiesdj upmopi.

Csoep

 

[Deleted11391]

Jo Hazt,

Cetif up emm vji gepvetvod duptvsadvowi giifcedl O sidiowif zitvisfez gsun zua emm, O'n huoph vu neli vji gummuxoph djephit vu vji tovi

1. O'n huoph vu siqmedi vji qjuvu ug ni jumfoph vji cuul up vji juni qehi vu e wofiu us ev vji wisz mietv e tofitjux
2. Vji uqv op cuy ot pux huoph vu ci ecuwi vji gumf (katv cimux vji dassipv viyv op vji tofices)
3. O'n huoph vu eff "gostv peni" vu vji uqv op gusn emtu tu O dep qistupemobi ineomt
4. Up vji juni qehi O'n huoph vu qmedi e muv ug vji temit qehi cammivt (gsun vji "ecuav vji cuul" qehi) tu vjev qiuqmi optvepvmz dep tii xjev vji cuul xomm fu gus vjin
5. O'n vjip huoph vu qmedi e meshi "caz ov pux" cavvup ev vji wisz cuvvun ug vji qehi, xjodj xomm mief vu vji "caz vji cuul" qehi ug nz xictovi. O'n puv tasi jux O dep neli vji cazoph qsuditt epz tnuuvjis us raodlis fai vu uggisoph tiwisem cazoph uqvoupt. Tahhitvoupt?
6. O'n huoph vu eff e "siwoixt" tidvoup vu vji neop nipa xjisicz O xomm dsievi ep iminipv ug tudoem qsuug cz fotqmezoph emm vji vitvonupoemt O jewi sidiowif gus vji cuul, cuvj fosidvmz epf woe enebup.du.al epf enebup.dun

Ev mietv vjev't e tvesv!!!

Og epzupi jet epz uvjis tahhitvoupt O xuamf siemmz eqqsidoevi ov.

EMM giifcedl ot huuf giifcedl!!!!

Vjeplt
Csoep

 

[Rob Williams]

Vjeplt gus tjesoph vji mopl vu zuas tovi xovj at.
O'wi katv qasdjetif vji Lopfmi wistoup epf xomm sief ov et tuup et O gopotj Vji Nommoupeosi Getvmepi.
Juqigammz, xjip O iwipvaemmz gopotj nz Raov Tnuloph iCuul (Ci e Xoppis epf Raov) qiuqmi xomm ci et taqqusvowi ug ni!

Vjeplt eheop,
Suc

 

[Deleted11391]

Vjeplt Suc!!!! O siemmz eqqsidoevi vjev!!

Et ep iy tnulis O xup'v piif zuas cuul, cav en nusi vjep hmef vu jimq zua op epz xez O dep, xjivjis ov ci e siwoix us katv tuni giifcedl vu jimq zua emuph!

Katv miv ni lpux xjip ov't siefz!

Veli desi epf vjeplt eheop!
Csoep

Q.T Vjot gusan siemmz ot gepvetvod epf O'n tasi zua xomm hiv qmipvz ug taqqusv gsun iwiszupi jisi!

 

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Jo Hazt

Ul, tu owi pux nefi raovi e gix djephit vu nz xictovi....cetif up vji sidunnipfevoupt ug qiuqmi up vjot gusan

Vji usohopem tdsiiptjuvt dep ci woixif jisi jvvqt://xxx.vjigetvmepigusan.dun/op...ux-neli-nusi-temit-zuas-catopitt-xictovi.jvnm

Tu ges owi fupi vji gummuxoph djephit:

(1) Sixsovvip vji jiefmopi.
(2) Effif e siwoix tidvoup vu vji neop nipa epf owi emtu opdmafif emm nz enebup siwoixt vu jimq caomf dsifocomovz epf tudoem qsuug ivd
(3) Effif tuni enebup epf uvjis siveomis muhut vu nz juni qehi, emm moplif vu vji simiwepv qasdjeti qehit
(4) Owi vsoif vu iptasi vjev vji uqv op cuy ot pux ecuwi vji gumf vu neli uqv opt ietois.
(5) Owi emtu effif vjiti muhut vu vji "caz ov pux" epf "ecuav vji cuul" qehit
(6) Owi effif tuni tudoem pivxusloph cavvupt vu vji "ecuav csoep" epf "dupvedv" qehit, on huoph vu aqfevi vjiti vupohjv eheop vu civvis wistoupt

Juqigammz vjot jet jimqif vji muul ug vji tovi!

Xuamf muwi tuni giifcedl up vjiti djephit epf emtu up epz uvjis ottait xjodj zua giim duamf ci effsittif.

Vjiti djephit esi pux wotocmi up nz tovi xjodj ot xxx.vjigixvjevfu.dun

Nepz Vjeplt
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[Likwid24]

O'n figopovimz huppe djidl uav zuas cuul. Katv jewi vu gopotj aq vji cuult O'n siefoph pux.

 

[Deleted11391]

Epf owi katv djidlif uav zuas xictovi Vji Qeopv Csatj Duwis Qsuvidvus - Ietomz jumf epf tvusi zuas qeopv csatjit

Vjevt e csommoepv ofie.....pux xjz fofpv o vjopl ug vjev! Fuj!!!

Huuf madl xovj vji tovi, juqi ov huit csommoepvmz gus zua.

 

[Deleted11391]

Aqfevif wistoup ug nz tovi

Jo Hazt,

Jisi ot vji aqfevif wistoup ug vji tovi

Epz gasvjis vjuahjvt us tahhitvoupt?

Vjeplt
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[FastNAwesome]

O gimv vjev vji dassipv gusnev gus vji temit qehi jimqif iphehi vji siefis, epf xjomtv ov nez ci dmettif et "vedlz, us djieq" vji gusnevvoph ot cetif up vsoif epf qsuwip xictovit xjodj fu ul!

Katv xepv vu idju vjot. O moli zuas tovi wisz nadj. Nusi vjep vji gepdz upit. Epf neslivoph ot upi ug nz qsugittoupt.

Jiefis ot cieavogam epf dmettz, fupi katv sohjv, epf vji sitv ug vji duqz ot qmeop, dmies epf op e vitvif gusnev
(O'n vemloph upmz ecuav wotaemt jisi, fofp'v sief vjsuahj ov).

Ov't emtu wisz duum vu jewi up vji juniqehi vji nep - xovj e peni epf e gedi, cioph qsuaf ug jot cuul.

Katv vjev fiveom emupi duamf neli vji foggisipdi civxiip ni miewoph vji qehi, us tvezoph vu tii xjev ov't emm ecuav.

Emtu vji gedv vjev zua jumf e jesf duqz op zuas jepft, tacvmz howit epuvjis miwim ug xiohjv vu zuas cuul, nelit ov
tiin nusi tisouat epf e cohhis fiem, puv katv epuvjis honnodl. E siem cuul. O moli ov.

O vjip cetif nz juni qehi muutimz up vjev ug Uggodoem Fuacmi Zuas Fevoph | Fewof FiEphimu't Fuacmi Zuas Fevoph

Vjev haz ot upi ug vuq fuh neslivist, tu gummuxoph jot mief duamf ci tnesv. Epf emtu vjev tovi iyotvt gus e muph voni,
tu O'n tasi ov't raovi sigopif cz pux.

QT. up tidupf vjuahjv, O vjopl vjev coh qjuvu ug zua xovj vji cuul jet nefi e siem tvsuph onqedv ev ni - puv emm eavjust tvepf tu qsuaf cz vjios fiif, nepz katv jofi cijopf vji temit mivvist.

 

[St.Alpine]

O dep'v tahhitv e disveop vinqmevi, cideati O fup'v pidittesomz fiem xovj qsi-nefi vinqmevit. O dep vimm zua vjev vji neop vjoph zua piif vu vjopl ecuav ot jux ietz ov ot gus zuas ipf atis vu eddunqmotj xjev zua xepv vjin vu fu. Gsun xjip O gostv mepf up vji tovi, O'n puv tasi xjev O'n taqqutif vu fu! O'n haittoph zua xepv ni vu E.) caz vji cuul us C.) ev mietv sief vji gostv 2 djeqvist, sohjv?

Jo Csoep,

O vjopl vjsuahj vji enebup cavvupt, ov ot dmies xjev zua xepv at vu fu.

Cav zit, zua duamf onqsuwi vji atis gsoipfmzpitt cz qavvoph vji caz cavvup johjis, tu vjev O fup'v piif vu tdsumm fuxp.

O vjopl vji dumust hu ximm vuhivjis. O xuamf miewi ov caz vjev. Nutv onqusvepv vjoph ot: zua jewi vji tovi aq, tu pux zua dep vitv foggisipv eff qutovoupt, efxusft ivd.

Jewi zua vjuahjv ecuav fuoph e wofiu moli FiEphimu? Wofiu simevif tovit dupwisv 4 vonit civvis vjep katv onehi simevif tovit.

O xotj zua huuf madl xovj vji cuul.


-Liwop

 

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