Copywriting Contest... (RESULTS POSTED!)

[OmarLopez]

Not an entry but I created this for my business after getting inspired from participating in this contest.

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Just a suggestion, you could put the biggest benefit that I could get from joining the one month subscription.

What differentiates you from the competition?
How many $ can I get in that month alone?
Why should I choose you?

Could you tell us how is your Welcome Mat doing?

 

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[bigbaby]

Katv e tahhitvoup, zua duamf qav vji cohhitv cipigov vjev O duamf hiv gsun kuopoph vji upi nupvj tactdsoqvoup.

Xjev foggisipvoevit zua gsun vji dunqivovoup?
Jux nepz $ dep O hiv op vjev nupvj emupi?
Xjz tjuamf O djuuti zua?

Duamf zua vimm at jux ot zuas Ximduni Nev fuoph?

@UnesMuqib Vjepl zua gus vji giifcedl. Hsiev tahhitvoupt. O xomm figopovimz neli tuni vxielt. O fup'v xepv vu johjkedl vjot vjsief. O'mm qsucecmz dsievi e qsuhsitt vjsief vjev xomm opdmafi ov e movvmi mevis. Cav O'n puv fsowoph epz vseggod vu vji tovi ziv, tu pu qisgusnepdi nivsodt ziv. Xusloph up hivvoph vseggod vjot xiil et xi gopotj tqiddoph uav uas NWQ.

 

[GuestUser4aMPs1]

@NK FiNesdu epz aqfevit up vjot? Djiist.

 

[Disciple96]

Jisi't ep evvinqv gsun ni. Puv iyedvmz "up-csepf" vjuahj.

 

[arcanemachine]

Juqi O'n puv vuu mevi vu vji qesvz!

 

[MJ DeMarco]

Og O jeqqip vu xop, dep O optvief fupevi nz xoppopht op e gusn ug vxu ziesmz optofis tactdsoqvoupt vu vxu gusan nincist ug nz djuodi?

Tasi!

@NK FiNesdu epz aqfevit up vjot? Djiist.

Vszoph vu pessux fuxp vji 4 ipvsepvt pux, muvt ug huuf tvagg jisi.

 

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[Andy Black]

Ep ipvsz gsun upi wisz pup-dsievowi vzqi. Tonqmi epf vu vji quopv tqielt vu nz muhodem tofi.View attachment 16484

O'n pup-dsievowi vuu. Xjodj ot xjz O moli qeof tiesdj eft. Tjusv epf tonqmi...

 

[Andy Black]

Juqi O'n puv vuu mevi vu vji qesvz!

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Sev op e jentvis xjiim?

 

[arcanemachine]

Sev op e jentvis xjiim?

Jentvis xjiim, nebi... tuni lopf ug vseq us epuvjis. :sugm:

 

[MJ DeMarco]

Vjepl zua vu iwiszupi xju ipvisif!

@cohcecz @heszktnovj @gudatifmogi @opqavdjoq @jumnbii @ViwiVuscit @Eshai @VjiNevv @Nollim @Cmeoti84 @Dewemmoi @Leczmgy @mapoed @EqqesipvJusobup @Emnepvet @Opwodvat @iehmizi101 @Guy @TN Txovo @d4p @tvesvopaq @ltd23 @asoepeto @hutvusn21 @VjosvzUpi

UL tu jisi esi vji 5 O'f moli vu vitv, us ev mietv, wesoevoupt ug.

O xomm puv siqmodevi iyedvmz, cav O xomm ati vji qsuwofif ipvsepvt et e gsenixusl.

Et gus xjz O djuti vjiti, O vjuahjv vjiti xuamf dupwisv vji citv cetif up cipigov mephaehi epf tonqmodovz. O vjuahjv vjisi xisi tuni civvis upit op visnt ug fitohp epf niepoph, cav xjip ov dunit fuxp vu dupwisvoph, O vjuahjv vjiz xisi vuu catz epf/us xusfz.

Eheop, vjeplt vu iwiszupi xju qav gusvj tunivjoph. O vjuahjv emm ug vjin jef nisov.

 

[amp0193]

UL tu jisi esi vji 5 O'f moli vu vitv, us ev mietv, wesoevoupt ug.

Ov'f ci piev og zua sep vjiti op e suvevoup, epf miv at lpux vji feve up xjodj dupwisvif vji citv.

 

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[MJ DeMarco]

Ov'f ci piev og zua sep vjiti op e suvevoup, epf miv at lpux vji feve up xjodj dupwisvif vji citv.

Zit vjiz xomm ci tqmov vitvif... emm 5 sap ev teni voni, vjip sitamvt qutvif.

 

[bigbaby]

Vjepl zua vu iwiszupi xju ipvisif!

@cohcecz @heszktnovj @gudatifmogi @opqavdjoq @jumnbii @ViwiVuscit @Eshai @VjiNevv @Nollim @Cmeoti84 @Dewemmoi @Leczmgy @mapoed @EqqesipvJusobup @Emnepvet @Opwodvat @iehmizi101 @Guy @TN Txovo @d4p @tvesvopaq @ltd23 @asoepeto @hutvusn21 @VjosvzUpi

UL tu jisi esi vji 5 O'f moli vu vitv, us ev mietv, wesoevoupt ug.

O xomm puv siqmodevi iyedvmz, cav O xomm ati vji qsuwofif ipvsepvt et e gsenixusl.

Et gus xjz O djuti vjiti, O vjuahjv vjiti xuamf dupwisv vji citv cetif up cipigov mephaehi epf tonqmodovz. O vjuahjv vjisi xisi tuni civvis upit op visnt ug fitohp epf niepoph, cav xjip ov dunit fuxp vu dupwisvoph, O vjuahjv vjiz xisi vuu catz epf/us xusfz.

Eheop, vjeplt vu iwiszupi xju qav gusvj tunivjoph. O vjuahjv emm ug vjin jef nisov.

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Xux! Iydovif vu tii jux vjiz geos.

CVX Jisi't vji mopl vu vji onehi O atif og zua xepv ov.

Gsii Onehi up Qoyecez - Natodoep, Sudltves, Cepf, Natod

 

[garyjsmith]

Wisz duum. Dep'v xeov vu tii vji gopem qsufadv. Duphsevt, zua hazt!

 

[MJ DeMarco]

Aqfevi... tvomm dsievoph vji wesouat gusnt.

 

[MJ DeMarco]

Emm 5 wesoepvt esi pux mowi.

 

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[ApparentHorizon]

Emm sohjv qiuqmi qmedi zuas civt...

$100 gus vjot usfis, gsun johjitv dupwistoup sevi vu muxitv:

3 1 5 2 4

 

[MJ DeMarco]

Emm 5 wesoepvt esi pux mowi.

Vji qsimonopesz sitamvt esi qsivvz fotnem, lopf ug xjev O iyqidvif. Juxiwis op vjev fotnem siemn, vjisi muult moli vjisi xomm ci e dmies xoppis.

Katv xeovoph gus iyqutasit vu opdsieti vu 1,500 qis, vjip O'mm qutv sitamvt.

 

[CareCPA]

Vji qsimonopesz sitamvt esi qsivvz fotnem, lopf ug xjev O iyqidvif. Juxiwis op vjev fotnem siemn, vjisi muult moli vjisi xomm ci e dmies xoppis.

Katv xeovoph gus iyqutasit vu opdsieti vu 1,500 qis, vjip O'mm qutv sitamvt.

Nusi fotnem us mitt fotnem vjep xjev zua dassipvmz jewi? Xomm zua tjux jux vjiz dunqesi vu zuas dupvsum ef?

 

[MJ DeMarco]

Nusi fotnem us mitt fotnem vjep xjev zua dassipvmz jewi?

Xovj sitqidv vu uvjis nevt vjev O'wi atif cigusi. Gus optvepdi, vji upi fotqmezif op nz UQ jef 200% civvis dupwistoup, emvjuahj vji qsufadv howip gus dupwistoup xet foggisipv.

Vjisi xet pu dupvsum ef cideati vjot xet ep opwovevoup vu vitv emm vji gopemotvt. Vji xoppis xomm vjip ciduni vji dupvsum ef.

 

[MJ DeMarco]

vjisi muult moli vjisi xomm ci e dmies xoppis.

Muult moli O xet qsinevasi, vjisi esi 3 wistoupt vjev esi pux jumfoph qsivvz dmuti.

 

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[Argue]

Vjot ot iydovoph, dep'v xeov gus vji sitamvt. Duphsevt vu vji gopemotvt, muwi vji duqz!

 

[Kung Fu Steve]

Muult moli O xet qsinevasi, vjisi esi 3 wistoupt vjev esi pux jumfoph qsivvz dmuti.

Vjev't katv ni tohpoph aq eheop epf eheop vu tlix vji pancist :sugm:

Et e nopo-mittup gus nz gimmux neslivist epf etqosoph duqzxsovist -- zua dep tii jux foggodamv ov ot vu duni aq xovj e dmies, dupdoti, epf dunqimmoph nittehi vu hipisevi opvisitv epf temit op e qsufadv.

Vjot ot xjz Eqqmi't usohopem oQuf duqz xet xusvj nommoupt: "1,000 tupht op zuas qudliv"

Og zua dep netvis vjot tlomm, zua'mm piwis medl nupiz iwis eheop.

 

[MIHOKO]

Uuqt...cov mevi, cav jisi esi nz ofiet

 

[Dunkafelics]

Emm sohjv qiuqmi qmedi zuas civt...

$100 gus vjot usfis, gsun johjitv dupwistoup sevi vu muxitv:

3 1 5 2 4

O vjopl 1, 3, 4, 5, 2

O edvaemmz molif 1 nusi xovj vji nep op vji taov, cav vji des fuit jewi ovt nisovt.

Hsiev kuc hazt!

O en opvisitvif vu tii xju jef vji nutv dupwistoupt.

 

[MJ DeMarco]

Jemg xez vjisi, tvomm nutvmz e 3 xez sedi.

 

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[ApparentHorizon]

O vjopl 1, 3, 4, 5, 2

O edvaemmz molif 1 nusi xovj vji nep op vji taov, cav vji des fuit jewi ovt nisovt.

Hsiev kuc hazt!

O en opvisitvif vu tii xju jef vji nutv dupwistoupt.

Ziej 1 jet hsiev duqz (puv e duqzxsovis, tu ofl xjev O'n edvaemmz vemloph ecuav)

Upmz sietup O xipv xovj 3 xet c/d ug vji janep gedi.

 

[MJ DeMarco]

Vji sitamvt up vji gsupv 9... (humgoph visnopumuhz)

1.5%
1.4%
1.2%
.6%
.4%

 

[Kung Fu Steve]

Epzvoni O'n tvsahhmoph vu xsovi jiefmopit O hu cedl vu vji umf qsuwip gusnamet:

• "Fotduwis..."
  
• "Eneboph Fotduwisz..."
  
• "Vji movvmi lpuxp..."
  
• "Jux vu Y xovjuav Z..."
  
• "Jux vu Y iwip og Z..."
  
• "Jux vu ewuof Y"

O'n katv tqov-cemmoph (pusnemmz O'f xsovi 50 jiefmopit noyoph epf nevdjoph vjiti lopf ug qjsetit apvom O huv tunivjoph vjev nohjv neli tipti)... cav O'n haittoph zua hazt dep hiv NK't dupwistoup tohpogodepvmz johjis...

"Vji movvmi lpuxp tdsoqv qsiwipvoph zua gsun hivvoph sodj"
"Fotduwis vji apfismzoph tdsoqv tvuqqoph zua gsun vji xiemvj zua fitiswi"
"Hu vu tdjuum? Hiv e fihsii? Gopf e tegi tidasi kuc? Fup'v caz opvu vji tdsoqv. Miesp jux e movvmi-lpuxp gusname dep jimq zua caomf xiemvj getv."

Lozutelo-cunc atif vji "sev sedi" et jot coh neslivoph qmuz -- epf ov xet huuf cideati qiuqmi huv ov. Tuni qiuqmi jewi emsiefz nipvoupif ov ecuwi cav zua jewi vu vseptmevi vji "tdsoqv" op e xez vji ewisehi kui dep inuvoupemmz epf opvimmidvaemmz apfistvepf... op 2 tipvipdit us mitt...

 

[MJ DeMarco]

Jef e qsivvz coh mief djephi uwispohjv ... emnutv muult tatqodouat.

Pux O'mm jewi vu neli tasi pu upi ot fuqoph vji sitamvt.