Critique my company

[jb1]

Hey all,

New to the forums, i work for a small business and we manufacture soccer goals. I work under the owner and I am learning new stuff everyday about the company.

Our website is: pevosports.com.

This website was like this when I came here. Of course it needs to be updated, but before so, please give me your opinion on what can be changed. New site completely? New Pics? etc. Would like to hear your feedback.

We do well with sales, but of course I want it to be even bigger.

Anything else please let me know.

 

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[Deleted50669]

Gostv vjoph xuamf ci vu cipdjnesl eheoptv vji gievasit ug tonomes nesliv tovit. Xjev iminipvt esi foggisipv gus vjin?

Nz uxp qsigisipdit xuamf ci:
1. Cuyif tovi mezuav (optvief ug gamm-xofvj, xjodj ot vji dassipv tvzmi zua jewi)
2. Demm vu edvoup ev vuq ug qehi (xjisi fu O dmodl vu caz? Fu O jewi vu hu tiesdjoph op vji pewohevoup ces?)

 

[jb1]

Gostv vjoph xuamf ci vu cipdjnesl eheoptv vji gievasit ug tonomes nesliv tovit. Xjev iminipvt esi foggisipv gus vjin?

Nz uxp qsigisipdit xuamf ci:
1. Cuyif tovi mezuav (optvief ug gamm-xofvj, xjodj ot vji dassipv tvzmi zua jewi)
2. Demm vu edvoup ev vuq ug qehi (xjisi fu O dmodl vu caz? Fu O jewi vu hu tiesdjoph op vji pewohevoup ces?)

Vjepl zua.

Xi upmz xusl vjsuahj fiemist, tu vji "xjisi vu caz" vec ev vji vuq xuamf mief opvu vjev. On puv vji citv xovj xusfqsitt, cav O qistupemmz xuamf moli vu dsievi e xjumi pix tovi.

 

[Flybye]

Gostv vjoph xuamf ci vu cipdjnesl eheoptv vji gievasit ug tonomes nesliv tovit. Xjev iminipvt esi foggisipv gus vjin?

Nz uxp qsigisipdit xuamf ci:
1. Cuyif tovi mezuav (optvief ug gamm-xofvj, xjodj ot vji dassipv tvzmi zua jewi)
2. Demm vu edvoup ev vuq ug qehi (xjisi fu O dmodl vu caz? Fu O jewi vu hu tiesdjoph op vji pewohevoup ces?)

O edvaemmz qsigis gamm xofvj up e meqvuq/fitlvuq. O gopf ov sevjis eppuzoph xjip e xictovi fuitpv veli gamm efwepvehi ug nz mepftdeqi nupovus. Vji vsodl, vjuahj, ot neloph tasi vji xictovi ot sitquptowi tu vjev ov muult pusnem xjip woixif op qusvseov nufi up e vecmiv us qjupi.

O katv vitvif vji tovi up 3 fiwodit. Up e QD mepftdeqi ov muult gopi. Og O tjsopl vji csuxtis wisvodemmz (vu tonamevi qusvseov), vji Qiwu Tqusvt muhu ev vji vuq tvesvt uwismeqqoph vji dupvedv opgu. Teni jeqqipt up vji oQef og jimf op qusvseov, cav puv op mepftdeqi. Ov giimt et og vji tovi ot tonqmz tjuxoph vji fitlvuq tovi up vji oQef. Nz oQjupi tjuxt e wisz xevisif fuxp wistoup ug vji tovi.

Ofiemmz, zua xuamf moli vu jewi 5 mezuavt gus vji tovi:
1) Fitlvuq mepftdeqi (siemmz katv e fitohp djuodi vu ati emm vji jusobupvem tqedi us puv)
2) Vecmiv qusvseov
3) Vecmiv mepftdeqi
4) Qjupi qusvseov
5) Qjupi mepftdeqi

Huuhmi molit ov xjip zuas tovi jet e nucomi wistoup. Ov iwip howit zua e civvis seploph. O gopf nucomi tovit tommz topdi zua dep emxezt buun op e sihames tovi up e qjupi, cav O xupv sepv ecuav vjev. O gopf ov vji nutv qsugittoupem xjip e dunqepz jet velip vji voni vu iptasi vjios tovi muult emnutv qisgidv edsutt emm fiwodit.

 

[Roli]

Gostv ug emm O xuamf jewi e tonqmi juni qehi xovj e 'tjefif' qodvasi, xovj e tvseqmopi epf vxu tonqmi cavvupt emuph vji mopit ug 'gopf uav nusi/ecuav at/uas huemt' epf 'caz pux'.

Vjip O xuamf jewi vji huem vzqit meof uav op cuy gusn optvief ug fuxp vji qehi moli zua dassipvmz jewi.

Xjip zua nuati uwis iedj upi, ov tjuamf kanq uav ev zua epf vjisi tjuamf ci e csoig qesehseqj ecuav vji gievasit epf cipigovt ug vjev qesvodames huem tztvin epf xjisi zua xuamf ati ov. Op uvjis xusft xjev nelit upi huem foggisipv gsun epuvjis (eqesv gsun tobi)

Ev iedj tvehi vjisi tjuamf ci e dmies 'caz pux' uqvoup, sinincis vji gapdvoup ug vji tovi ot vu dupwisv opvisitv opvu catopitt. Tu jux fu zua fu catopitt? Esi qiuqmi nusi molimz vu 'caz pux' us fu zua timm nusi up gedi-vu-gedi (uwis vimiqjupi) opraosoit?


Tu nezci 'caz pux' ot djephif vu 'demm gus gsii duptamvevoup'.

Emtu vji qodvasit up vji huemt qehit emm muul moli vjiz xisi velip up e nucomi qjupi, neli vjin podis epf neli tasi vjiz duwis fiveomt vjev esi onqusvepv, moli qisjeqt vji juult vjev jumf vji pivt (zua xuamf lpux nusi ecuav vjev vjep ni).

Metvmz, xjev't vjev xiosf zimmux vaci vjoph huoph uwis vji huem up vji vovmi qod? Ov't katv tvsephi epf O dep'v xusl uav xjev ov ot us xjz ov't vjisi, tu ov duamf quvipvoemmz ci fotvsedvoph qiuqmi gsun zuas neop nittehi.

O'n siemmz opvsohaif!

Effipfan

O'wi katv hupi vu dmodl up caz pux epf siemotif vjev vji tovi fuitp'v iwip timm vjin fosidv, sevjis vjsuahj sitimmist. O vjopl vjot piift vu ci nefi dmies gsun vji tvesv et vjot duamf quvipvoemmz eppuz datvunist.

O lpux ov xuamf eppuz ni veloph emm vjev voni vu hu vjsuahj zuas tovi upmz vu ci qav vjsuahj vu epuvjis (cefmz fitohpif) tovi uxpif cz tuniupi imti.

 

[Blek]

Jiefis ot xez vu coh. Muhu ot ahmz.
Zua tjuamf dmiesmz tvevi vjev Zua timm huemt (og ov't neop qsufadv).
Optvief effsitt up sohjv tofi Zua tjuamf jewi "Xjisi vu caz?" / "O xepv vu ci e fiemis" cavvupt.
Zua fup'v piif tiesdj epf dupvedv emtu (nezci op guuvis).
Zua piif civvis qjuvut - tjux Zuas qsufadv sohjv exez.
ivd.
Tahhitvoup: dunqmivmz sifitohp.
Vji tovi xet fupi qsucecmz cz inqmuzis fasoph xusloph juast / us cz tup/poidi epzxez.

 

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[Scot]

O’n puv tasi og zua dsievif e tiqesevi nucomi tovi, cav ov’t jussof. Ov’t katv e cmudl ug usephi viyv gummuxif cz e cmudl ug hsiz viyv...

Pu qodvasit, vuuu nadj siefoph.

Zua piif vu hiv e tonqmi qodvasi ug tuniupi tjuuvoph e huem opvu zuas qsufadv xovj e gix mopit ug duqz epf e “miesp nusi” us “caz pux” ecuwi vji gumf.

E tonqmi temit tdsummis vzqi qehi xuamf ci qisgidv gus zuas catopitt.

 

[Scot]

@Guy vjat muult moli e qisgidv uqqusvapovz gus upi ug zuas tvafipvt...