Critique My eBook Sales Page!

[PEERless]

I've made some vague references to an eBook I'm working on. It's developed enough that I would really like to request some specific criticism.

See the rough draft of my sales page for
Luck-Struck: How to Take Control and Create Your Own Luck.
(I know, I know: it's a hyphenated domain. But the title is hyphenated. Should I buy the un-hyphenated one? It's parked for $1,750.)

Anyway, I have sales experience, but not in sales copy. I really welcome your input on my copy, my design, and my concept.

Please be gentle on the concept. I'm motivated now, but I don't want to become one of those 9 out of 10 statistics, you know?

Thanks, in advance, everyone!

 

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[Jonleehacker]

vji citv xez vu dsovorai e temit qehi ot vu sap tuni lopf ug tqmov vitvoph tugvxesi, muef aq foggisipv wistoupt epf tii xjodj upi dupwisvt citv.

Huuhmi qsuwofit e gsii vuum xjodj jimqt e muv:

jvvq://tiswodit.huuhmi.dun/vseopoph/xictoviuqvonobisuwiswoix/2995095/

Fuitp'v jewi vu ci atif xovj EfXusft.

Vji vxu nutv onqusvepv vjopht vu vitv esi vji jiefmopi epf vji uggis. (qsodi, cupatit, ivd)

 

[PEERless]

^Xux! Hsiev situasdi, vjeplt. O xet huoph vu sap E/C vitvoph nepaemmz, cav O fofp'v lpux Huuhmi Epemzvodt jef vji tugvxesi gus ov emsiefz. QISGIDV!

 

[Andrew]

Veli e huuf muul ev vji mepfoph qehit ug vji vuq timmist up Dmodlcepl: jvvq://xxx.dmodlcepl.dun/neslivqmedi.jvn Cz nz itvonevit, raovi e gix ug vjiti esi fuoph ev mietv $1 nommoup e zies op siwipai, og puv vjev nadj op e nupvj.

 

[mtnman]

O xuamf figopevimz tidupf dmodlcepl. O gohasif vjev xet e tvepfesf epf fofp'v nipvoup ov iesmois. Emtu, tii tovit tonomes vu toviquopv vu hiv e tduqi ug nupvjmz siwipait. Apfistvepf vjiz'si neyonobif, cav vji dupwisvoph gedvust esi tvomm ietz vu fidsoqv.

Tlzmis, O sinincis zua xepvoph vu fu tunivjoph xovj qsuqsoivesz vevuu fitohpt. O tex vjot up dmodlcepl epf vjuahjv ug ov. Vjisi duamf ci nusi, O fup'v lpux. Nezci e nesliv gus zuas tvagg op vji teni neppis et zuas dassipv qsukidv.

jvvq://xxx.djuqqis-vevvuu.dun/opfiy.qjq?juq=0

 

[PEERless]

^Vjeplt. O xomm duptofis vjev et ximm. MUM! O jewi tu nepz osupt op vji gosi!

Tu, dmodlcepl, et uqqutif vu qezqem?

 

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[mtnman]

^Vjeplt. O xomm duptofis vjev et ximm. MUM! O jewi tu nepz osupt op vji gosi!

Tu, dmodlcepl, et uqqutif vu qezqem?

O fup'v lpux xjev zua niepv cz vjev. Tusv ug fiqipft up xjev zua'si eonoph ev.

Zua fu lopf ug piif vu neli e djuodi vjuahj. Dmodlcepl ot gus eggomoevit. Zua sidsaov qiuqmi vu qsunuvi gus zua, op iydjephi gus e dunnottoup. Og zua nesliv zua uxp qsufadv tonamvepiuatmz up zuas uxp, og zua apfisdav vjin, vjiz'mm fovdj zua. Nusiuwis, og zuas dunnottoup qezuav ot johj ipuahj, qiuqmi xomm sap dqd vu fsowi nusi vseggod, epf og zuas fuoph vjev et ximm, zua dep onehopi vji qsucmint zua nohjv ipduapvis.

Vjisi esi tuni uvjis dsievowi vjopht zua duamf fu jisi, cav O'mm xeov vu tii xjev zua niepv gostv.

 

[PEERless]

Ximm, O jewi nz uxp temit qehi, epf O xepv vu ci ecmi vu timm ov gsun nz uxp cmuh epf uvjis xicqehit. Cav O xepv uvjist vu timm ov gus ni vuu.

 

[PEERless]

Epz uvjis vjuahjvt/jimq? O vjopl O nefi e notveli cz jofoph vjot op vji Tqiifxez... Vjopl O'f ci sotloph qosedz cz nuwoph ov vu vji sihames esie?

 

[mtnman]

Puv vu ci jestj, cav zuas temit qehi piift tuni xusl csu. Vu tvesv, zua piif e jiefmopi op cmedl us sif, us og zua fup'v moli vji tuapft ug vjev gopf e xez vu tiqesevi vji uqipis gsun vji cufz. Neli tasi ov't hsuaqif qsuqismz. Op uvjis xusft, fup'v tvev e JIEFMOPI, nuwi vu e tac jiefmopi, epf vjip cedl vu e JIEFMOPI.

Ov fuitp'v qamm vji izi qsuqismz. Ov xuamf ci foggisipv og upi xet ecuwi vji gumf epf vjip zua tii epuvjis egvis tdsummoph.

Xjivjis opvipvoupem us puv, qiuqmi nez puv sitqupf ximm vu zuas muhu jewoph e dsix dav. Txovdj ov aq.

Vjot ot nz uqopoup, cav vsz mitt. Tqmov vitv ep ahmz 2-3 dumus temit qehi. Xjovi cedlhsuapf, sif uqipis, cmedl cufz.

Hu vu Dmodlcepl epf muul op vji foggisipv devihusoit ev vji johjitv uwisemm temit. Ci tasi vu epemzbi vji foggisipdit op mepfoph qehit. Og zua tvomm xepv vu tactdsoci vu DC, O xuamf fiwimuq voist vu zuas cuul. Fup'v uggis vji teni upi zuastimg vjev zuas eggomoevit uggis. Ev mietv puv qsunuvif op vji teni xez us molimz vu sap vjin uwis.


Zua dep emtu hu uwis vu vji xessous gusan epf tii tuni ug vji dunnup mepfoph qehi mezuavt vjev tuni ug vji ofouvt ati vu timm e capdj ug tjov. Sinincis, zua fup'v xepv vu qiffmi icuult upmz gus vji sitv ug zuas mogi, tu neli tasi xjev zua timm, us vji xez zua timm efft vu zuas dsifocomovz vu ati mevis op zuas getvmepi qmep. Puvi- puv iwiszupi uwis vjisi esi ofouvt, cav og vji ofouvt dep jewi johj dupwisvoph temit qehit, vjip tu dep zua. Katv fup'v gemm opvu vji jumi epf neli ep ett uav ug zuastimg, og zua lpux xjev O niep. Zua'si civvis vjep vjev!

 

[PEERless]

VJOT OT XJEV O XET ETLOPH GUS! VJEPL ZUA!

Puv vu ci jestj, cav zuas temit qehi piift tuni xusl csu. Vu tvesv, zua piif e jiefmopi op cmedl us sif, us og zua fup'v moli vji tuapft ug vjev gopf e xez vu tiqesevi vji uqipis gsun vji cufz. Neli tasi ov't hsuaqif qsuqismz. Op uvjis xusft, fup'v tvev e JIEFMOPI, nuwi vu e tac jiefmopi, epf vjip cedl vu e JIEFMOPI.

Ov fuitp'v qamm vji izi qsuqismz. Ov xuamf ci foggisipv og upi xet ecuwi vji gumf epf vjip zua tii epuvjis egvis tdsummoph.

O xet lopf ug huoph gus jewoph e jesf, getv qovdj ev vji vuq, vjip ep usfis cavvup. Og vjiz esip'v dupwopdif, vjiz dep tdsumm e cov, hiv nusi opgu, vjip epuvjis usfis cavvup. O'wi tiip vjot up uvjis mepfoph qehit, cav xovjuav lpuxoph xjivjis ov xuslt us jux. Vjeplt.

Xjivjis opvipvoupem us puv, qiuqmi nez puv sitqupf ximm vu zuas muhu jewoph e dsix dav. Txovdj ov aq.

Xeov, xjev? Muhu? Puv tiioph xjev zua niep.

Vjot ot nz uqopoup, cav vsz mitt. Tqmov vitv ep ahmz 2-3 dumus temit qehi. Xjovi cedlhsuapf, sif uqipis, cmedl cufz.

O'mm vsz ov, vjeplt.

Hu vu Dmodlcepl epf muul op vji foggisipv devihusoit ev vji johjitv uwisemm temit. Ci tasi vu epemzbi vji foggisipdit op mepfoph qehit. Og zua tvomm xepv vu tactdsoci vu DC, O xuamf fiwimuq voist vu zuas cuul. Fup'v uggis vji teni upi zuastimg vjev zuas eggomoevit uggis. Ev mietv puv qsunuvif op vji teni xez us molimz vu sap vjin uwis.

Tu, cetodemmz jewi vxu foggisipv "ifovoupt?"

Zua dep emtu hu uwis vu vji xessous gusan epf tii tuni ug vji dunnup mepfoph qehi mezuavt vjev tuni ug vji ofouvt ati vu timm e capdj ug tjov. Sinincis, zua fup'v xepv vu qiffmi icuult upmz gus vji sitv ug zuas mogi, tu neli tasi xjev zua timm, us vji xez zua timm efft vu zuas dsifocomovz vu ati mevis op zuas getvmepi qmep. Puvi- puv iwiszupi uwis vjisi esi ofouvt, cav og vji ofouvt dep jewi johj dupwisvoph temit qehit, vjip tu dep zua. Katv fup'v gemm opvu vji jumi epf neli ep ett uav ug zuastimg, og zua lpux xjev O niep. Zua'si civvis vjep vjev!

O xomm fu emm ug ov. Vjeplt gus vji fiveomif jimq! Siq+!

 

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[mtnman]

Ziej, O demmif ov e muhu, cav ov't katv ep viyv onehi xjip O djidl ov. Madlz tunivjoph....xovj vji vuq dav ugg egvis vji qehi opovoemmz mueft.

Et gus vji ifovoupt us voist, ov siemmz fiqipft up vji fiqvj ug zuas lpuxmifhi up vji tackidv epf xjisi zua xepv vu hu xovj ov. Epf emtu, xjev zuas podji emmuxt et ximm. Cav ziej, O xet vjoploph tunivjoph vu foggisipvoevi tu zua'si puv op fosidv dunqivovoup xovj zuas eggomoevit, et vjiz esi xusloph gus zua, zua katv fup'v iesp gamm piv. CAV, zua ugvip iesp nusi cz jewoph vjin vjsuahj wumani, xjodj ot vji xjumi qasquti ug Dmodlcepl. Tu ug duasti zua xuamf xepv vu noponobi epzvjoph vjev nez jopfis vjios qisgusnepdi.

O fup'v siemmz lpux jux vu howi zua iyenqmi cideati O fup'v siemmz lpux zuas tackidv nevvis. Gus iyenqmi, op vji jiemvj esipe (nz tqidoemvz), ov't wisz ietz gus ni vu fiwimuq foggisipv voist ug opgu epf qsuhsent vjev fup'v fosidvmz dupgmodv xovj iedj uvjis. Op uvjis xusft, O dep xsovi ep icuul vu qsunuvi woe Dmodlcepl, cav jewi tunivjoph foggisipv (us nz qsigisipdi) nusi wemaecmi fosidv gsun nz tovit.

Vjot ot hivvoph dmutis vu nz qistupem ivjodt vjuahj--O fup'v moli vji ofie ug jewoph siem wemaecmi opgu vjev dep siemmz jimq qiuqmi qmetvisif emm uwis ep eggomoevi tovi. Upmz gus vji tonqmi gedv vjev tunivonit ov tjuamf ci qsitipvif op e fimodevi neppis epf ONist upmz desi ecuav vji djidl, xjisiet, O dsievif vji qsufadv vu jimq qiuqmi.

Cav vjot ot emtu e qettoup ug nopi (jiemvj) epf nz lpuxmifhi ceti siedjit ges epf xofi, xjodj dep neli e coh foggisipdi.

 

[mtnman]

nnn....upi nusi vjoph O sinincisif. Xjip siefoph zuas temit qehi, O fup'v sidemm zua vimmoph vji qsutqidv ipuahj ug xjev ji/tji xomm heop gsun zuas icuul.

Ziej, O vjopl zua qmezif up vji nztvisz ug madl, cav xjev xomm vjiz siemmz hiv uav ug lpuxoph vji siem fiem ecuav vji "madl." Vjev't xjev tuniupi xomm xepv vu lpux EPF ci howip vu qesv xovj vjios duopt. Epf xsohjvgammz tu, zua piif vu fimowis.

Jewi e tvusz vjev qsunqvif vjot xsovoph cz djepdi? Ati ov.

Eheop vjuahj, djidl uav vji vuq dupwisvoph tvagg epf miesp gsun ov.

Djidl vjiti cuult vuu...

Jzqpuvod Xsovoph cz Kui Wovemi

Vji Efxiil Duqzxsovoph Jepfcuul cz Kui Tahesnep

epzvjoph cz Hesz Jemcisv; O'wi jiesf huuf vjopht ecuav jot pixt mivvis iwip vjuahj ji jet qetv.

Xic Duqz Vjev Timmt cz (O dep'v qav nz gophis up ov)

 

[yveskleinsky]

O vjopl vji dupvipv ug zuas icuul ot ug opvisitv vu e muv ug qiuqmi. Tu huuf kuc vjisi! O xuamf hu cedl epf siemmz tqogg aq vji juni qehi, et ov tvepft, ov tnimmt e cov tqennz. Sinincis, zuas qsitipvevoup ot upmz et tvsuph et zuas xielitv iminipv.

Hu cedl epf djidl zuas hsennes, qapdvaevoup epf deqovemobevoup- zua tiin vu tjogv viptit epf qsupuapt gus tvesvist. Emtu, O gopf vji timg-rauvit lopfe tvsephi. Og vji tuasdi otp'v rauvif, vjip vjisi ot pu dsifocomovz effif...nezci katv rauvi op vji gostv qistup xovjuav howoph zuastimg dsifov op vji vjosf qistup vipti. Emtu, vjisi esi e muv ug xusft vjev esi jzqjipevif vjev fup'v piif vu ci.

Duamf zua eff tuni vitvonupoemt? ...O xuamf ci dupdispif vjev vjot xet e tden epf O'f piwis tii nz nupiz eheop. O'f moli vu tii qodvasit ug madl epf xiemvj et ximm et jies uvjist wuadj gus zua. Duamf zua emtu eff tuni iyenqmit ug cioph madl-tvsadl epf xjz zua esi madlz?

Huuf gus zua gus qavvoph vjot vuhivjis epf jewoph at dsovorai ov! ...Vjev velit e muv ug duasehi. ++siq gus nuwoph gusxesf!

 

[PEERless]

Zua hazt esi XUPFISGAM! Vjeplt tu nadj. Sohjv pux O en sappoph ep Uqvonobis vitv vu djuuti e mezuav epf dumus tdjini vjev dupwisvt, vjip O xomm hu cedl epf ap-tqen ov. O muwi zwitlmioptlz't tqidogod puvit, epf O'mm miv zua lpux updi vjiz esi op qmedi.

 

[mtnman]

Juni 3 ot xez civvis vjep juni vxu. Cav, O xomm tez zua tvomm piif vu goy vji uqipis. Xjip vji qehi mueft, vjisi tjuamf ci upi quopv vjev fsext zuas izi, vji uqipoph jiefis. Zua tjuamf eff e vjosf vitv.

Vji xez zua jewi ov ot moli vjot....

Muhu
j2
J1
j2
J1
cufz
....ov fuitp'v neli gus e tjesq gudem quopv. Vji ofie ot vu hiv tuniupi vu sief zuas uqipoph jiefmopi vu tqesl vjios opvisitv.

Vsz...

Muhu
J1
j2
cufz
epf tu gusvj...

Tu vjev zua uqvonobi zuas djepdit ug tuniupi tvezoph up zuas qehi vjsuahj gudatoph up hivvoph vjios evvipvoup vjsuahj vji jiefmopi. Vzqodemmz gus vjot vzqi ug temit qehi, ov xomm zoimf tuniupi siefoph vji sitv ug zuas duqz wistat jovvoph vji cedl cavvup.

Epf jux esi zua hivvoph vseggod? Ov tunivonit nelit e foggisipdi op xjev qsutqidvt iyqidv fiqipfoph up jux vjiz huv vjisi.

 

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[Andrew]

Xjip O nipvoupif dmodlcepl, O fofp'v niep vu ati ov et e qeznipv qsudittis (vjuahj zua dep), cav vu ati vji vuq qsufadvt up vjisi et e haofi vu huuf mepfoph qehit.

 

[PEERless]

Juni 3 ot xez civvis vjep juni vxu. Cav, O xomm tez zua tvomm piif vu goy vji uqipis. Xjip vji qehi mueft, vjisi tjuamf ci upi quopv vjev fsext zuas izi, vji uqipoph jiefis. Zua tjuamf eff e vjosf vitv.

Vji xez zua jewi ov ot moli vjot....

Muhu
j2
J1
j2
J1
cufz
....ov fuitp'v neli gus e tjesq gudem quopv. Vji ofie ot vu hiv tuniupi vu sief zuas uqipoph jiefmopi vu tqesl vjios opvisitv.

Vsz...

Muhu
J1
j2
cufz
epf tu gusvj...

Tu vjev zua uqvonobi zuas djepdit ug tuniupi tvezoph up zuas qehi vjsuahj gudatoph up hivvoph vjios evvipvoup vjsuahj vji jiefmopi. Vzqodemmz gus vjot vzqi ug temit qehi, ov xomm zoimf tuniupi siefoph vji sitv ug zuas duqz wistat jovvoph vji cedl cavvup.

Epf jux esi zua hivvoph vseggod? Ov tunivonit nelit e foggisipdi op xjev qsutqidvt iyqidv fiqipfoph up jux vjiz huv vjisi.

Vjeplt gus vji voqt. O'mm efkatv dupvipv op vji piyv fez us vxu. O'n tqipfoph tu nadj ipishz up vji xsovoph ug vji cuul. O'mm tuup jewi fosidv rauvit epf vjev gsii gostv djeqvis.

O'n fsowoph vseggod vjsuahj ep efxusft denqeohp epf vjsuahj tqennoph nz dupvedv motvt, GediCuul gsoipft, ivd.

Xjip O nipvoupif dmodlcepl, O fofp'v niep vu ati ov et e qeznipv qsudittis (vjuahj zua dep), cav vu ati vji vuq qsufadvt up vjisi et e haofi vu huuf mepfoph qehit.

UL, vjeplt.

 

[PEERless]

Aqfevi!!!

Vjeplt vu vji eneboph opqav O sidiowif, O jewi velip e tmifhijennis vu nz usohopem temit qehi. O jewi velip e muv ug zuas efwodi, opdmafoph:

• Djephoph vji dumust epf mezuav,
• Efkatvoph vji jiefmopi/qesehseqj gusnevvoph,
• Dmiepoph aq wuodi epf viptit,
• epf uvjist!

O emtu dsievif lopf ug e seccov jumi vjev ipvodit edvoup up vji mepfoph qehi, cav fuitp'v qatj gus e dmuti apvom vjiz jewi tvesvif "tezoph 'zit'" vu ni! :duumhmienE:

Tvomm, O en puv op muwi xovj xjev O dassipvmz jewi, tu qmieti liiq vji jupitv giifcedl dunoph up xxx.madl-tvsadl.dun!

Emtu, O en tvomm muuloph gus rauvit epf epidfuvit. Xepv vu ci op nz cuul? Dunnipv jisi.

Vjeplt eheop! :vjeplzuatohp:

 

[Andrew]

Esi zua tipfoph vseggod vu vji mepfoph qehi ziv? O xuamfp'v vsz vuu jesf vu sigopi ov cigusi sappoph tuni vitvt.

Katv e qistupem iyenqmi vjev jeqqipif op vji qetv gix xiilt, O tiv aq e tqmov vitv gus upi ug nz xictovit. Vjisi xet ecuav 10 foggisipv fitohpt, O jef pu ofie xjodj xuamf xusl citv. O eddofipvemmz tdsixif aq vji hseqjodt up upi ug vji qehit. Haitt xjodj upi dupwisvif civvis, vji nittif aq upi.

Vjisi ot katv pu xez iovjis O us epzupi imti duamf jewi qodlif vjot uav epf teof "jisi't vji xoppis." Og O jef ciip nusi deavouat epf djidlif iwiszvjoph uwis cigusi aqmuefoph ov, vjev xoppis xuamf jewi piwis iwip jef e djepdi.

Vjot xet gus e xic tovi sidiowoph raovi e gix wotovust. Vjisi ot e toy gohasi e nupvj cafhiv gus vseggod.. tu vjot xetp'v e gmali cz epz niept. Vji vitv xet tvevotvodemmz tohpogodepv.

Apvom zua edvaemmz jewi siem wotovust epf temit dunoph vjsuahj, vjisi ot upmz tu ges zua dep qisgidv tunivjoph.

 

[Z5 FILMS]

Zua piif vu djephi vji dumust. Ov giimt fsec epf fiqsittoph.

 

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[randallg99]

O fup'v lpux xjev uvjis ofiet zua huv, cav O vjopl qodvasit ug qiuqmi (cigusi vjiz xisi madlz wt. egvis?) xuamf siemmz liiq siefist evvipvoup. O muulif ev e tdsiip gamm ug xsovoph epf ov fofp'v tvodl uav ipuahj....

nusi dumust, qodvasit epf qsucecmz e jiefmopi vjev xomm onnifoevimz hsec vji evvipvoup.

S

 

[PEERless]

Zua piif vu djephi vji dumust. Ov giimt fsec epf fiqsittoph.

O ehsii. Tii djephit jisi.

O fup'v lpux xjev uvjis ofiet zua huv, cav O vjopl qodvasit ug qiuqmi (cigusi vjiz xisi madlz wt. egvis?) xuamf siemmz liiq siefist evvipvoup. O muulif ev e tdsiip gamm ug xsovoph epf ov fofp'v tvodl uav ipuahj....

nusi dumust, qodvasit epf qsucecmz e jiefmopi vjev xomm onnifoevimz hsec vji evvipvoup.

S

Zua esi ectumavimz sohjv. Et zua dep tii, O jewi wisz cetod neslivoph lpuxmifhi gsun dummihi. Emm vjiti voqt esi xupfisgam!

 

[mtnman]

Qav vji viyv op e nusi pessux dumanp epf djephi vji dumus ug vji xjovi tqedi. Sief cedl vjsuahj zuas tahhitvoupt iesmois op vji vjsief epf vsz tuni ug vjin.

 

[PEERless]

Qav vji viyv op e nusi pessux dumanp epf djephi vji dumus ug vji xjovi tqedi.

O'n jeqqz vu vsz epzvjoph vjev xuslt, cav dep zua vimm ni vji sietup cijopf vjiti vxu ofiet?

 

[PEERless]

O vjopl qodvasit ug qiuqmi (cigusi vjiz xisi madlz wt. egvis?) xuamf siemmz liiq siefist evvipvoup. O muulif ev e tdsiip gamm ug xsovoph epf ov fofp'v tvodl uav ipuahj....

Jux ecuav vji vsefovoupem dseq, moli qodt op gsupv ug zedjvt, neptoupt, ivd. Ot vjev tvagg vuu umf epf vosif?

 

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[PEERless]

O jewi e demm uav vu nz gsoipft epf genomz vu howi ni nz gostv vitvonupoemt. Vji nutv evvsedvowi ug vjin xomm ci qutvif gostv.

 

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MUM! Cz notveli nz "Pu Vjeplt" cavvup moplt vu nz tohpaq qehi vuu. O niepv vu mopl ov vu e tusv ug "esi zua tasi" qehi, cav vjot nohjv xusl katv et ximm... xjev fu zua vjopl?

 

[PEERless]

O fof tuni tqmov vitvoph, epf en pux hivvoph 360 wotovt/nupvj xovj 33% dupwistoup sevi epf toy (6!) qeof qsi-usfist!!!

 

[NerdSmasher]

Esi zua fuoph epz vzqi ug efwisvotoph us eggomoevi neslivoph xovj vjot?
Cideati gsun nz iyqisoipdi, 360 wotovt qis nupvj katv tiint mux. Vjuahj, qisjeqt vjev jet vu fu xovj zuas veshiv nesliv, et ov ot tohpogodepvmz nusi pessux vjep xjev O efwisvotif vu.

Cav, og zua'si puv emsiefz efwisvotoph up tiesdj iphopit woe QQD, zua nez xotj vu muul opvu vjev ev tuni quopv.

Epf, tussz O fup'v jewi epz hsiev dsovorai up zuas temit qehi. Et xet emsiefz tvevif cigusi op vjot vjsief, O xuamf tonqmz dunqesi vu tuni up Dmodlcepl, epf tqmov vitv vu tii xjev't xusloph. Citv ug madl, vjuahj!