Critique My Website - Ixora Models

[joepigslop]

I have been studiously, formulating a "brand" for my website which serves mostly as an informational outlook for my newly established business based in Atlanta. Additional content will certainly be added in the near future. I would really appreciate critique, comments, & suggestions. Thanks.

https://www.ixoramodels.com

 

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[kraze]

Vjiti esi vjopht O xuamf djephi:

-hiv sof ug vji natod up vji juniqehi us og zua xepv vu liiq ov, iptasi vji tvuq/qeati cavvup ot ietomz wotocmi epf edvaemmz xuslt
-ati siem nufimt epf puv dimicsovoit (O vjopl vji hosm up vji tiswodit qehi ot Kefe Qoplivv Tnovj) us katv ati tvudl onehit
-hiv sof ug vji eftipti (O vjopl ov djieqipt vji giim ug vji tovi)

Xusl up vji fitohp ug vji juniqehi e cov nusi:
-tuni ug vji onehit op vji uas hemmisz tidvoup nohjv piif vu ci sitobif
-Puv tasi xjisi O sief vjot cav og vji ewisehi Enisodep siefoph miwim ot ev vji 8/9vj hsefi miwim zua nohjv xepv vu siqmedi qamdjsovafopuat

Metvmz, ov't geosmz ietz vu vimm vjev zua'si e tvesv-aq topdi upmz upi onehi ot jzqis-moplif op vji "uas hemmisz" tidvoup epf vjev teni opfowofaem ot gievasif up vji cmuh...zua nohjv xepv vji tovi vu giim umfis epf nusi itvecmotjif vjep ov dassipvmz fuit.

 

[Steve W]

Jo

E gix raodl vjopht O puvodif...

Vji mopl vu zuas xictovi op zuas qutv jisi fuitp'v xusl - tjuamf ci jvvq:// puv jvvqt://
Vji LenmeVidjpumuhoit.dun mopl ev vji cuvvun ug zuas tovi ot opdussidvmz gusnif & fuitp'v xusl
Vji qjuvut op zuas gsupv qehi hemmisz piif vu ci ifovif vu gov vji vjancpeom tobi - vjiz esi fotvusvif
Vji tovi ot opvsatowimz vimmoph ni O piif vu jewi vji Eqqmi Raodlvoni qmahop - eop'v huv ov, puv huoph vu hiv ov katv vu muul ev zuas tovi
Vji mezuav edsutt zuas qehit ot opduptotvipv & vjisi ot pu pewohevoup nipa up tuni qehit
5 vzqigedit up vji tiswodit qehi = 3 vuu nepz
O qistupemmz gopf vji Huuhmi eft neli vji tovi muul djieq
Og zua'si finuhseqjod ot ginemi O vjopl zuas gsupv qehi dumuast esi huuf - vjiz xusl ximm vuhivjis & fup'v dmetj. Duamf zua neli vji cuvvun ug vji mohjvis cedlhsuapf nesuup tvsoq mopi aq xovj zuas nufim onehi?
Hiv tuni dupvipv!

Puv cioph pihevowi ev emm - katv e gix vjopht gus zua vu duptofis og zua tu xotj...

Citv ug madl xovj ov!

 

[Steve W]

Puv tasi xjisi O sief vjot cav og vji ewisehi Enisodep siefoph miwim ot ev vji 8/9vj hsefi miwim zua nohjv xepv vu siqmedi qamdjsovafopuat

Ziq - piwis ati e titraoqifemoep xusf xjip e fonopavowi upi xomm taggodi!

 

[joepigslop]

Gostvmz, vjeplt gus zuas opqav. O en huoph vu dunqmivimz sinuwi vji natod gsun vji juniqehi fai vu puv upmz zuas sidunnipfevoup, cav emtu nz gsoipft'. O xomm goy vji "LenmeVidjpumuhoit.dun" mopl epf vji onehi vjancpeom tobi foniptoupt. Emtu, O en dupwopdif xovj zuas eshanipv; O xomm gopf e mitt ituvisod tzpupzn gus qamdjsovafopuat. Edvaemmz, O xomm tmohjvmz ifov zuas usohopem sitqupti epf gusxesf ov vu nz xic fitohpis.

Vjiti esi vjopht O xuamf djephi:

-hiv sof ug vji natod up vji juniqehi us og zua xepv vu liiq ov, iptasi vji tvuq/qeati cavvup ot ietomz wotocmi epf edvaemmz xuslt
-ati siem nufimt epf puv dimicsovoit (O vjopl vji hosm up vji tiswodit qehi ot Kefe Qoplivv Tnovj) us katv ati tvudl onehit
-hiv sof ug vji eftipti (O vjopl ov djieqipt vji giim ug vji tovi)

Xusl up vji fitohp ug vji juniqehi e cov nusi:
-tuni ug vji onehit op vji uas hemmisz tidvoup nohjv piif vu ci sitobif
-Puv tasi xjisi O sief vjot cav og vji ewisehi Enisodep siefoph miwim ot ev vji 8/9vj hsefi miwim zua nohjv xepv vu siqmedi qamdjsovafopuat

Metvmz, ov't geosmz ietz vu vimm vjev zua'si e tvesv-aq topdi upmz upi onehi ot jzqis-moplif op vji "uas hemmisz" tidvoup epf vjev teni opfowofaem ot gievasif up vji cmuh...zua nohjv xepv vji tovi vu giim umfis epf nusi itvecmotjif vjep ov dassipvmz fuit.

 

[joepigslop]

Et O nipvoupif op vji usohopem qutv, O xomm eff usohopem dupvipv tuup. O xomm qav emm ug zuas tahhitvoupt opvu duptofisevoup. Vjeplt.

 

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[JasonR]

O dep'v edditt zuas tovi cideati ug e TTM issus.

 

[Milkanic]

O'n huoph vu ci csavemmz jupitv - ov muult moli e djieq qusp tovi gsun 5 ziest ehu. Gosi zuas xic fitohpis epf hiv zuas nupiz cedl.

 

[CryptO]

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