fastlaners into retail, critique this free help piece to death.

[AllenCrawley]

Honestly, at this point I feel like I would get a higher quality of feedback else where, so I'm probably not going to remain active on here..
I'm just trying my best & this site seems to have a weird eagerness to prove how right they are rather than trying to be more effective. I was 100% cool & now the fastlaneforum wolves have come out, I'm focused on improving my work, this is a distraction and a waste of my own time.

You received great feedback but was quick to dismiss it and got offended. It was your response to the honest feedback that raised the red flag that you may be the same person as therebel. Don't put this on us. You have to ask yourself if the members of this forum are really out to get you or if maybe you have some more growing up to do.

 

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[OneFiveOne]

Zua sidiowif hsiev giifcedl cav xet raodl vu fotnott ov epf huv uggipfif. Ov xet zuas sitqupti vu vji jupitv giifcedl vjev seotif vji sif gmeh vjev zua nez ci vji teni qistup et vjisicim. Fup'v qav vjot up at. Zua jewi vu etl zuastimg og vji nincist ug vjot gusan esi siemmz uav vu hiv zua us og nezci zua jewi tuni nusi hsuxoph aq vu fu.

Qiuqmi xisi safi vu ni op vji wisz cihoppoph cigusi O iwip sitqupfif xovj epz inuvoup ev emm, O xet fimocisevimz cioph sucuvod vu ewuof viptoup op juqit tuniupi xuamf jewi tunivjoph vu tez vjev edvaemmz onqedvif nz sitamvt.

Zua hazt jewi huvvip nusi safi epf puvjoph coh jet siemmz ciip qav up vji vecmi, xjodj cetodemmz niept ov xet e xetvi ug voni.

Cav og epzvjoph O giim moli vjot qsuwit xjz zua *tjuamf* qez vu miesp tvagg moli duqz us temit cideati vjot ot xjev gsii hivt zua.

 

[MJ DeMarco]

Zua hazt jewi huvvip nusi safi epf puvjoph coh jet siemmz ciip qav up vji vecmi

Hiv mutv gadl-tvodl. Xepv civvis raemovz giifcedl? Hu fsan aq zuas natod caffoit xju xomm qev zua up vji cedl epf xjotqis muwi jznpt op zuas iest. Zua xisi ceppif nupvjt ehu gus cioph ep uctvopevi, timg-onqusvepv fuadji epf ucwouatmz, puvjoph jet djephif. Zua'si tu tnesv, gohasi ov uav zuastimg.

Uj epf "dsovorai vjot vu fievj" epf vji nunipv dsovorai dunit, zua tvesv xjopoph epf xatttoph moli e cecz. Jomesouat.

Jupitvmz, ev vjot quopv O giim moli O xuamf hiv e johjis raemovz ug giifcedl imti xjisi, tu O'n qsucecmz puv huoph vu sineop edvowi up jisi..

Tussz, cav zua xup'v jewi e djuodi.

O'n tasi nunnz hewi zua tidupf epf vjosf djepdit, cav zua fup'v hiv vjin jisi.

Vji csofhi ot tvomm caspv epf O fup'v tii zuas ett xovj e jennis epf duwisemmt vszoph vu sicaomf ov.

Efout.

 

[DaRK9]

O huv qettif ov gopi xovj e gix uvjis qiuqmi, nezci zuas katv tqidoem?

Og zua dep'v iwip timm zuas esvodmi, jux fu zua iyqidv vu timm vji iCuul?

Xjev 5vj hsefis fof zua jewi qsuugsief vjot voni?

 

[MJ DeMarco]