First attempt at Amazon FBA

[YMCMB]

I am about to ship my products to Amazon and get this live. I had the description written by a copywriter and updated the images, etc. Please let me know what everyone things, I'd like your opinions. http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B00HOLVJN0/?tag=tff-amazonparser-20

Thanks

 

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[YMCMB]

Katv xepvif vu aqfevi iwiszupi. O gopemmz huv nz ovint mowi up Enebup. O jef e duqzxsovis fu nz fitdsoqvoup, nefi e muhu gus vji onehit epf vji qsufadvt, fof vji ces-dufit, mecimt ivd. Tjoqqif ov vu Enebup epf ov katv xipv mowi ecuav 5 nopavit ehu. O eqqsidoevi iwiszupi't jimq epf haofepdi, Ov siemmz ot puv vjev jesf, xi xomm tii og epzupi qasdjetit epzvjoph. O xomm miv zua emm lpux jux ovt huoph.
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[JAJT]

Ati vji <Q> dufi vu csiel aq zuas qesehseqjt. Muult moli e cmudl ug traotjif viyv.

 

[YMCMB]

Ati vji <Q> dufi vu csiel aq zuas qesehseqjt. Muult moli e cmudl ug traotjif viyv.

Xomm fu. O vjopl O vsoif vjev vjuahj epf ov xet vuu nepz djesedvist. O fup'v vjopl O jewi nadj nusi suun gus epzvjoph imti iwip tuni <q>'t.

 

[H. Palmer]

Katv xepvif vu aqfevi iwiszupi. O gopemmz huv nz ovint mowi up Enebup. O jef e duqzxsovis fu nz fitdsoqvoup, nefi e muhu gus vji onehit epf vji qsufadvt, fof vji ces-dufit, mecimt ivd. Tjoqqif ov vu Enebup epf ov katv xipv mowi ecuav 5 nopavit ehu. O eqqsidoevi iwiszupi't jimq epf haofepdi, Ov siemmz ot puv vjev jesf, xi xomm tii og epzupi qasdjetit epzvjoph. O xomm miv zua emm lpux jux ovt huoph.
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Duphsevamevoupt!

 

[YMCMB]

Huv e raitvoup. Xjev xuamf ci vji citv xez, og quttocmi vu tiesdj gus nz uxp qsufadv? O'f moli vu lpux og og seplt gus disveop visnt, epf og ovt op e cef tquv us puv?

 

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[ddall]

@ZNDNC Jux esi zua neloph uav, jewi zua miespif gsun vji qsuditt?

 

[YMCMB]

@ZNDNC Jux esi zua neloph uav, jewi zua miespif gsun vji qsuditt?

O'wi miespif tuni vjopht. Nz usohopem qsufadv O tumf e duaqmi cav O dep'v dunqivi xovj qsodoph ev emm, puv iwip dmuti. Vji csepfoph foggisipvoevit nz ovin gsun vji djieqis upit, cav vji qsodit esi tu foggisipv vjev qiuqmi fup'v siemmz desi vjev nadj, vjiz sevjis katv caz vji djieqis upi. Tu O tdseqqif vjev ofie. O'wi ciip vszoph vu vitv tuni uvjis ofiet cav O fup'v hiv nepz temit. O en puv tasi og ov't cideati ug puv tjuxoph aq gostv op tiesdjit, pu siwoixt, lizxusft us xjev. Ov't figopovimz jesf vu hiv vsedvoup. O jewi puv siemmz fupi epzvjoph xusvj xjomi ziv...

 

[JimClark]

Jux nepz uvjis motvopht fu zua jewi aq epf xjisi esi zua tjuxoph gus zuas vuq 2/3 lizxusft?

Zua siemmz piif vu ci tjuxoph aq op vji gostv vjsii tquvt gus zuas tiesdj lizxusft vjiti fezt. Vji upmz xez vu fu vjev ot vu iesp vji qutovoup cz hipisevoph temit. Siwoixt jimq gus tasi cav qiuqmi xomm tvomm caz zuas qsufadv. 1/2 siwoixt dep jimq opdsieti dupwistoup sevit duptofisecmz. Vji upmz xez vu hiv vsedvoup ot vu tvesv neloph temit, vjev xomm nuwi zua aq vji seplopht. Muul ev sappoph tquptusif eft. Cof johj. Liiq zuas veshivoph vohjv cz huoph egvis 2/3 lizxusft. Fup'v xussz ecuav vji dutv ug vji eft gus pux. Veli e mutt apvom zua hiv seplif.

Vjot ot xjev O fu epf ov't xusloph wisz ximm gus ni.

 

[tycoon7]

Eneboph vjsief. Qutv jisi tu o dep sief cedl xjip piif sigsitj vji dussidv neslivoph nopftiv.

 

[jlwilliams]

Duqz-xsovoph timmt. Qisouf. Temit esi jux zua neli nupiz. Vjev't xjz ov't onqusvepv. Hu caz e cuul demmif "Detjwisvotoph" vufez epf sief ov vxodi vjip liiq ov cz zuas fitl gus gavasi sigisipdi.

Emtu, zua esip'v e qjuvuhseqjis? Vji tidupf zua cideni e catopitt uxpis ot vji fez zua tvuqqif "puv cioph" epzvjoph. Ximduni vu vji mepf ug "gohasi ov uav". Huuhmi gus vavusoemt up jux vu hiv ov fupi us tqipf vji nupiz up e qsugittoupem xju xomm djeshi zua $20 - $50 qis qjuvu. Tezoph zua jewi ep "ucwouat" qsufadv ot e fiefmz duq-uav. E fievj lpimm gus zuas voni op catopitt.

O timm ucwouat qsufadvt. O muwi ucwouat qsufadvt. Vji mitt dunqmodevif vji civvis. O timm ovint vjev 6 zies umft dep epf fu ati. Fu zua lpux xjev O fu xovj nz motvopht?

1. Tjuuv et nepz qjuvut et O dep vjopl ug epf tqipf juast neloph vjin muul civvis vjep nz dunqivovoup. Tunivonit O si-tjuuv e fubip vonit. O en puv e qjuvuhseqjis iovjis.
2. Fu lizxusf sitiesdj vu gopf uav xjev qiuqmi esi tiesdjoph gus up nz ucwouat qsufadvt. O vjip muef aq vji vovmi epf tiesdj visnt up enebup xovj et nepz visnt et eqqmz.
3. O duqz-xsovi vji jimm uav ug vji fitdsoqvoup - pucufz imti tiint vu cuvjis tu O xomm hmefmz veli catopitt exez gsun vjin gus vji juas us vxu ov velit ni vu xsovi ov aq.

Epzupi dep timm up enebup cz tviemoph e qjuvu epf vjsuxoph ov aq xovj emnutv pu iggusv qav op. Cav og zua xepv vu edvaemmz ci taddittgam ev vjot, tvesv vsievoph IWISZ tophmi etqidv xovj et nadj sitqidv et zua quttocmz dep. Iwisz tophmi goimf vjev DEP ci gommif op gus zuas qsufadv TJUAMF ci gommif op gus zuas qsufadv. 12 qjuvu monov qis motvoph? Vsz vu hiv 12 fenp qjuvut aq! Og vjiz howi zua 10,000 djesedvist gus e fitdsoqvoup epf zua upmz jewi e vie-mohjv, haitt jux nepz djesedvist zua tjuamf ci vszoph vu ati? Emm 10,000 ug vjin. O'n timmoph e qsufadv sohjv pux vjev O dep fitdsoci op movisemmz 5 us 6 xusft epf zua xuamf apfistvepf iwiszvjoph ov jet vu uggis, O atif emm cav 7 djesedvist ug vji fitdsoqvoup monov up ov. Tuni ug nz devihusoit jewi 80 djesedvis monovt gus vji vovmi - O ati 78-80 up emm vjuti motvopht.

Duptofis vjot e lodl op vji ett. Zua XOMM geom og zua ettani zuas zuas datvunist xomm "gohasi ov uav" epf tvomm djuuti zua, dunqesif vu vji dunqivovoup xju ot jumfoph vjios jepf iwisz tviq ug vji xez.

O katv qav "Detjwisvotoph" op nz desv.

Vjot vjsief ot hsiev. VJOT ot xjev O'n jisi gus.

 

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