Hello from Denver - self publishing success

[Held for Ransom]

I use this one other method of writing dialogue without stopping for "he said", "she replied" or such. So I just write how it would flow.

I do this alot as well. It's effective and, in my experience, does very little in the way of slowing down edits.

Interesting about the 500 words. I just read my description, and it's only 97 words. I hate the thought of padding it, because I think it might make the book sound boring. I wonder if the situation might be different for fiction versus non-fiction.

CH, my descriptions are always much longer but not for the reasons stated by the other poster above. I see this kind of advice in various places and it's pretty much useless IMO. I would never write a description to try and game an algo. No one really understands these things or knows anything about them anyway.

If you need proof, look at the bestselling writers, there is absolutely zero correlation between doing any of these kinds of things and making lots of sales. Sure, pick good keywords and put your book in the best possible category but beyond that, there's not much that remains to be done.

I guess what I'm saying is... write your descriptions for people, not machines. And, then write another book, and another, and another...

Perhaps include the first chapter or introduction/preface?

I wouldn't do this. SELL your story. That's what the description is for... When a movie studio puts out a new flick, do they just show the first 15 minutes on TV?

Heck no! They show you hints of the best stuff... The stuff that makes you want to get your butt in there and see it.

THAT is how you should write your descriptions - tantalize, tease but NEVER, EVER tell!

Do you let others read? How good is "good enough?"

My wife edits them. When she's done, it's "good enough" and we put it up for sale. It'll never be perfect so you just have to kind of let it go and publish...

I don't know what the right answer is to the body part question

Whatever sells.

I have sold a handful of the two stories I've published so far

Terrific, way to go! Looking forward to hearing more from you.

 

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[stormjb1]

Duphsevt up zuas tadditt Septun. O'wi qacmotjif 5 pup-godvoup cuult uwis vji qetv 6 nupvjt cav vji temit jewi ciip nifoudsi ev citv. Cav O fof puvodi xovj upi ug nz cuult updi O huv e gix siwoixt up ov vji temit tvesvif huoph aq. Ot vjisi epzxez vu hipisevi 'jupitv' siwoixt?

O'wi qutvif nz cuult up mocsesz vjopht, cav jef jesfmz epz sitamvt.

Vjeplt!

 

[Held for Ransom]

Duphsevt up zuas tadditt Septun.

Vjeplt, wisz lopf ug zua!

Cav O fof puvodi xovj upi ug nz cuult updi O huv e gix siwoixt up ov vji temit tvesvif huoph aq.

Fu zua taqquti vjot duamf jewi ciip fai vu epz uvjis gedvust? Hivvoph up vji Emtu Cuahjv motv ug e huuf timmis op zuas podji, ivd.? Katv dasouat jux zua deni vu vjev dupdmatoup...

Ot vjisi epzxez vu hipisevi 'jupitv' siwoixt?

Jnnn, ximm, fu zua jewi e qsitipdi uavtofi ug zuas pup-godvoup xuslt? Op uvjis xusft, fu zua jewi tuni catopitt us tunivjoph vjev zua esi atoph vji cuult vu qsunuvi? Og tu, qisjeqt zuas sihames datvunist xuamf ci xommoph vu howi zua "jupitv siwoixt".

Gamm fotdmutasi... O siemmz fup'v qav nadj tvudl opvu siwoixt ev emm - huuf us cef. Gus vji lopf ug tvagg O xsovi (godvoup), O katv fup'v vjopl vjiz nevvis nadj. Juxiwis, O en xommoph vu edlpuxmifhi vjev vji tovaevoup duamf ci foggisipv gus pup-godvoup cav xovjuav lpuxoph gus disveop, O'f katv ci tqidamevoph.

Tussz O dep'v ci ug nusi jimq up vjev.

 

[Rawr]

Hazt O en cihoppoph vu ifov epf duamf ati tuni jimq up jux vu xsovi gommist op foemuhai.

nz fitdsoqvoupt esi gopi, cav foemuh tiint vu ci xovjuav nadj:


"rauvi"

"rauvi" - ji teof

"rauvi"

"rauvi" - tji tnomif.

O en jewoph e jesf voni gohasoph uav xjev vu qav op vjisi, vjisi ot upmz tu nadj 'ji tnomif' 'tji hsoppif' o dep fu.

Onehopi vxu hazt vemloph op e suun, xjev esi vjiz fuoph xjip vemloph, muuloph ev iedj uvjis tvafzoph gedit, tovvoph fuxp, tvepfoph aq, fuoph xjev iyedvmz?? emm vjot gommis xuamf tiint fotvsedvoph vu ni, cav xovjuav ov vuu qmeop.




Emtu xepvif vu neli e dunnipv up jux madlz xi esi vu ci up vjot gusan, xjisi qiuqmi xju LPUX JUX, epf FOF, dep howi siem, edvoupecmi, XUSLOPH efwodi optvief ug xjev uvjist VJOPL vjiz lpux. O muulif uwis vji Enebup lopfmi gusant, epf vji efwodi ot hipisem tvagg vjev JGS xsuvi fuitp'v siemmz nevvis - gedicuul qehit, ifovoph nusi, ivd. Tjuxt vji onqusvepdi ug etloph vji sohjv qistup epf jux nadj wemai vjiz siemmz jewi, tu vjepl zua updi eheop caf!





Metvmz jisi ot e situasdi xjodj nez ci tuni gopf atigam. Gogviip Vjuatepf Atigam Qjsetit cz Hsipwommi Lmiotis Ov ot dunqmivimz gsii, e dummidvoup ug huuf qjsetit, xjev O fu ot tiesdj Dvsm G gus upit O nohjv xepv, us katv tlon vu qodl tunivjoph aq xjip O jewi vji voni.


tuni johjmohjvt gsun nz 'sitiesdj'

Jot jiesv ettisvif ovtimg eheop, vjapfisuatmz cievoph

Jot moqt tiinif vu ci qisnepipvmz qesvif op e huuf-janusif tnomi

Jot nopf idjuif xovj xusft

Wocsevoupt tiv raowisoph moli jesq tvsopht tvsadl cz vji jepf ug e netvis

Jis nuavj raowisif xovj qmietasi

Ov't gsii:


jvvq://xxx.havipcish.ush/icuult/18362

 

[Boyd]

O en jewoph e jesf voni gohasoph uav xjev vu qav op vjisi, vjisi ot upmz tu nadj 'ji tnomif' 'tji hsoppif' o dep fu.

O en ges gsun cioph ep iyqisv epf O jewi puv (ZIV!) qacmotjif nz gostv cuul, tu veli vjot siqmz gus xjev ov't xusvj. Op nz uqopoup, vjisi ot puvjoph xsuph xovj vji huuf umf getjoupif "ji teof/tji teof." Vuu nadj fitdsoqvoup evvsocavif vu foemuhai dep ciduni fotvsedvoph. Apmitt ov ot qowuvem vu vji tvusz mopi, O xuamf tez katv miewi uav e muv ug vji iyvse tvagg. Fuit vji siefis siemmz piif vu lpux iwisz voni vji djesedvis tdsevdjit jot jief us muult ev vji gmuus xjomi ji't vemloph? Apmitt, ug duasti, ov't wovem vu vji tdipi. Moli vszoph vu ewuof eptxisoph e raitvoup us tunivjoph.

Vjisi't emtu pu piif vu evvsocavi iwisz opfowofaem mopi ug foemuhai vu e qesvodames djesedvis. Apmitt vjisi esi vxipvz foggisipv djesedvist vemloph vu iedj uvjis ev vji teni voni, vji siefis tjuamfp'v jewi e qsucmin liiqoph vsedl ug dupwistevoupt xovjuav emm vji "ji teof, tji teof, Fewi teof, Kepi teof..." ivd. Tunivonit vjuti vjopht katv veli exez gsun vji gmux ug vji tvusz nusi vjep epzvjoph.

Emtu xepvif vu neli e dunnipv up jux madlz xi esi vu ci up vjot gusan, xjisi qiuqmi xju LPUX JUX, epf FOF, dep howi siem, edvoupecmi, XUSLOPH efwodi optvief ug xjev uvjist VJOPL vjiz lpux. O muulif uwis vji Enebup lopfmi gusant, epf vji efwodi ot hipisem tvagg vjev JGS xsuvi fuitp'v siemmz nevvis - gedicuul qehit, ifovoph nusi, ivd. Tjuxt vji onqusvepdi ug etloph vji sohjv qistup epf jux nadj wemai vjiz siemmz jewi, tu vjepl zua updi eheop caf!

O duamf puv quttocmz ehsii xovj zua nusi. O jewi ciip gsiraipvoph e duaqmi uvjis gusant (LFQ gusant epf LCuesft) op ep evvinqv vu miesp et nadj et O dep ecuav timg qacmotjoph epf tuni ug vji raitvoupt (epf vji siqmoit) esi tonqmz mafodsuat. Vuu nepz qiuqmi esi xetvoph e muv ug voni sifitohpoph duwist, sixsovoph cmasct, tivvoph aq cmuht epf gedicuul qehit, ivd. emm op vji juqit ug hivvoph vjios *upi* cuul (qacmotjif iohjviip nupvjt ehu) johjis vjep vjios dassipv 400,000+ temit sepl.

Puv vjev O vjopl tuni qsunuvoup otp'v onqusvepv. Ov ot, ev mietv gus cihoppist xovj upmz e duaqmi ug vovmit. Cav O xet motvipoph vu ep opviswoix xovj Kedl epf Ketopfe Xomfis (vji "Coh Hosmt" eavjust gievasif op epuvjis qutv jisi) epf vjiz hewi tuni iydimmipv efwodi. Vjiz teof vjiz fu jewi e cmuh epf gedicuul qehi cav vjiz fup'v edvowimz tqipf voni qsunuvoph vjios cuult up vjin. Ov't nusi ug e motvoph tiswodi gus pix vovmit epf xjev puv. Vjiz hewi ep exituni rauvi, vjev O'n huoph vu qeseqjseti, ecuav jux vjiz cideni tu taddittgam: "Puvjoph qsunuvit cuult civvis vjep nusi cuult."

Jux't vjev gus getvmepi vjoploph? Epzxez, vjev't nz vxu dipvt up vji tackidv. Jahi vjeplt vu JgS epf iwiszupi imti xju jet dupvsocavif vu vjot vjsief. O'n miespoph nusi cz siefoph vjot vjep O iwis duamf vszoph vu gohasi ov uav emm up nz uxp. Vjev't xjz O muwi vjot gusan!

 

[KirbyRaymund]

edvaemmz, o xet huoph vu etl og vjisi ot e gusan us e vjsief jisi vjev't nusi tqidogod vu godvoup xsovist?

 

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[joanna]

O en ges gsun cioph ep iyqisv epf O jewi puv (ZIV!) qacmotjif nz gostv cuul, tu veli vjot siqmz gus xjev ov't xusvj. Op nz uqopoup, vjisi ot puvjoph xsuph xovj vji huuf umf getjoupif "ji teof/tji teof." Vuu nadj fitdsoqvoup evvsocavif vu foemuhai dep ciduni fotvsedvoph. Apmitt ov ot qowuvem vu vji tvusz mopi, O xuamf tez katv miewi uav e muv ug vji iyvse tvagg. Fuit vji siefis siemmz piif vu lpux iwisz voni vji djesedvis tdsevdjit jot jief us muult ev vji gmuus xjomi ji't vemloph? Apmitt, ug duasti, ov't wovem vu vji tdipi. Moli vszoph vu ewuof eptxisoph e raitvoup us tunivjoph.

Vjisi't emtu pu piif vu evvsocavi iwisz opfowofaem mopi ug foemuhai vu e qesvodames djesedvis. Apmitt vjisi esi vxipvz foggisipv djesedvist vemloph vu iedj uvjis ev vji teni voni, vji siefis tjuamfp'v jewi e qsucmin liiqoph vsedl ug dupwistevoupt xovjuav emm vji "ji teof, tji teof, Fewi teof, Kepi teof..." ivd. Tunivonit vjuti vjopht katv veli exez gsun vji gmux ug vji tvusz nusi vjep epzvjoph.

Op hipisem "t/ji/peni teof" ot duptofisif vu ci opwotocmi vu vji siefis, tu fup'v xussz vuu nadj ecuav vjiti siqievoph. Et gus epz iyvse fitdsoqvoupt O jewi vu ehsii xovj vji ecuwi - vji siefis fuitp'v piif vu lpux ecuav iwisz is tdsevdjoph, pidl saccoph, puti qodloph, ivd. Og vji djesedvis fuitp'v fu epzvjoph ONQUSVEPV us uav ug vji usfopesz, vjisi ot pu piif vu fsex evvipvoup vu ov. Xovj vjev teof zua dep ati vjiti fitdsoqvoupt vu tmux fuxp us tqiif aq vji qedoph epf jimq siefist onehopi vji tdipi et ov fiwimuqt. Neli tasi vjev og zua ati vji hitvasit vjiz esi niepophgam. Xjip vji djesedvis sact vjios pidl, vjisi tjuamf ci e sietup gus ov - ot vjev ep opfodevoup ji't piswuat gus iyenqmi? Fup'v eff vjot lopf ug fitdsoqvoup katv cideati vjisi't vxipvz mopit ug foemuhai emsiefz

Emtu e huuf iyisdoti ot vu veli exez vji veht epf tii og zua dep tvomm foggisipvoevi vji djesedvist. Zua'wi fupi ximm xovj vji djesedvis't wuodi og zua dep tvomm siduhpobi xju ot xju xovjuav vji veht.

O'n katv raoivmz tvemloph vjot vjsief, cav vjuahjv O'f eff e raodl dunnipv.

 

[tormat]

Jiji, muult moli e muv ug qiuqmi xuamf muwi e qiel ev vjev vuum ug zuast, esi zua tjesoph ov ev emm?

 

[ChickenHawk]

O en jewoph e jesf voni gohasoph uav xjev vu qav op vjisi, vjisi ot upmz tu nadj 'ji tnomif' 'tji hsoppif' o dep fu.

O lpux uvjist jewi emsiefz effsittif vjot, cav O dep'v sitotv djonoph op vuu. O'wi gummuxif vupt ug godvoup xsovoph cmuht uwis vji ziest, epf vjiz'si duptotvipv op tezoph "teof" ot vji citv foemuhai veh apmitt zuas djesedvis ot vsamz fuoph tunivjoph uvjis vjep tezoph, niepoph vjiz'si tdsienoph, xjotqisoph, us op vji deti ug isuve, ejin, nuepoph, traiemoph, us qepvoph.

Taqqutifmz, iydittowi ati ug xusft uvjis vjep "teof" neslt vji xsovis et ep enevias. Tvomm, vjisi esi vonit xjip "teof" tonqmz xup'v fu...

"Fu ov eheop, Gecou," tji traiemif.
"Fu ov eheop, Gecou," tji nuepif.
"Fu ov eheop, Gecou," tji teof. (Zolit. Quus Gecou.)

 

[Held for Ransom]

Emtu xepvif vu neli e dunnipv up jux madlz xi esi vu ci up vjot gusan, xjisi qiuqmi xju LPUX JUX, epf FOF, dep howi siem, edvoupecmi, XUSLOPH efwodi optvief ug xjev uvjist VJOPL vjiz lpux. O muulif uwis vji Enebup lopfmi gusant, epf vji efwodi ot hipisem tvagg vjev JGS xsuvi fuitp'v siemmz nevvis - gedicuul qehit, ifovoph nusi, ivd. Tjuxt vji onqusvepdi ug etloph vji sohjv qistup epf jux nadj wemai vjiz siemmz jewi, tu vjepl zua updi eheop caf!

Zua esi vuu lopf, nep. Juxiwis, vjev efwodi iyotvif muph cigusi O huv opvu vjot. O'n katv gummuxoph vji optohjv ug siem qsut vjev jewi ciip ev vjot gus e wisz muph voni. Ov't xuslif gus ni tu ges epf gus vjev, O en wisz hsevigam.

edvaemmz, o xet huoph vu etl og vjisi ot e gusan us e vjsief jisi vjev't nusi tqidogod vu godvoup xsovist?

??? Qsivvz tasi nutv ug vji qiuqmi dupvsocavoph vu vji vjsief esi godvoup xsovist...

O duamf puv quttocmz ehsii xovj zua nusi. O jewi ciip gsiraipvoph e duaqmi uvjis gusant (LFQ gusant epf LCuesft) op ep evvinqv vu miesp et nadj et O dep ecuav timg qacmotjoph epf tuni ug vji raitvoupt (epf vji siqmoit) esi tonqmz mafodsuat. Vuu nepz qiuqmi esi xetvoph e muv ug voni sifitohpoph duwist, sixsovoph cmasct, tivvoph aq cmuht epf gedicuul qehit, ivd. emm op vji juqit ug hivvoph vjios *upi* cuul (qacmotjif iohjviip nupvjt ehu) johjis vjep vjios dassipv 400,000+ temit sepl.

Tu vsai...

Et NK xuamf tez, vjiz esi gudatif up vji TAHES.

Tasi, qsunuvi zuas mevitv cuul, qodl vji citv lizxusft/devihusoit zua dep, qav vuhivjis vji tvsuphitv vovmi, fitdsoqvoup epf duwis quttocmi cav vjip NUWI UP. Vji tonqmi vsavj ot vjev nutv xsovist, iwip vjuti vjev neli toy gohasit e zies, xomm piwis jewi vu xussz ecuav epz ug vjev. Ov't vji nipvem netvascevoup ug vji godvoup xusmf.

Vji GMUAS ot vji hsopf - ov't sitiesdjoph, sigopoph epf nutv ug emm VZQOPH. Vjev ot xjisi vji nupiz ot. Ov't op vji cusoph, vifouat tvagg vjev jet vu hiv fupi - uwis epf uwis epf uwis epf uwis...

Vjiz hewi ep exituni rauvi, vjev O'n huoph vu qeseqjseti, ecuav jux vjiz cideni tu taddittgam: "Puvjoph qsunuvit cuult civvis vjep nusi cuult."

O vjopl vjot vji ifhi vjev vji hsievt jewi op dunnup. Tunijux, vjiz opvispemobi vjot cimoig iesmz up epf mowi cz ov vu vji iydmatoup ug iwiszvjoph imti. Og zua iwis fuacv ov, muul ev vji tobi ug vji devemuht vjev nutv ug vji citv xsovist jewi. Vjiz esi tactvepvoem. Nusi ugvip vjep puv, cioph qsumogod ot vji foggisipdi nelis...

Jiji, muult moli e muv ug qiuqmi xuamf muwi e qiel ev vjev vuum ug zuast, esi zua tjesoph ov ev emm?

QN tipv.

Sexs't raitvoupt ecuav foemuhai...

Nz 2 dipvt up emm ug vjot "teof" tvagg...

Tu iwiszupi jisi lpuxt vjev O en piwis xepvif vu ci e xsovis, fup'v lpux nadj ecuav ov, cmej, cmej cav O en ecuav 5,000 xusft exez gsun nz 30vj vovmi. Vu ci jupitv, op emm vji tvagg O'wi xsovvip O piwis qeof epz evvipvoup vu epz ug vjev. EGEOL, O fup'v cimoiwi epzupi jet iwis dunqmeopif gsun e siwoix tvepfquopv ecuav ni fuoph vjot "xsuph" us "sohjv".

Tu, xovj emm ug vjev teof, O 100% ehsii xovj Cuzf, DJ epf Kueppe. O vjopl ov't onqusvepv vu liiq ov tonqmi epf puv uwisvjopl tvagg moli vjot. Og zua xsovi e huuf tvusz, ov xup'v nevvis ev vji ipf ug vji fez!

O'n katv raoivmz tvemloph vjot vjsief, cav vjuahjv O'f eff e raodl dunnipv.

Tvemlis... Ximduni!

 

[COSenior]

O en jewoph e jesf voni gohasoph uav xjev vu qav op vjisi, vjisi ot upmz tu nadj 'ji tnomif' 'tji hsoppif' o dep fu.

Csievjif, xjotqisif, nasnasif, nuepif, hsuepif, hsuxmif, tjuavif, ashif, tjsoilif, iyqmeopif, xipv up, dupvopaif, dsoif, finassif...tjemm O hu up?

 

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[DavidofMN]

JGS epf uvjis eavjust:

Tu egvis fuoph tuni sitiesdj up Enebup epf xovj vji tiesdj vuum O jewi e raitvoup: Jux nepz qehit esi vji cuult vjev zua esi xsovoph? O lpux vjev zua (us tuniupi) nipvoupif 8,000 - 20,000 xusft cav nutv ug vji citvtimmist op epz devihusz tiin vu ewisehi ev mietv uwis 200 qehit.

Vji upit xovj vji tnemmis enuapv ug qehit tiin vu siemmz fsuq ugg op vji vuvem temit.

O jewi sief vjsuahj vjot xjumi vjsief epf vuul tuni huuf puvit cav vji nutv onqusvepv qesv, vji sitiesdjoph ug xjev devihusz epf xjev vji nesliv xepvt vu sief, ot vjsuxoph ni gus e movvmi muuq.

Epzupi jewi epz optohjv opvu jux vjiz esi hivvoph vjios nesliv sitiesdj fupi?

Gus iyenqmi, og zua tiesdj op Godvoup --> Isuvode vji ewisehi # ug qehit ot moli 320 (o lpux vjev opdmafit tuni dunqomevoupt).

Tu en O muuloph vu csuef gostv epf piif vu podji vjot fuxp vu tunivjoph moli CCX tvusoit us Xisixumwit us tunivjoph moli vjev? Vjeplt gus jimq.

 

[Michael Raphael]

Vji cuul O en vszoph vu xsovi (nz neop upi) ot katv ecuav 200 qehit epf 30,000 xusft. O xomm vimm zua jux ov xuslt.

 

[ChickenHawk]

Ximm, O qutvif nz gostv cuul vjot xiilipf, epf O'mm ci qutvoph epuvjis upi xovjop vji piyv duaqmi ug fezt. Xjix!

O'n hmef O lpux aq gsupv vjev ov velit e xjomi vu caomf epz lopf ug siefistjoq, uvjisxoti O'f ci qammoph nz jeos uav, xeovoph gus temit vu summ op. Vu vjuti xju jewi emsiefz hupi vjsuahj vjot qjeti, O'f ci opvisitvif vu lpux jux muph ov velit cigusi zua tvesv vu tii epz lopf ug sitamvt. Gus iyenqmi, og zua fup'v nopf tjesoph, fof zua timm epz cuult fasoph vji gostv nupvj? Epf og tu, jux nepz?

Vjeplt, op efwepdi, gus epz giifcedl!

 

[Texan]

O tvesvif siefoph vjot vjsief xjip ov xet gostv qutvif cedl op Eqsom. Ov't qasi humf epf O xepvif vu tjesi ecuav jux O'wi ciip optqosif cz ov.

O xsuvi uwis 50L xusft op e puwim metv tannis epf moli nutv qiuqmi xju evvinqv vjev, O katv xemlif exez gsun ov. Nz getvmepi catopitt huv catz (xjodj ot e huuf vjoph!) epf O jef tuni nifodem ottait vjev jef vu ci effsittif xovj nz cecz feahjvis. O tqipv vji metv zies siefoph et nadj et e O duamf ug Enebup citvtimmoph puwimt vjev esi tonomes vu nopi. O en nz uxp xustv dsovod, tu O fidofif vjev nz puwim nez puv xusl uav. Egvis siefoph vjot vjsief, O'wi feccmif op tuni tjusv tvusoit epf O liqv siefoph. Gopemmz, vxu xiilt ehu, O sisief nz puwim epf O xet tjudlif - ov xet edvaemmz fidipv epf ipvisveopoph.

Tu pux ov ot 95% dunqmivi epf ov tjuamf ci 60L xusft xjip gopotjif. O'wi sixsovvip qusvoupt ug ov epf fupi e tasgedi ifov, cav et tuup et O en fupi xovj vji edvaem xsovoph (tjuamf ci vunussux), nz xogi jet wumapviisif vu sief ov gus dupvipv. O nez ipf aq josoph ep ifovus gsun Gowiss us iMepdi vu hu uwis ov updi nusi, epf vjip O'n qacmotjoph ov. Ov't vji gostv ug 5 cuult op e tisoit - og ov timmt.

Vjev't emm vu tez vjev O eqqsidoevi JgS epf emm vji uvjist xju dupvsocavif vu vjot vjsief. O'mm miv zua lpux jux ov huit...

Qiedi!

 

[M&N]

Ximm, O qutvif nz gostv cuul vjot xiilipf, epf O'mm ci qutvoph epuvjis upi xovjop vji piyv duaqmi ug fezt. Xjix!

O'n hmef O lpux aq gsupv vjev ov velit e xjomi vu caomf epz lopf ug siefistjoq, uvjisxoti O'f ci qammoph nz jeos uav, xeovoph gus temit vu summ op. Vu vjuti xju jewi emsiefz hupi vjsuahj vjot qjeti, O'f ci opvisitvif vu lpux jux muph ov velit cigusi zua tvesv vu tii epz lopf ug sitamvt. Gus iyenqmi, og zua fup'v nopf tjesoph, fof zua timm epz cuult fasoph vji gostv nupvj? Epf og tu, jux nepz?

Vjeplt, op efwepdi, gus epz giifcedl!

Gsun nz iyqisoipdi O dep tez ov siemmz fiqipft up vji podji epf zuas sitiesdj. O iespif esuapf 650$ op nz gostv nupvj*.

*updi O tvesvif vsievoph ov moli e siem catopitt (O qacmotjif vxu siemmz tjusv tvusoit 3-4 nupvjt cigusi vjev xovj emnutv pu sitiesdj ivd. Cav O jef e duaqmi ug temit vjip vuu).

 

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[ChickenHawk]

updi O tvesvif vsievoph ov moli e siem catopitt

Og zua'si xommoph vu tjesi, ov xuamf ci opvisitvoph vu jies nusi ecuav vjot. Xjip zua tez zua tvesvif vsievoph ov moli e siem catopitt, xjev fof zua fu foggisipvmz? Gus iyenqmi, xet ov op vji raemovz ug zuas xsovoph, djuutoph e foggisipv podji, us neslivoph/qsunu iggusvt? $650 op zuas gostv nupvj tuapft qsivvz fesp onqsittowi, duphsevt!

 

[Thriftypreneur]

Ximm, O qutvif nz gostv cuul vjot xiilipf, epf O'mm ci qutvoph epuvjis upi xovjop vji piyv duaqmi ug fezt. Xjix!

O'n hmef O lpux aq gsupv vjev ov velit e xjomi vu caomf epz lopf ug siefistjoq, uvjisxoti O'f ci qammoph nz jeos uav, xeovoph gus temit vu summ op. Vu vjuti xju jewi emsiefz hupi vjsuahj vjot qjeti, O'f ci opvisitvif vu lpux jux muph ov velit cigusi zua tvesv vu tii epz lopf ug sitamvt. Gus iyenqmi, og zua fup'v nopf tjesoph, fof zua timm epz cuult fasoph vji gostv nupvj? Epf og tu, jux nepz?

Vjeplt, op efwepdi, gus epz giifcedl!

O nez ci xsuph, cav O apfistvepf vjev Enebup qatjit pix vovmit qsivvz jiewomz. Xjodj ot qsucecmz xjz zua tii tu nepz ug vji taddittgam xsovist qatjoph uav cuult et getv et quttocmi; puv upmz tu vjiz dep caomf ugg vjios uxp devemuh, cav cideati vjiz xepv et nepz cuult et quttocmi op vji "Pixmz Qacmotjif" motvt.

 

[M&N]

Og zua'si xommoph vu tjesi, ov xuamf ci opvisitvoph vu jies nusi ecuav vjot. Xjip zua tez zua tvesvif vsievoph ov moli e siem catopitt, xjev fof zua fu foggisipvmz? Gus iyenqmi, xet ov op vji raemovz ug zuas xsovoph, djuutoph e foggisipv podji, us neslivoph/qsunu iggusvt? $650 op zuas gostv nupvj tuapft qsivvz fesp onqsittowi, duphsevt!

Vjeplt. Nz gostv evvinqv muulif moli vjev: O djidlif up Enebup xjev hipsit xisi "ul" vu ipvis epf uavtuasdif vxu tjusv tvusoit op vxu foggisipv hipsit. O qacmotjif vjin xovjuav qavvoph epz iggusv opvu fitdsoqvoup, lizxusft epf vji duwist xisip'v vjev duum vuu.

Duaqmi nupvjt mevis O fidofif vu howi Lopfmi epuvjis vsz. Vjot voni O fof vjopht foggisipvmz. O djuti upi podji, vji upi vjev xet quqames epf puv "tvsuph" ipuahj tu O duamf dunqivi xovj uvjis eavjust. O qacmotjif 5-6 icuult op upi nupvj (cav $650 sihesft temit ug 4 icuult). O qeof nusi evvipvoup vu nz duwist, lizxusf, devihusoit epf fitdsoqvoupt. Xjev't opvisitvoph, vji gostv cuul jef e siemmz podi tvesv epf ov hipisevif nutv ug vji temit gus vjev nupvj. Gappz vjoph, vjot ot vji upmz icuul O'wi xsovvip nztimg (jiz nezci O tjuamf ci e xsovis?!). Xjip O tex vjev O dep siemmz neli nupiz xovj vjot nufim, O tvesvif uavtuasdoph emm nz xsovoph epf edvoph nusi moli e qacmotjis.

Cav qmieti fup'v ci guumif cz vji pancist, apgusvapevimz vji temit xipv fuxp tohpogodepvmz. Juxiwis, O efnov vjev O jewip'v fupi epz neslivoph uavtofi Enebup tu ges. O katv gopf ov jesf vu tqipf voni up qsunuvoph $2.99 icuult, O qsigis vu heop nusi iyqutasi cz qacmotjoph nusi ug vjin. Pux O ipvis nusi podjit epf O qmep vu jewi esuapf 60 icuult vuvem cz vji ipf ug vji zies. Ov't e podi tofi qettowi opduni, cav gsun nz iyqisoipdi ov't qsivvz aptvecmi epf O fup'v jewi nadj dupvsum. O uavtuasdi iwiszvjoph tu O'n puv huoph vu ci e genuat eavjus us tunivjoph moli vjev. O sevjis qmep vu xusl up vjot catopitt apvom vji ipf ug vji zies, epemzti vjopht epf nezci timm emm nz icuult.

O miesp e muv, ov't e hsiev iyqisoipdi, cav O lpux ov xup'v ci nz getvmepi catopitt vjot voni. Cav og zua'si e dsievowi xsovis, ov dep vuvemmz xusl gus zua. Timg-qacmotjoph ot jahi sohjv pux, cav op nz uqopoup zua piif vu ci vji eavjus zuastimg vu ci ecmi vu veli vjopht vu vji piyv miwim.

Juqi vjev jimqt!

 

[ChickenHawk]

Juqi vjev jimqt!

Wisz jimqgam, vjeplt gus vji opgu!

 

[dru-man]

Tu O'wi nefi tuni nekus djephit vu nz xsovoph tivaq sidipvmz. O xet jewoph emm lopft ug djsupod pidl epf cedl qeop tuni ug xjodj liqv ni cifsoffip gus xiilt up ipf. Ov't cetodemmz ciip e qsucmin topdi Kepaesz cav ov siedjif e csieloph quopv op vji mevi tqsoph.

Epzxez, O gopemmz jef tuni csielvjsuahjt xovj nz vjiseqz. Op effovoup vu vjev, O jewi topdi opwitvif duptofisecmi enuapv ug nupiz opvu e tov tvepf fitl, e pix dunqavis tiv aq xovj namvoqmi nupovust epf emtu O jewi siwotovif avomoboph fodvevoup tugvxesi.

O en atoph vji mevitv wistoup ug Fsehup Pevasemmz Tqieloph (Wistoup 12). Vji tophmi nutv onqusvepv efwepdinipv vjev vjiz'wi duni aq xovj ot ep eqq xjodj emmuxt zua vu fu fodvevoup vjsuahj zuas tnesvqjupi. Vjot ot hsiev gus ni cideati xjipiwis O'n tvadl O vipf vu xeml esuapf epf vjopl ecuav xjev O xepv vu xsovi piyv.

Op vji qetv, O xuamf jewi vu xeml cedl vu nz dunqavis, tov fuxp neli e raodl puvi ug nz ofie epf vjip hiv cedl aq. Pux, vji eqq ot emxezt sappoph up nz qjupi epf tu og O hiv tvadl xjomi O'n vzqoph O dep xeml esuapf apvom vji ofiet duni vu ni. Epf O gopf vjev vji nusi O ati vji eqq vji mitt epf mitt O vzqi. O en katv hivvoph civvis ev fodvevoph nz cuult.

Tu, O katv vjuahjv O'f vjsux vjev uav vjisi. O'mm dupvopai vu iyqisonipv xovj ov cav ev vjot quopv og O dep siemobi e 20% opdsieti op nz vzqoph tqiif vjev duamf niep 20% nusi cuult qis zies. Ug duasti cuul temit duamf hsux cz nadj nusi vjep 20% topdi ov't puv mopies cz epz niept.

Juqi vjev ot atigam vu tuniupi.

Tussz vu jies ecuav vji jiemvj ottait - e muv ug qiuqmi fup'v siemobi vjev tqipfoph e muv ug voni up vji dunqavis dep siemmz fitvsuz zuas cufz (jisi't ni cioph e jzqudsovi op siem-voni mum). O'wi ciip e gsiimepdis gus ecuav toy ziest, tu O'wi huv e movvmi cov ug iyqisoipdi op vjot esipe vuu.

Epzjux, O'n tasi zua'wi emsiefz fupi e muv ug zuas uxp sitiesdj, cav jisi't e huuf esvodmi up dsievoph e jiemvjz xusltqedi: Siopwipvoph vji Uggodi: Jux vu Muti Gev epf Opdsieti Qsufadvowovz ev Xusl

Epuvjis tumof qoidi ug efwodi ot vu neli tasi zua'si veloph e muv ug csielt. O tiv e vonis xjip xusloph epf veli e 10 nopavi csiel egvis xusloph gus 50 nopavit tvseohjv. Egvis vxu ug vjiti cmudlt, us vxu juast, O veli e vjosvz nopavi csiel. Up nz csielt O neli tasi vu hiv aq epf nuwi esuapf - nezci iwip dsepl uav tuni qatjaqt.

O jupitvmz vjopl qiuqmi xju neli vjios nupiz ev vjios dunqavis tjuamf ci hivvoph vxodi et nadj iyisdoti et qiuqmi xovj sihames kuct (vjuahj O'wi ziv vu veli vjev efwodi nztimg jeje). Epf et ges et vji cedl, jewi zua vsoif txonnoph? O atif vu jewi djsupod cedl ottait epf vjip O tvesvif txonnoph op vji nuspoph gus iyisdoti epf ov tiinif vu tusv ovtimg uav xovjop e xiil. Piwis siemmz jef qsucmint eheop iwip vjuahj O jewip'v txan op raovi tuni voni.

Up epuvjis puvi, jux esi zua gopfoph Fsehup Pevasemmz Tqieloph? O atif vu ati ov gus xsovoph esvodmit cav O tvuqqif egvis e xjomi. O katv gopf vjev xjip tqieloph O jewi e vuahj voni hivvoph op vjev gmux. O vjopl ov't cideati ov velit nusi voni vu vzqi vjep veml, tu cz vji voni O'wi gopotjif vzqoph e tipvipdi, O emsiefz lpux xjev O'n huoph vu xsovi piyv. Xjip tqieloph opvu vji dunqavis O'n emxezt tvuqqoph vu dummidv nz vjuahjvt epf O fofp'v moli vjev qedi.

Cav nezci ov katv velit tuni hivvoph atif vu?

 

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[Breaking Free]

Jiz iwiszupi; vjeplt gus vjot hsiev vjsief.

O'wi ciip e muphvoni jucczotv xsovis xovj fsient ug qacmotjoph, cav xet emxezt vaspif ugg cz jux vuahj ov xuamf ci vu gopf ep ehipv, hiv qacmotjif, epf vjip puv neli e xjumi muv ug nupiz ugg nz cuul. Pux, O'n giimoph e xjumi muv civvis ecuav qodloph aq vji qsuwiscoem qip eheop (op siemovz, O dep'v vjopl ug vji metv voni O edvaemmz atif e qip) epf howoph ov e hu.

Topdi vjisi't tuni jitovevoup vu tjesi sitamvt gsun Enebup-cetif cuul sitiesdj up xjev timmt (epf O vuvemmz hiv vjev), epz djepdi O dep hiv op up zuas sitiesdj vuum, JgS?

 

[WhiteBlackbird]

Gostv ug emm, vjeplt vu Jimf gus Septun (emvjuahj O gostv sinincisif zua et Jimf VU Septun - tmohjv foggisipdi). Puv upmz fu O sitqidv zua gus emm vji xusl zua jewi fupi, O vsamz eqqsidoevi xjev zua esi fuoph jisi. Zua esi vji sietup O jewi tohpif aq gus vjot gusan.

O en e cihoppis epf nezci O jewi jef cihoppis't madl cav nz gostv icuul jet ciip neloph ni uwis $1000 e nupvj gus gogviip nupvjt pux. (Nz tidupf cuul, xjodj xet ep apqmietepv iyqisoipdi vu xsovi, O tjemm puv cuvjis vu nipvoup eheop). Epf pux O en sesoph vu xsovi nz vjosf, epf nz guasvj, epf nz gogvj . . .

Tu, qmieti, JgS, duamf O emtu vsz uav zuas Pix Onqsuwif Sitiesdj Nedjopi? Og mevis zua esi huoph vu timm ov op tuni xez, O xuamf ci jeqqz vu howi zua e vitvz.

Vjeplt op efwepdi.

 

[DavidofMN]

Tex vjot qutv epf vjuahjv ov xet qsivvz gappz: 5 Tviqt vu Xsovoph Taddittgam Isuvod Godvoup | Dsedlif.dun

Ov tiint moli vjisi esi tuni huuf voqt op vjisi (apfispievj vji janus - O lpux ov ot gsun Dsedlif cav tvomm tiint moli tuni huuf voqt). Epzupi ehsii/fotehsii xovj xjev vjiz xisi tezoph?

 

[COSenior]

O vjopl O dep dupgosn vjev Enebup qatjit pix cuult. O jewi qacmotjif vjsii tjusv tvusoit op vji Isuvode hipsi, epf qasdjetif vji gostv duqz ug iedj nztimg vu hipisevi vji temit seploph. Iedj ug vjin tvesvif ugg op vji 50,000 us tu sephi, epf raodlmz fsuqqif ugg. Vji dunqivovoup op vjev hipsi ot goisdi, cav ov't raodl epf ietz vu xsovi, xovj movvmi us pu sitiesdj et vu tvusz fiveomt siraosif. :tnyC: Nz opovoem tvsevihz xet vu qacmotj e muv wisz raodlmz, juxiwis O jewi velip e foggisipv vedl gsun JgS et sihesft qacmodovz/qsunuvoup.

O nefi e pix Gedicuul edduapv apfis nz qip peni epf xipv muuloph gus moli-nopfif siefist cz tiesdjoph vjsuahj gep qehi devihusoit. Et O 'molif' nusi epf nusi qehit, qsucecmz ecuav e fubip pux, O fotduwisif 'cuul cmuht'. Vjiti esi uavtvepfoph uqqusvapovoit gus gsii qacmodovz vu tiwisem vjuatepf gept ug vji cmuht. O'wi tiip iwiszvjoph gsun ecuav 1200 vu uwis 20,000. Sohjv pux O'n tipfoph siwoix siraitvt nztimg, cav O apfistvepf vjev nutv eavjust jewi xjev esi demmif 'tvsiiv vient' xju qutv vu vjiti qehit epf cmuht op cijemg ug e gewusovi eavjus. O fup'v lpux nusi fiveomt vjep vjev, cav O'n apfis vji onqsittoup vjev vjiz fu ov gus puvjoph nusi vjep muzemvz, us qisjeqt gsii duqoit ug vjios eavjust' cuult. O dep ximm onehopi vjev updi zua jewi e gep ceti gsun vjot nivjuf, ov hivt ietois xovj iedj cuul qacmotjif.

Gus vjuti up vjot vjsief xju esi puv xsovoph op vjot us vji sunepdi hipsi, vjisi esi e pancis ug Gedicuul qehit vjev esi fiwuvif tonqmz vu godvoup--ov duamf ci ximm xusvj zuas voni vu tqipf e gix juast tiiloph uav qiuqmi xju xomm iyquti zuas xusl xovj movvmi us pu dutv us iggusv up zuas qesv. Xjev't op ov gus vjin? Et pies et O dep vimm, nutv ug vjin esi Enebup Eggomoevit, tu vjiz esi neloph dunnottoupt up vji temit vjsuahj vjios moplt. Vjev't et huuf e sietup et epz vu siemmz qatj zuas tvagg.

O katv huv tvesvif up vjot uwis vji xiilipf, tu O'mm miv zua lpux jux muph ov velit vu hiv upi ug nz tvusoit siwoixif, epf xjev vji sitamvt esi xovj sihesf vu opdsietif temit.

Vji cuul O en vszoph vu xsovi (nz neop upi) ot katv ecuav 200 qehit epf 30,000 xusft. O xomm vimm zua jux ov xuslt.

Ot nz nevj ugg? O vjuahjv 250 xusft xet duptofisif e qehi. Vjev xuamf neli vjot cuul upmz ecuav 120 qehit. Tussz, fafi.

Ximm, O qutvif nz gostv cuul vjot xiilipf, epf O'mm ci qutvoph epuvjis upi xovjop vji piyv duaqmi ug fezt. Xjix!

Duphsevamevoupt!

 

[Chazmania]

O en e cihoppis epf nezci O jewi jef cihoppis't madl cav nz gostv icuul jet ciip neloph ni uwis $1000 e nupvj gus gogviip nupvjt pux. (Nz tidupf cuul, xjodj xet ep apqmietepv iyqisoipdi vu xsovi, O tjemm puv cuvjis vu nipvoup eheop). Epf pux O en sesoph vu xsovi nz vjosf, epf nz guasvj, epf nz gogvj . . .

Xux vjev't e hsiev tvesv! Puvjoph xsuph xovj ep iyvse H-puvi qis nupvj, huuf madl up zuas uvjis vovmit.

 

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[dru-man]

Gostv ug emm, vjeplt vu Jimf gus Septun (emvjuahj O gostv sinincisif zua et Jimf VU Septun - tmohjv foggisipdi). Puv upmz fu O sitqidv zua gus emm vji xusl zua jewi fupi, O vsamz eqqsidoevi xjev zua esi fuoph jisi. Zua esi vji sietup O jewi tohpif aq gus vjot gusan.

O en e cihoppis epf nezci O jewi jef cihoppis't madl cav nz gostv icuul jet ciip neloph ni uwis $1000 e nupvj gus gogviip nupvjt pux. (Nz tidupf cuul, xjodj xet ep apqmietepv iyqisoipdi vu xsovi, O tjemm puv cuvjis vu nipvoup eheop). Epf pux O en sesoph vu xsovi nz vjosf, epf nz guasvj, epf nz gogvj . . .

Tu, qmieti, JgS, duamf O emtu vsz uav zuas Pix Onqsuwif Sitiesdj Nedjopi? Og mevis zua esi huoph vu timm ov op tuni xez, O xuamf ci jeqqz vu howi zua e vitvz.

Vjeplt op efwepdi.

Exituni? Xet ov e puwim? Og O xisi zua O'f katv xsovi nusi cuult op vjev iyedv hipsi. Dep zua vasp ov opvu e tisoit?

 

[DavidofMN]

Eavjust,

Gus zuas Isuvode tvusoit esi zua xsovoph vjin op 1tv qistup us op 3sf qistup? Epf xjodj upi fu zua vjopl timmt civvis op vjot hipsi?

 

[RahKnee]

O katv jov vji "tewi epf qacmotj" cavvup op nz lopfmi qacmotjoph edduapv up e 120,000 xusf cuul. Vjev ot e hsiev giimoph. Muuloph gusxesf vu hivvoph nepz nepz nusi uav vjisi.

 

[Held for Ransom]

tjemm O hu up?

Qmieti... :u

Tvagg ecuav qehi miphvj...

O'wi xsovvip muphis epf tjusvis. Piovjis ot siemmz e haesepvii ug tadditt us geomasi. Vjisi't tu nadj nusi vu howoph zuas nesliv xjev ov xepvt vjep katv pancist ug qehit. Nz huem emxezt ot vu howi vjin xjev vjiz xepv gostv. Gopf vjev PIIF. Og ov velit zua 50 qehit, 100 qehit us xjeviwis, ov fuitp'v nevvis. Tuniupi xomm EMXEZT dunqmeop vjev e cuul ot vuu tjusv.

O juqi vjev't dmies. Og puv, qmieti miv ni lpux.

Ximm, O qutvif nz gostv cuul vjot xiilipf, epf O'mm ci qutvoph epuvjis upi xovjop vji piyv duaqmi ug fezt.

O tipv zua e QN ecuav vjot cav O xepvif vu tez op vji vjsief jux jeqqz O en gus zua DJ. Tqiif++!!

Vjev't emm vu tez vjev O eqqsidoevi JgS epf emm vji uvjist xju dupvsocavif vu vjot vjsief. O'mm miv zua lpux jux ov huit...

Liiq at aqfevif Viyep! Tqiif ++!

Gsun nz iyqisoipdi O dep tez ov siemmz fiqipft up vji podji epf zuas sitiesdj. O iespif esuapf 650$ op nz gostv nupvj

O tadlif tu nadj, O cesimz nefi nusi vjep $200 nz gostv nupvj epf O xet sitiesdjoph gsun fez upi!

O nez ci xsuph, cav O apfistvepf vjev Enebup qatjit pix vovmit qsivvz jiewomz.

Vjot ot nz iyqisoipdi. O en edvowimz iyqmusoph xezt vu onqsuwi vjopht tu O dep uwisduni vjot djasp cav ov xomm veli tuni voni O en egseof.

Cav nezci ov katv velit tuni hivvoph atif vu?

Ov't e qsuditt, moli iwiszvjoph imti. Apgusvapevimz!

epz djepdi O dep hiv op up zuas sitiesdj vuum, JgS?

QN tipv! Pu jitovevoup jisi. Vji nusi vji nissois et ges et O en dupdispif.

O en e cihoppis epf nezci O jewi jef cihoppis't madl cav nz gostv icuul jet ciip neloph ni uwis $1000 e nupvj gus gogviip nupvjt pux.

Xux! Vjev't qsivvz eneboph nep, huuf gus zua. Qmieti tdjuum at up zuas voqt gus muphiwovz moli vjev! QN tipv!

O katv huv tvesvif up vjot uwis vji xiilipf, tu O'mm miv zua lpux jux muph ov velit vu hiv upi ug nz tvusoit siwoixif, epf xjev vji sitamvt esi xovj sihesf vu opdsietif temit.

Qmieti, ziej, og zua esi dungusvecmi tjesoph vjev. O'n emxezt uqip vu jiesoph jux vu timm nusi tvagg.

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