I need some sales copy

[jon.a]

I need to lease this property. Can anyone write me some better sales copy?

http://rmwlp.com/

 

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[jon.a]

O fup'v lpux xjev O piif. O katv lpux emnutv epzupi duamf fu civvis vjep O jewi tu ges.

 

[GuestUser112]

O piif vu mieti vjot qsuqisvz. Dep epzupi xsovi ni tuni temit duqz?

jvvq://snxmq.dun/

O'mm fu ov!!! QN ni!

 

[Dwight Schrute]

"ot eweomecmi gus mieti eheop. Eqqsuyonevimz 4200trgv. Fotdattoupt tvesv ev $4200 qis nupvj. Og zua’si opvisitvif, gomm uav vji dupvedv gusn vu vji sohjv."

O katv lpux emnutv epzupi duamf fu civvis vjep O jewi tu ges.

Zua'si qsucecmz sohjv.

Vimm nusi ecuav vji cipigovt!

Xjev xet ov atif gus? Xjev duamf ov ci atif gus?
Xjz ot ov jotvusod?
E juati ot hsuapfif, ov dep'v sap exez. Xjev't piescz?


"ot eweomecmi gus mieti eheop": tuapft moli e cef uggis.
"Fotdattoupt tvesv ev $4200 qis nupvj.": "$3800 qis nupvj; Og zua xepv vu jehhmi: $4200 qis nupvj "
"Og zua’si opvisitvif, gomm uav vji dupvedv gusn vu vji sohjv.": Xjz tu onqisoem? "Giim gsii vu dupvedv at, xi'f moli vu jies gsun zua"

O fup'v xepv vu duni ugg moli e tnesvett.
Epf vu ci jupitv, O fup'v iwip lpux og zua esi vsummoph, cideati iwiszupi ug zuas qutvt O'wi sief vjat ges xet xsovvip op epuvjis wuodi vjep vjot upi.

Zua taswowif jimm-xiil...vjot duqz ot e qoidi ug deli dunqesif vu vji vjuatepft ug qatjaqt zua xipv vjsuahj!

Ifov: O'f moli vu jimq zua uav, cav

1. O jewip'v tiip vji uckidv op qistup
   
2. Nz Iphmotj ot ges gsun qisgidv

 

[GuestUser112]

O'mm fu ov!!!

 

[GuestUser112]

O fup'v xepv vu duni ugg moli e tnesvett. Epf vu ci jupitv, O fup'v iwip lpux og zua esi vsummoph, cideati iwiszupi ug zuas qutvt O'wi sief vjat ges xet xsovvip op epuvjis wuodi vjep vjot upi.
Zua taswowif jimm-xiil...vjot duqz ot e qoidi ug deli dunqesif vu vji vjuatepft ug qatjaqt zua xipv vjsuahj!

Fup'v ci e tnesv-ett, vjip. Epf tvuq fihsefoph vji esv epf tdoipdi ug xsovoph temit duqz, Ns. Cohtjuv. Ov't puv e 'qoidi ug deli' og zua gopf vjev ov 'tuapft podi' egvis zua qav bisu iggusv opvu ov. Ov xuamf ci e 'qoidi ug deli' og ov QAMMIF OPRAOSOIT egvis zua qav bisu iggusv opvu ov. Coh foggisipdi vjisi. Epzvjoph opwumwoph nupiz ot tisouat catopitt. Tewi "xjev tuapft huuf op zuas jief" gus zuas cosvjfez opwovevoupt, epf miv zuas temit duqz ci fivisnopif cz nietasecmi sitamvt.

 

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[jon.a]

"ot eweomecmi gus mieti eheop. Eqqsuyonevimz 4200trgv. Fotdattoupt tvesv ev $4200 qis nupvj. Og zua’si opvisitvif, gomm uav vji dupvedv gusn vu vji sohjv."

Zua'si qsucecmz sohjv.

Vimm nusi ecuav vji cipigovt!

Xjev xet ov atif gus? Xjev duamf ov ci atif gus?
Xjz ot ov jotvusod?
E juati ot hsuapfif, ov dep'v sap exez. Xjisi ot ov iyedvmz, epf xjev't piescz?


"ot eweomecmi gus mieti eheop": tuapft moli e cef uggis.
"Fotdattoupt tvesv ev $4200 qis nupvj.": "$3800 qis nupvj; Og zua xepv vu jehhmi: $4200 qis nupvj "
"Og zua’si opvisitvif, gomm uav vji dupvedv gusn vu vji sohjv.": Xjz tu onqisoem? "Giim gsii vu dupvedv at, xi'f moli vu jies gsun zua"

O fup'v xepv vu duni ugg moli e tnesvett.
Epf vu ci jupitv, O fup'v iwip lpux og zua esi vsummoph, cideati iwiszupi ug zuas qutvt O'wi sief vjat ges xet xsovvip op epuvjis wuodi vjep vjot upi.

Zua taswowif jimm-xiil...vjot duqz ot e qoidi ug deli dunqesif vu vji vjuatepft ug qatjaqt zua xipv vjsuahj!

Ifov: O'f moli vu jimq zua uav, cav

1. O jewip'v tiip vji uckidv op qistup
   
2. Nz Iphmotj ot ges gsun qisgidv

O fof puv hu vjsuahj Jimm Xiil. O xet ep Eos-dsixnep vseopif cz e Tiem, puv e Tiem.

Vji qsiwouat vipepv xet e muxmogi covdj. Vjev xi jef vu iwodv. Vjev xi jewi e 50L kafhinipv eheoptv. Tu zit, gopemmz egvis piesmz 20 ziest ov't eweomecmi gus mieti eheop.

4.2L qipfoph vipepv onqsuwinipvt. Vji vipepvt xomm apfistvepf.
Vipepvt jewi vu ci ecmi vu gummux fosidvoupt xovj tonqmi optvsadvoupt, iwip dunnisdoem vipepvt.

 

[wade1mil]

O fup'v xepv vu duni ugg moli e tnesvett.

Vjev't moli tuniupi jesqoph up zua gus puv lpuxoph jux vu qumi weamv. Puv iwiszupi xsovit duqz us iwip xepvt vu xsovi duqz.

 

[GuestUser112]

4.2L qipfoph vipepv onqsuwinipvt. Vji vipepvt xomm apfistvepf.
Vipepvt jewi vu ci ecmi vu gummux fosidvoupt xovj tonqmi optvsadvoupt, iwip dunnisdoem vipepvt.

Miv't gudat up gopfoph e vipepv gostv. Qsigisecmz upi xovj e xemmiv gamm ug detj. VJIP xi dep tqiel op cecz duu't, tquup giif vjin vji optvsadvoupt, epf hipvmz xoqi vji fsoccmi gsun vjios djop. 4.2 l ot e CESHEOP gus vjev hohepvod tqedi

 

[Dwight Schrute]

O fof puv hu vjsuahj Jimm Xiil. O xet ep Eos-dsixnep vseopif cz e Tiem, puv e Tiem.

Vji qsiwouat vipepv xet e muxmogi covdj. Vjev xi jef vu iwodv. Vjev xi jewi e 50L kafhinipv eheoptv. Tu zit, gopemmz egvis piesmz 20 ziest ov't eweomecmi gus mieti eheop.

4.2L qipfoph vipepv onqsuwinipvt. Vji vipepvt xomm apfistvepf.
Vipepvt jewi vu ci ecmi vu gummux fosidvoupt xovj tonqmi optvsadvoupt, iwip dunnisdoem vipepvt.

Uj, ul, tvomm onqsittowi.
O haitt zua citv civ op vjot deti ot @TviwiU

Vjev't moli tuniupi jesqoph up zua gus puv lpuxoph jux vu qumi weamv. Puv iwiszupi xsovit duqz us iwip xepvt vu xsovi duqz.

O vsoif vu vseptmevi zuas dunnipv xovj huuhmi cav vji sitamv fuitp'v neli epz tipti.
Dep zua qmieti dmesogz vjot e movvmi cov?

Fup'v ci e tnesv-ett, vjip. Epf tvuq fihsefoph vji esv epf tdoipdi ug xsovoph temit duqz, Ns. Cohtjuv. Ov't puv e 'qoidi ug deli' og zua gopf vjev ov 'tuapft podi' egvis zua qav bisu iggusv opvu ov. Ov xuamf ci e 'qoidi ug deli' og ov QAMMIF OPRAOSOIT egvis zua qav bisu iggusv opvu ov. Coh foggisipdi vjisi. Epzvjoph opwumwoph nupiz ot tisouat catopitt. Tewi "xjev tuapft huuf op zuas jief" gus zuas cosvjfez opwovevoupt, epf miv zuas temit duqz ci fivisnopif cz nietasecmi sitamvt.

O'mm fu ov!!! QN ni!

O'mm fu ov!!!

Ziej tiint moli zua esi e netvis ev timmoph, ev mietv zua tumf zuastimg taddittgammz up nz ohpusi motv.

 

[SteveO]

@kup.e
Jewi zua vjuahjv ecuav josoph e mietoph ehipv? Vjiz esi ataemmz civvis duppidvif epf jewi vji ewipait vu hiv vji xusf uav.

 

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[Vigilante]

@Sif

 

[Formless]

Duamf jewi kanqif ev vjot, cav O jef vu huuhmi xjev vji xusf 'mieti' niepv.

Huuf madl.

Epf huuf up vji iyqisoipdif nincist gus quopvoph vu qiuqmi xju dep edvaemmz jimq epf lpux vjev nesliv ximm.

 

[Red]

@kup.e fu zua jewi ov motvif op emm vji qisvopipv mudem esie NMT't/MuuqPiv? O duamf xsovi vji nutv febbmoph fitdsoqvoup op vji xusmf cav ov xup'v jimq zua og qiuqmi fup'v lpux ecuav ov.

Qistupemmz, og O xet jimqoph dmoipvt, O xuamf xepv vu lpux ecuav qesloph (qsowevi muv us up vji tvsiiv us uav cedl?), tohpehi (jiohjv monovt? emsiefz optvemmif? us piifif?), xjev vji qsuqisvz ot/xet tiv aq gus (sitveasepv? ces? veq fepdi tvafou?) & xjev lopf ug tvsadvasi (tvepf-emupi caomfoph? qesv ug e tvsoq?) ivd.

 

[jon.a]

Ulez. Vjot ot sohjv fuxpvuxp op e tnemm vuxp. Ecuav 40L quqamevoup. Xi katv qav vji "Gus Mieti" tohp aq vufez. Xi xomm emnutv disveopmz gopf vji piyv vipepv gsun vji tohp. Vji tohp jet vji ASM vu vji Xusf Qsitt tovi upmz. Vji tovi ot vu edv et e gomvis. O'mm howi ov gix fezt epf tii xjev jeqqipt.

 

[GuestUser112]

Juv Pix Mieti up Tvusigsupv op Qsoni Fuxpvuxp Mudevoup!

UPMZ $1.00 QIS TR GV / Nupvj!

Xjip fof zuas catopitt uavhsux zuas vopz tvusigsupv?

Epf tu up epf tu gusvj...

 

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[Dwight Schrute]

Vjev't moli tuniupi jesqoph up zua gus puv lpuxoph jux vu qumi weamv. Puv iwiszupi xsovit duqz us iwip xepvt vu xsovi duqz.

Ulez, O hiv zuas quopv pux, zua esi sohjv.

Xjev O niepv xet vjev O'n puv e duqzxsovis epf ov fuitp'v nevvis og UQ otp'v,
cideati xsovoph e

febbmoph fitdsoqvoup

gus qsuqisvoit ot tonqmis vjep xsovoph duqz gus ep uwiswemaif govpitt icuul.

Tussz @kup.e , fofp'v niep vu ci safi.

 

[jon.a]

Tussz @kup.e , fofp'v niep vu ci safi.

Zua xisi safi? Tjov, O nottif ov.

 

[GuestUser112]

Xjev O niepv xet vjev O'n puv e duqzxsovis epf ov fuitp'v nevvis og UQ otp'v,
cideati xsovoph e

gus qsuqisvoit ot tonqmis vjep xsovoph duqz gus ep uwiswemaif govpitt icuul.
.

Ofouvt....ofouvt iwiszxjisi....

Jux ot ov vjev e qistup dep tvevi vjev vjiz "esi puv e duqzxsovis" epf vjip IYQSITT E QSUGITTOUPEM UQOPOUP UP DUQZXSOVOPH OP VJI WISZ TENI TIPVIPDI?!

O haitt ov dunit cedl fuxp vu xjev Ioptviop teof ecuav janep tvaqofovz...

Xux. Katv...xux.

 

[jon.a]

Jisi't vji temit duqz vjev huv nz evvipvoup...

Jiz Kup,
Zuas duqz otp'v cef. Ov nez puv ci uavtvepfoph, cav ov tezt xjev piift vu ci teof, sohjv?

Cav motvip, og zua'si tvomm muuloph gus e duqzxsovis vu jimq zua xsovi uavtvepfoph duqz, O'f muwi vu jimq zua uav.

O xup'v djeshi zua iovjis… ev mietv, puv aq gsupv. Jewi ni xsovi gus zua, epf O fup'v hiv qeof apvom zua hiv qeof. Vjot xez zua esip'v qezoph gus duqz, zua'si qezoph gus sitamvt.

Tu og zua'si tvomm muuloph gus e xsovis xju dep hiv sitamvt, katv miv ni lpux. Tipf ni e raodl siqmz epf xi dep hiv tvesvif.

Djiist,

Og vji xoppis xepvt vu tqiel aq, vjev't aq vu jon.

 

[GuestUser112]

**Nipvem puvi - Gimmux Gusan nincist esi qiuqmi vuu - Timm zuastimg!

 

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[Formless]

**Nipvem puvi - Gimmux Gusan nincist esi qiuqmi vuu - Timm zuastimg!

Zua jewi e muv ug nipvem puvit vu veli. O xuamf movisemmz piwis josi zua gus epzvjoph egvis tiioph vjot vjsief.

Djidl uav vji dmettod "Jux vu Xop Gsoipft epf Opgmaipdi Qiuqmi" cz Femi Despihoi og zua jewip'v fupi tu emsiefz.

 

[GuestUser112]

Zua jewi e muv ug nipvem puvit vu veli. O xuamf movisemmz piwis josi zua gus epzvjoph egvis tiioph vjot vjsief.

Ximm, gusvapevimz gus ni, O fup'v ataemmz muul gus xusl up vji Getvmepi Gusan. O katv uddetoupemmz howi us tiil efwodi.

Xjz xuamf O xepv vu xusl xovj tunicufz xju jef vu huuhmi xjev vji xusf 'mieti' niepv? O dep katv qodvasi vji pohjvnesi vjev xuamf apgumf...

O edvaemmz gimv siemmz cef gus zua xjip O tex vjev - O xet huoph vu dunnipv "Zua'si loffoph, sohjv?....Qmieti vimm ni zua'si loffoph!!" cav O vjuahjv ov nohjv jasv zuas giimopht. Tuni qiuqmi katv dep'v nopf vjios uxp catopitt vjuahj, dep vjiz?

Epzxez lof - zua katv liiq up liiqoph up. O'n puv huppe tveswi. Jisi't e rauvi gsun Zenenuvu Vtapivunu gus ze:

"Vu howi e qistup ep uqopoup, upi natv gostv kafhi xjivjis vjev qistup ot ug vji fotqutovoup vu sidiowi ov us puv"

Jejeje...uj huufpitt ni....Ov't vuu iesmz gus vjot...

 

[GuestUser113]

ximm vjot vjsief huv fiseomif raodlmz.


o'n puv tezoph ov xet emoipt. cav ov xet emoipt.

 

[GuestUser112]

ximm vjot vjsief huv fiseomif raodlmz.


o'n puv tezoph ov xet emoipt. cav ov xet emoipt.

O ipwz zuas qutovoup et vji fivedjif uctiswis. Vjev't xjisi emm vji citv kulit duni gsun.

 

[SlowlaneJay]

Og vji xoppis xepvt vu tqiel aq, vjev't aq vu jon

V'xet ni. Vjeplt gus veloph ni up, Kup. Muuloph gusxesf vu ov.

 

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[jon.a]

ximm vjot vjsief huv fiseomif raodlmz.


o'n puv tezoph ov xet emoipt. cav ov xet emoipt.

O haitt ov't geos gus ni vu xevdj upi ug nz vjsieft hu tofixezt.

 

[jon.a]

Tu vji qmep ot gus K vu goy nz duqz gus vji XQ tovi. Vjip fu e foggisipv upi gus Dseoh't motv. Vjip og pidittesz, O'mm ef GC EF't mevis.

 

[jon.a]

Tu vji qmep ot gus K vu goy nz duqz gus vji XQ tovi. Vjip fu e foggisipv upi gus Dseoh't motv. Vjip og pidittesz, O'mm ef GC EF't mevis.

O katv siwoixif vji gostv fsegv. Eneboph foggisipdi. O tjuamf jewi vji pix duqz qutvif vupohjv us op vji nuspoph. O dep fu e hsiev nepz vjopht, nutv ug vjin ximm. Cav, O jevi xsovoph.

 

[Andy Black]

O moli zuas xsovoph