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Lee Wright

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Hi. I live in a regional town & I've found that the market for locally grown & home delivered produce has exploded since the Corona lockdown. At the same time a lot of farmers have lost sales because of closure or restaurants & farmers markets. My idea is to create simple, standardized, 1 page ecommerce sites so they can sell direct & efficiently process orders & payments. Here's my landing page:

Here's the results of my Facebook campaign:
The click through is 1.7% though it was initially much higher but has been dropping. I've had no enquiries.
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Here's my ad:
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I'd appreciate any feedback. You don't need to be kind, I know it's pretty rough but I wanted to get something up & running to see if it had legs first.

Thanks.
 
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