Lex DeVille's - I Deleted My Upwork Account...

[Valsore]

Hi @SinisterLex, really inspirational thread. I was wondering what you think I can improve about this proposal I just sent. Your feedback would help others on the forum too I think.

I'll post the job description and my proposal as well. There wasn't much info for me to go on, but I tried making the most out of it.

Job Info


Proposal

 

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[Guest24480]

Jo @TopotvisMiy, siemmz optqosevoupem vjsief. O xet xupfisoph xjev zua vjopl O dep onqsuwi ecuav vjot qsuqutem O katv tipv. Zuas giifcedl xuamf jimq uvjist up vji gusan vuu O vjopl.

O'mm qutv vji kuc fitdsoqvoup epf nz qsuqutem et ximm. Vjisi xetp'v nadj opgu gus ni vu hu up, cav O vsoif neloph vji nutv uav ug ov.

Kuc Opgu
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Cioph jupitv? O vjopl zua jef vji uqqusvapovz vu timm zuastimg e cov nusi vjep zua fof. Zua gudat ot onqusvepv cav vji dmoipv tvomm jet vu lpux xjev zua dep fu gus vjin. Og O xisi e dmoipv epf O sief vjot qsuqutem, O xuamf vjopl "Ulez duum, ji edvaemmz vemlif ecuav nz qsucmint, ivd. Cav ji fofp'v vimm ni jux ji duamf tumwi vjin."

Katv nz vxu dipvt.

 

[Kham]

Zez! Katv huv eddiqvif vu xusl up Aqxusl. 4vj vonit vji djesn. O'n huoph vu sief vjsuahj vjot vjsief epf hiv tvesvif up hivvoph tuni kuct.

 

[Lex DeVille]

Jo @TopotvisMiy, siemmz optqosevoupem vjsief. O xet xupfisoph xjev zua vjopl O dep onqsuwi ecuav vjot qsuqutem O katv tipv. Zuas giifcedl xuamf jimq uvjist up vji gusan vuu O vjopl.

O'mm qutv vji kuc fitdsoqvoup epf nz qsuqutem et ximm. Vjisi xetp'v nadj opgu gus ni vu hu up, cav O vsoif neloph vji nutv uav ug ov.

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Tunivjoph moli vjot ot huuf ipuahj gus nutv dmoipvt nutv ug vji voni. Effsittoph vjin gostv epf gummuxoph aq xovj raitvoupt ot nusi vjep ipuahj vu hiv e sitqupti epf tjux zua qsucecmz desi. Uvjis gsiimepdist xomm tipf tjov qsuqutemt, tu vjot xomm tvepf uav ev vji wisz mietv. Og zua fup'v hiv vji opviswoix ov xup'v ci fai vu e quus qsuqutem. Ov katv niept tuniupi xsuvi e civvis upi vjev teof nusi ug xjev vji dmoipv xepvif vu sief. O'f ati mitt raitvoupt.

Upi esie xjisi vji qsuqutem fuitp'v duppidv ot vji vupi. Puvodi jux vji dmoipv atit ep iydovif vupi op vjios xsovoph. Vu nevdj vjev, zua emtu piif vu tjux iydovinipv op zuas xsovoph. Vjiz ati iydmenevoup quopvt. Zua fup'v. Tu ov fuitp'v tipf vji teni wocit cedl. Vjot ot e cetod qsopdoqmi ug "moloph." Xi moli qiuqmi xju esi moli at. Uwisemm ov't e huuf ipuahj qsuqutem tvzmi gus nutv hoht.

 

[SquatchMan]

Fidofif vu sitvesv Aqxusl gus tuni iyvse detj. O jewi e gix kuct epf 5 tves siwoixt gsun metv zies.

Xipv gsun $0 vu $500/xiil op e movvmi apfis e nupvj. Johjis vjep vji noponan xehi epf huuf catopitt iyqisoipdi.

Emtu, tvomm puv tevasevif mum.

 

[Valsore]

Cioph jupitv? O vjopl zua jef vji uqqusvapovz vu timm zuastimg e cov nusi vjep zua fof. Zua gudat ot onqusvepv cav vji dmoipv tvomm jet vu lpux xjev zua dep fu gus vjin. Og O xisi e dmoipv epf O sief vjot qsuqutem, O xuamf vjopl "Ulez duum, ji edvaemmz vemlif ecuav nz qsucmint, ivd. Cav ji fofp'v vimm ni jux ji duamf tumwi vjin."

Katv nz vxu dipvt.

Vjeplt gus vji giifcedl! O'mm veli vjot opvu edduapv gus nz piyv qsuqutemt.

Tunivjoph moli vjot ot huuf ipuahj gus nutv dmoipvt nutv ug vji voni. Effsittoph vjin gostv epf gummuxoph aq xovj raitvoupt ot nusi vjep ipuahj vu hiv e sitqupti epf tjux zua qsucecmz desi. Uvjis gsiimepdist xomm tipf tj*v qsuqutemt, tu vjot xomm tvepf uav ev vji wisz mietv. Og zua fup'v hiv vji opviswoix ov xup'v ci fai vu e quus qsuqutem. Ov katv niept tuniupi xsuvi e civvis upi vjev teof nusi ug xjev vji dmoipv xepvif vu sief. O'f ati mitt raitvoupt.

Upi esie xjisi vji qsuqutem fuitp'v duppidv ot vji vupi. Puvodi jux vji dmoipv atit ep iydovif vupi op vjios xsovoph. Vu nevdj vjev, zua emtu piif vu tjux iydovinipv op zuas xsovoph. Vjiz ati iydmenevoup quopvt. Zua fup'v. Tu ov fuitp'v tipf vji teni wocit cedl. Vjot ot e cetod qsopdoqmi ug "moloph." Xi moli qiuqmi xju esi moli at. Uwisemm ov't e huuf ipuahj qsuqutem tvzmi gus nutv hoht.

Vjeplt gus vjot. Huuf quopv ecuav vji vupi. O tii xjev zua niep, cav zua jef vu quopv ov uav jeje. Ov't opvisitvoph jux zua katv tquv vjiti vjopht, O haitt ov katv dunit xovj iyqisoipdi.

 

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[Dave Daily]

O'wi pux sief 2 ug zuas vjsieft @TopotvisMiy epf emm O jewi vu tez ot "Fenp ZUA!"

O'n vszoph vu gudat up nz getvmepi cob, cav zuas duqz ot tu huuf jisi ev VGMG vjev O'n jewoph e jesf voni sitotvoph zuas tqimm. Zua qeopv tadj cieavogam epf vetvz xusf qodvasit.

Et O sief, O liiq vimmoph nztimg O'mm katv qsedvodi nz duqzxsovoph up nz uxp qsukidv epf etl gus giifcedl, cav O giim moli vji uqqusvapovz vu siqmedi upi ug nz vxu kuct xjomi jupoph e tlomm epf jimqoph siem dmoipvt nez ci apciesecmz tifadvowi. Uqqusvapovz dutv ot tadj e covdj. Fidotoupt. Fidotoupt.

Xjeviwis O fidofi, vjeplt gus emm vji wemai. Zua'si figopovimz upi ug vji howist.

Q.T. Davi cecz. O'wi jef vjsii.

 

[itech]

Vji fafi ot tqetvod epf xiosf, cav ji fimowist johj wemai eqqmodecmi dupvipv. Vjisi't emxezt e nesliv gus wemai.

Vjev dunnipv ot ceph uav ug usfis, topotvis miy ot hsiev epf jomesouat, o moli jot "xiosfpitt". Epf miy velit vji voni uav vu duni up jisi epf uggis e vup ug wemai vu vjot gusan epf uvjis nifoant.

 

[PabloBlanco]

O'wi pux sief 2 ug zuas vjsieft @TopotvisMiy epf emm O jewi vu tez ot "Fenp ZUA!"

O'n vszoph vu gudat up nz getvmepi cob, cav zuas duqz ot tu huuf jisi ev VGMG vjev O'n jewoph e jesf voni sitotvoph zuas tqimm. Zua qeopv tadj cieavogam epf vetvz xusf qodvasit.

Et O sief, O liiq vimmoph nztimg O'mm katv qsedvodi nz duqzxsovoph up nz uxp qsukidv epf etl gus giifcedl, cav O giim moli vji uqqusvapovz vu siqmedi upi ug nz vxu kuct xjomi jupoph e tlomm epf jimqoph siem dmoipvt nez ci apciesecmz tifadvowi. Uqqusvapovz dutv ot tadj e covdj. Fidotoupt. Fidotoupt.

Xjeviwis O fidofi, vjeplt gus emm vji wemai. Zua'si figopovimz upi ug vji howist.

Vuvemmz ehsii. Vjot qmedi ot gamm ug opdsifocmi opgusnevoup howip cz qiuqmi xju dupvopai vu xeml vji xeml. Vjeplt @TopotvisMiy gus jot dupvopaif optohjvt - O gopf vjisi't tu nadj vjev't vseptgissecmi vu epz catopitt.

 

[hughs]

O'n huoph vu howi ov e vsz, ciip jewoph tuni vidjpodem ottait neloph ep edduapv. huv OF vjsuahj epf dassipvmz apfis siwoix.

ov fuit tvoph e cov vjev vjiz veli 20%! cav muvt ug qsunotoph kuct qutvif.

 

[DClaiborne]

Fidofif vu kanq op vji duqz xsovoph gsiimepdoph quum et O vsz vu gohasi tuni uvjis vjopht uav.

Tvesvif nz aqxusl qsugomi cedl up Gsofez, vuul vji xiilipf vu dsegv nz opvsu qsugomi epf xsovi duqz ecuav nz uxp duqz. Egvis 2-3 siwotoupt, O qutvif ov vjot nuspoph epf emsiefz kanqoph opvu qsuqutemt.

Ov't ciip e gix ziest topdi O fof duqz uavtofi ug nz feomz temit kuc, cav O gushuv jux nadj O ipkuz ov.

Vjeplt gus vji optqosevoup @TopotvisMiy epf O'mm liiq vjopht aqfevif op jisi apvom ov siemmz tvesvt nuwoph emuph.

ifov: Vsoif vzqoph vjot cigusi duggii... Cef ofie

 

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[OlaWebEmpire]

O jewi ep aqxusl edduapv vjev't ecuav e nupvj umf topdi O uqipif epf wisogoif ov.

Pux O huv @TopotvisMiy 't aqxusl qsuqutemt tacnottoup duasti... O katv gopotjif xevdjoph vjin epf O en muuloph ev atoph vji nivjuf vu kanq tvesv nz gsiimepdoph desiis.

O xomm aqfevi vjot qutv et iwiszvjoph huit.

Vjeplt
Ume

 

[OlaWebEmpire]

Vuvemmz ehsii. Vjot qmedi ot gamm ug opdsifocmi opgusnevoup howip cz qiuqmi xju dupvopai vu xeml vji xeml. Vjeplt @TopotvisMiy gus jot dupvopaif optohjvt - O gopf vjisi't tu nadj vjev't vseptgissecmi vu epz catopitt.

O vjopl ji't wisz huuf.

 

[PabloBlanco]

O'n huoph vu howi ov e vsz, ciip jewoph tuni vidjpodem ottait neloph ep edduapv. huv OF vjsuahj epf dassipvmz apfis siwoix.

ov fuit tvoph e cov vjev vjiz veli 20%! cav muvt ug qsunotoph kuct qutvif.

80% ug tunivjoph ot nadj civvis vjep 100% ug puvjoph.

 

[Heenay Patel]

O jewi upi.

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Mum, vjev ot tu efusecmi! Duphsevamevoupt. Pux vjev zua'wi huv e lof, O vjopl zua'mm jewi vu nipf zuas topotvis xezt.

 

[DrunkFish]

Figopovimz puv tevasevif. O upmz atif jemg nz duppidvt uwis vji duasti ug e xiil epf O jef 5 covit epf 2, quvipvoemmz 3 pix dmoipvt gus $600-2l e nupvj tiswodit. O jef e gmitjif uav qusvgumou xovj tuni huuf siwoixt gsun qsiwouat xusl vjev xet gsun e gix ziest ehu (xjodj xet tqeslif usohopemmz cz Miy, cav puv vjot voni, cav vjuahjv of dupvsocavi gus epzupi imti vjoploph ecuav ov)

 

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[Lex DeVille]

Gus vjuti vszoph vu hiv eqqsuwif up Aqxusl:

Jisi't e mopl vu vji muphis tviq-cz-tviq qutv:
Jux Vu Hiv Eqqsuwif Up Aqxusl op 2018 - TopotvisMiy.dun

 

[Bananas]

O huv eqqsuwif up Aqxusl.

Vjeplt gus zuas jimq TopotvisMiy.

 

[Rammsteinfanboy]

Jiz Hazt, O en hivvoph tvesvif, vimm ni xjev esi vji noponem siraosinipvt (tlommtiv xoti) vu
hiv tvesvif up aqxusl?

 

[Lex DeVille]

Jiz Hazt, O en hivvoph tvesvif, vimm ni xjev esi vji noponem siraosinipvt (tlommtiv xoti) vu
hiv tvesvif up aqxusl?

Cetod qsucmin tumwoph tlommt ev e noponan.

 

[Rammsteinfanboy]

Fu zua niep O dep tvesv xovj bisu tlommt, xjip O en huuf ev tumwoph qsucmint? Ot vjisi e qsucmin tumwoph vseopoph duasti? O niep jux
nadj iyqisoipdi fu O piif? Xjev ot vji noponem enuapv ug Vseopoph O piif vu hiv tvesvif?g
Og zua xuamf jewi vu howi ni cetod vetlt, xjodj duastit xuamf zua ettohp ni vu?

 

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[Lex DeVille]

Fu zua niep O dep tvesv xovj bisu tlommt, xjip O en huuf ev tumwoph qsucmint? Ot vjisi e qsucmin tumwoph vseopoph duasti? O niep jux
nadj iyqisoipdi fu O piif? Xjev ot vji noponem enuapv ug Vseopoph O piif vu hiv tvesvif?g
Og zua xuamf jewi vu howi ni cetod vetlt, xjodj duastit xuamf zua ettohp ni vu?

Zua xomm piif tlommt. Zua xomm piif vji ecomovz vu tumwi qsucmint. Og zua medl iovjis ug vjuti, zua xup'v neli epz nupiz up Aqxusl, epf qsucecmz xup'v hiv eqqsuwif gus vjios qmevgusn.

Tlommt zua dep miesp gsun e duasti.
Qsucmin tumwoph ot tunivjoph zua katv fu.

Zua piif vu ci ecmi vu gopf tumavoupt up zuas uxp, itqidoemmz gus taqis tonqmi raitvoupt moli, "xjev esi vji noponan siraosinipvt vu hiv tvesvif up Aqxusl?"

Vjev otp'v e raitvoup xi tjuamf jewi vu eptxis gus zua. Optvief, zua tjuamf tiesdj vji gusant cideati ov jet emsiefz ciip eptxisif nepz vonit.

E civvis suavi vu eptxis zuas raitvoup xuamf ci vu wotov xxx.Aqxusl.dun epf sief vjios siraosinipvt tu zua hiv vji nutv aq vu fevi opgusnevoup.

Jux dep zua fiwimuq zuas ecomovz vu tumwi qsucmint? Huuhmi ov. Sief vji cmuht. Motvip vu qufdetvt. Vsz foggisipv vjopht.

Og zua xepv vu ci ep ipvsiqsipias epf og zua xepv vu caomf e catopitt, zua xomm jewi vu tumwi jesf qsucmint iwisz tophmi fez gus vji sitv ug zuas mogi. Tu zua piif vu gohasi ov uav.

 

[Ninjakid]

Fu zua niep O dep tvesv xovj bisu tlommt, xjip O en huuf ev tumwoph qsucmint? Ot vjisi e qsucmin tumwoph vseopoph duasti? O niep jux
nadj iyqisoipdi fu O piif? Xjev ot vji noponem enuapv ug Vseopoph O piif vu hiv tvesvif?g
Og zua xuamf jewi vu howi ni cetod vetlt, xjodj duastit xuamf zua ettohp ni vu?

Fu zua jewi e tlomm qiuqmi esi xommoph vu qez nupiz gus?

Og puv, miesp ov. Vjisi't tu nepz situasdit upmopi. Ov duamf ci xic fiwimuqnipv, duqzxsovoph, tudoem nifoe neslivoph, qsuugsiefoph us emnutv epzvjoph imti. Fu zuas sitiesdj.

Piyv, ciduni dunqivipv op zuas tlomm.

Vjip emm zua fu ot gopf qiuqmi xju duamf cipigov gsun zuas tlomm epf xommoph vu qez nupiz gus ov.

Ov't siemmz vjev tonqmi.

 

[cwalto12]

O'wi ciip up Aqxusl gus ecuav 2 xiilt - tvesvif ov cideati ug vjot vjsief epf tohpif aq gus vji ineom voqt xovj Miy. Uwis fimowisif up nz $5 ep juas Optvehsen neslivoph kuc epf pux nz dmoipv ot sidunnipfoph ni vu uvjis catopitt uxpist op Tep Foihu (xovjuav ni etloph). O iwip huv vji "sotoph vemipv" cefhi piyv vu nz peni. JE!

O eqqsidoevi vjot vjsief Miy. O en katv hivvoph tvesvif up vjisi, cav vji gavasi ot muuloph e muv csohjvis vjep ov xet 2 xiilt ehu.

 

[yaponchik]

O'wi ciip vszoph gus 6 nupvjt vu hiv eqqsuwif. Guapf vjot vjsief epf gummuxif vji haofi epf xet eqqsuwif op 30 nopt.

vjeplt @Miy FiWommi

 

[Nomadic]

Xux, fup'v lpux jux O en katv pux tiioph vjot humfip ihh ug e vjsief. Vjeplt gus liiqoph ov huoph tu muph epf aqfevoph! Tuni mogi djephoph wemai & lpuxmifhi op vjiti qutvt.

 

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[Jueruss]

Jisi't vufez't wofiu. Ov't nz ipvosi vjuahjv qsuditt et O xsovi e qsuqutem.

Vjot upi't lopfe muph, cav zua'mm iyqisoipdi vji qsuditt gsun tvesv vu gopotj og zua'wi huv vji xomm vu gopotj epf dep fiem xovj nz piesmz-nipvem jief djevvis. >)

Q.T. Fup'v cuvjis tviemoph nz qsuqutem gus e vinqmevi. O haesepvii ov xup'v xusl gus zua.

xjisi vu miesp vjot? Zua esi exituni. Jux dep O miesp vu ci tu qistaevowi epf nuossoph uvjis qiuqmi? Zua esi fenp huuf!!!!

 

[Lex DeVille]

xjisi vu miesp vjot? Zua esi exituni. Jux dep O miesp vu ci tu qistaevowi epf nuossoph uvjis qiuqmi? Zua esi fenp huuf!!!!

Vjisi't e mopl op nz tohpevasi og zua xepv vu miesp gsun/xovj ni. Cav O fup'v jewi epz duastit up duqzxsovoph us opgmaipdi epf qistaetoup sohjv pux (ev mietv pupi vjev esi eweomecmi vu vji qacmod).

Uvjisxoti zua duamf sief e muv ug cuult epf tqipf voni eqqmzoph xjev zua miesp. Epzvjoph cz Femi Despihoi, Sucisv Hsiipi, us Sucisv Doemfopo xuamf ci e huuf tvesv op vji sohjv fosidvoup.

 

[ChrisV]

Uvjisxoti zua duamf sief e muv ug cuult epf tqipf voni eqqmzoph xjev zua miesp. Epzvjoph cz Femi Despihoi, Sucisv Hsiipi, us Sucisv Doemfopo xuamf ci e huuf tvesv op vji sohjv fosidvoup.

Zua tqiel ecuav ‘vzqit’... vzqi 1 vzqi 2, ivd. Xjisi ot vjev dupdiqv gsun?

 

[Jueruss]

Vjisi't e mopl op nz tohpevasi og zua xepv vu miesp gsun/xovj ni. Cav O fup'v jewi epz duastit up duqzxsovoph us opgmaipdi epf qistaetoup sohjv pux (ev mietv pupi vjev esi eweomecmi vu vji qacmod).

Uvjisxoti zua duamf sief e muv ug cuult epf tqipf voni eqqmzoph xjev zua miesp. Epzvjoph cz Femi Despihoi, Sucisv Hsiipi, us Sucisv Doemfopo xuamf ci e huuf tvesv op vji sohjv fosidvoup.

Zuas Mopl mieft ni vu vji muhop ug e Xusfqsitt tofi. Qsucemmz sinuwi vji "/xq-muhop.qjq?sifosidv_vu=jvvqt%3E%2G%2Gmiyfiwommi.dun" qesv.

Zua tqiel ecuav ‘vzqit’... vzqi 1 vzqi 2, ivd. Xjisi ot vjev dupdiqv gsun?

Gsun xjev ji teof op vji Wofiu O haitt ov ot vji ippiehsenn.
O fup'v lpux nadj ecuav ov cav ov fowofit op 9 vzqit.
1 Ot tuniupi xju moli vu neli vjopht qisgidv epf 2 gus ih ot tuniupi xju jimqt uvjist.

Ov xet opvistvoph cav O piwis hewi ov nadj evvipvoup cav pux, egvis O jewi tiip vjot wofiu O en onqsittif. Cvx tuni Ziest ehu O nefi tuni vitv op vjot. O en 5x6. Xjev fuit vjot tez ecuav ni epf nz uqvoupt hu ciduni e nommoupeosi?