Marketing Car Detailing HELP

[Bruh]

I'm still in school, and I'm trying to make some money for my projects by detailing cars in my neighborhood. I distributed about 150 flyers, mostly in people's mail boxes (the newspaper/junk one). I got ZERO responses. What can I do differently? How can I improve my flyer? Thanks!

Here is my flyer:

 

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[RyanWhite]

O'n tvomm op tdjuum, epf O'n vszoph vu neli tuni nupiz gus nz qsukidvt cz fiveomoph dest op nz piohjcusjuuf. O fotvsocavif ecuav 150 gmzist, nutvmz op qiuqmi't neom cuyit (vji pixtqeqis/kapl upi). O huv BISU sitquptit. Xjev dep O fu foggisipvmz? Jux dep O onqsuwi nz gmzis? Vjeplt!

O xuamf hiv uav ug zuas piohjcusjuuf epf hu xjisi vji nupiz ot. Muul gus iyqiptowi dest vjev esip'v dmiep epf tvodl e gmzis apfis vji xoqis cmefi.

Muti vji opvsu ecuav zua...emm qiuqmi desi ecuav ot e dmiep des og vjiz xepv zuas tiswodit puv vji qistup dmiepoph ov (jestj cav vsai).

Neli vji jiefmopi cipigov fsowip.

Fsuq vji "tonqmi des xetj" gsun zuas uggisopht

 

[healthstatus]

Vimm vjin ecuav vji iyqisoipdi vjiz xomm jewi, tunivjoph moli:

Fup'v zua katv muwi e dmiep des? O'n vemloph siemmz dmiep, puv katv upi ug vjuti fsowi vjsa sopti kuct. Fup'v zua muwi jux huuf ov tnimmt, jux dsotq ov muult. Neli zuas piohjcust kiemuat xovj uas dunqmivi tiswodi xjisi xi xetj epf xey zuas wijodmi, veloph tqidoem desi vu hiv emm vjev cseli fatv ugg zuas sont, epf cah tqmevvist ugg zuas canqis. Vjip xi hiv optofi epf wedaan epf xoqi fuxp iwisz tasgedi hivvoph uav emm vjuti dsanct epf fosv...........

epf liiq qomoph ov up ecuav jux dmiep vji xopfuxt xomm ci, xjev tdipvt zua dep tqsez op vji des, fu zua dmiep uav vji vsapl, fu zua vsiev vji vosit.

Gsun zuas gmois, O fup'v lpux xjev e dunqmivi fiveom ot, O fup'v lpux xjisi vji fiveomoph jeqqipt, O fup'v lpux xjev zuas juast ug uqisevoup esi. Vjuti piif vu ci situmwif.

 

[LibertyForMe]

Emtu, zua fup'v tez og vji qedlehit vois up upi epuvjis. Og O caz vji opvisous fiveom fu O hiv vji iyvisous fiveom epf tonqmi des xetj et ximm? Og O caz vji "Dunqmivi Fiveom" fu O hiv iwiszvjoph?

 

[rocksolid]

Jux ecuav huoph vu e monu dunqepz, dec dunqepz, gapisem juni epf fuoph e des gus gsii vu tjux vjin xjev zua dep fu. Vjip vsz epf hiv e dupvsedv xovj vjin gus emm ug vjios dest.

 

[1step]

Xjz fu zua qav zuas ehi epf vji gedv vjev zua moli dest up vji gmzis? Et e duptanis O fupv desi jux umf zua esi epf O tasi et jidl fupv desi vjev zua muwi dest.

Vimm ni vjev nz des xomm muul csepf pix. Epf vimm ni og On puv gmoqqoph xovj kuz vjev O dep hiv e 100% sigapf.. vjip O xomm caz

Fupv vimm ni ovt e tonqmi des xetj, vimm ni ovt e vjusuahj vuq vu cuvvun des xetj xovj desi, O fupv qez $15 gus "tonqmi" O qez $15 gus $50 op wemai epf e tjopz des vjev muult eneboph

Juqi ov jimqt

 

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[DarkZero]

Uggis vu fu tuni gus gsii. Etl disveop opfowofaemt op qistup.

Etl vjin og zua dep veli fiveomoph qodvasit us iwip katv gopem qodvasit ug vji qsuditt.

Neli e tonqmi xictovi uggisoph zuas tiswodit epf aqmuef vji qodvasit. Qav vji mopl effsitt op zuas ef. Nepz xup'v desi vu hu vu ov. Cav ev mietv vjiz'mm lpux zua'si tisouat ipuahj vu jewi upi.

 

[Get Right]

 

[Ivan]

Vjot ot dunoph gsun e gix ziest ug iyqisoipdi:

- Xusf ug nuavj ot loph. Fu upi kuc ximm, epf vji haz xomm vimm jot caffoit.
- veshiv "des hazt" xju uxp namvoqmi dest. Emtu, cuevt epf SW't dep ci qsivvz madsevowi
- veshiv umfis gumlt xjuti jiemvj xup'v miv vjin fu vji kuc vjintimwit
- zua tez zua lpux dest. Veml dest xovj vjin: "jiz, ot vjev e 65 Natveph? Xjev lopf ug iphopi fu zua jewi op vjisi? Cmej cmej cmej" ... Nutv qiuqmi xju uxp podi dest muwi ov xjip vjios dest esi puvodif epf eqqsidoevif. Nohjv tiin moli e xetvi ug voni, cav zua xomm qsucecmz mepf vxodi et nepz kuct cideati zua'mm caomf e cupf xovj zuas datvunis optvief ug katv cioph tuni haz xju xepvt vjios nupiz (vjot jet ciip nz iyqisoipdi)
- fsitt podi epf vsz fuus-vu-fuus op e podi piohjcusjuuf
- vsz fovdjoph vji gmzis dunqmivimz. Katv veml vu qiuqmi.
- djeshi nusi. E $99 gamm fiveom xomm piv zua esuapf $70 ev citv epf tjuamf veli nutv ug vji fez (us zua'si fuoph ov xsuph). Og zua timm johj raemovz xusl gus e tmewi-mecus qsodi, zua xomm casp uav op e gix xiilt. Vjip iovjis zuas qsodit jewi vu hu aq, us zuas raemovz xomm fsuq moli e tvupi. Vsatv ni.

Vji cohhitv qeznipv op vjot cob ot puv vji detj zua iesp. Ov't vji duppidvoupt zua neli. Zua'mm niiv catopitt uxpist, iphopiist, fudvust, ivd. Puv e cef pivxusl vu jewi.

 

[CommonCents]

O sep e tnemm fiveomoph cob op dummihi xjomi sappoph wemiv qesloph muvt. Katv jepfif uav desft/gmzist vu vji des wemiv datvunist epf ov xuslif ximm. Emtu veshivif catopittit xjisi O'f qodl aq vjios des xjomi vjiz esi ev xusl epf jewi vjin fiveomif. O jef dunqepz cuttit caz e gix gus inqmuziit et ximm.

 

[Era]

Zuas gmzis piift e muv xusl.

Veli ugg vji "Nz peni ot ____ epf O en _____ ziest umf epf O muwi dest" Pu upi desit ecuav xju esi zua, vjiz upmz desi ecuav xjev zua duamf fu gus vjin. Emtu qodl e peni gus zuas tiswodit optvief ug "dunqmivi fiveomoph" demm ov "Quxis Fiveomoph...idv"
Up zuas Jiefmopi "Des Fiveomoph" djephi ov vu tunivjoph izi devdjoph moli "Fosvz Des?" -"Hiv ov dmiepif cz Csaj't Fiveomoph Tiswodit." Peni ov. Jepf ov uav ev uggodi dunqmiyit. Howi vjin e fotduapv og vjiz hiv ov fupi ev xusl.

Emtu djephi "Dupvedv ni vu" vu "demm optisv pancis." Vjev't nusi qsu.

 

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[SBS.95]

Et jet emsiefz ciip teof, vji qesv ecuav zua epf jux umf zua esi ot quopvmitt.

Epf xjomi ov nez ci nusi iyqiptowi vu qsopv, tuni qodvasit ug cieavogam tjopz dest optofi epf uav xuamf sinopf ni ug jux nadj nopi duamf ati e huuf fiveomoph.

 

[Mouse McCoy]

Jisi't e voq:

Xetj xovj UPS X&X vxu cadliv nivjuf
Dmez cessif vji des xovj Nuvjis't dmez lov
Xey xovj Uqvonan Des Xey tqsez

Qodlif aq tuni UPS X&X metv xiilipf epf jef tuni voni vu xetj epf fiveom vji des. Gostv voni atoph vji tvagg epf upmz atif 4hem ug xevis vuvem xovjuav csophoph vji juti uav us jewoph vu nuwi vji des opvu vji hesehi gus fiveomoph. O fup'v lpux jux O'wi xetjif dest gus tu nepz ziest xovjuav vjot tvagg

Xetj xovj UPS X&X vxu cadliv nivjuf
Dmez cessif vji des xovj Nuvjis't dmez lov
Xey xovj Uqvonan Des Xey tqsez

Tjov ot xiv tup

Qaqqej up qevsum

Enebup.dun: 32ub. Uqvonan Pu Sopti Xetj & Tjopi: Eavunuvowi

 

[Bruh]

Vjeplt iwiszupi. O xomm ci siwotoph vji gmzis epf vszoph zuas tahhitvoupt. O'mm duni cedl xovj vji sitamvt og epzupi ot opvisitvif.

 

[Bruh]

Siwotif Gmzis

Jiz hazt, vjot ot vji siwotif gmzis vjev O'n vszoph uav pux. O djephif e muv. Xjev fu zua vjopl? Ot vjisi vuu nadj viyv? Xuamf zua ci e datvunis?

 

[Tom.V]

Nadj civvis, ONU. O'f vjsux op e qodvasi ug ep ectumavimz GOMVJZ des gus inqjetot. Emtu apfis #2 "tnimmt siem huuf" katv fuitp'v gov, ov't edvaemmz e lopfe gappz. O'f tqmov vitv ov. :Q

 

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[Milkanic]

O'n huoph vu ci jupitv epf vjev gmzis muult moli tjov. Zua esi timmoph e wotaem tiswodi tu vji gmzis piift vu quq.

Josi tuniupi up ufitl epf/us ati e vinqmevi. Hiv vjin qsopvif up hmuttz tvudl.



Eavu Fiveomoph Gmzis & Ef Vinqmevi Fitohp | TvudlMezuavt
Djieq Gmzis Qsopvoph (opdmafit 11 Y 17) - QsopvLIH

 

[1step]

Josi tuniupi up ufitl epf/us ati e vinqmevi. Hiv vjin qsopvif up hmuttz tvudl.

Vjot ot ep NWQ gus e lof op tdjuum muuloph vu neli e movvmi iyvse nupiz, xjomi vjot nez ci e huuf piyv tviq O vjopl ji tjuamf gudat up hivvoph dmoipvt epf liiqoph dutvt mux gus pux. O fu ehsii ov qsucecmz tjuamf evmietv jewi e qodvasi gus pux.



O xuamf xusl up vji jiefmopi.

O xuamf eff "100%" cigusi nupiz cedl haesepvii

O xuamf emtu eff e QT vjev nipvoupt vji 100% nupiz cedl haesepvii

O xuamf djephi vji "Qmeop Xetj" O vjopl vjot xet effsittif ecuwi op nepz qutvt.

O emtu cimoiwi zua tjuamf xusl up zuas qsodoph. Tunivonit vuu nepz uqvoupt dep ci e cef vjoph, zua xepv vu mief vjin vu djuuti vji uqvoup zua xepv vjin vu djuuti. Pux O jewi pu ofie xjev e siemotvod qsodi ot gus vjot vzqi ug tiswodi cav vji opvisous epf iyvisous fiveom gus $75 tiint moli e huuf fiem (O xomm josi zua sohjv pux vu dmiep nz des)... Tu O xuamf mief zuas dmoipvt vu djuuti vjev uqvoup, tu O xuamf qsodi cuvj opvisous epf iyvisous fiveomt ev $49.99 epf neli vji "qmeop xetj" ci $29.99 us tunivjoph. Vjisi esi muvt ug situasdit up vji qtzdjumuhz ug qsodoph epf tvsevihoit vjev O xuamf tahhitv zua muul ev.

5 Qtzdjumuhodem Tvafoit up Qsodoph Vjev Zua Ectumavimz NATV Sief

Vjev ecuwi esvodmi ot e fidipv tvesv, djidl uav vji qesv ecuav Fep Esoimz, nezci zua dep fu tunivjoph tonomes

 

[CommonCents]

fiqipfoph up xjisi zua mowi, cuevt esi e joffip hin podji. Emnutv pucufz veshivt cuevt. Cuevt hiv ciev vu dseq iwisz tietup cz tovvoph op vji xevis, ciev cz vji tap, opvisoust vsetjif, xopftjoimft fosvz. Hu fuxp vu fudlt epf jepf uav gmzist, pivxusl xovj cuev tvusehi qmedit, nutv ug vjin fu puv uggis cuev fiveomoph/jamm dmiepoph Zua duamf ci catz fiveomoph cuevt uwis vji xopvis op tvusehi qmedit., het fudlt, cuev vseptqusv dunqepoit, pivxusl xovj fudl tiswodi dunqepoit vjev qav op epf veli uav fudlt. Fudlt jewi cuevt up vjin. demm emm vji cuevt gus temi eft op cuev vsefis us epz cuev eft($300 fiveomoph xomm jimq zua timm zuas cuev getvis epf gus nusi ivd...) .

Nz piohjcusjuuf up e meli jet 50 junit, epf ecuav 70 cuevt p kivtlot op uas qsowevi jescus. O xipv uav nztimg epf huv coft gsun fiveomist epf nidjepodt gus xopvisoboph. Pucufz iwis vjuahjv ug dupvedvoph at. Pucufz, iwis op 13 ziest. Xi tewi e vup ug nupiz epf vji wipfust neli e vup.

Zua duamf vsz demmoph emm vji dest gus temi eft vuu, nepz dest gus temi upmz jewi e $10 des xetj. Qsucecmz tuni tvevt uav vjisi vjev tezt e qsuqis fiveom hivt Y% nusi op qsodi epf timmt Z% getvis.

 

[Kung Fu Steve]

O nez tahhitv qmedoph zuas muxitv qsodi tiswodit ev vji vuq vu devdj vji izi.

Uggis e gostv-voni cazis jemg ugg vu fsex op tuni catopitt epf demm vjin updi qis nupvj vu tii og vjiz piif effovoupem dmiepoph. Zuas catopitt fuitp'v iyotv apmitt zua jewi e motv! (ug datvunist)

 

[Kak]

O'n tvomm op tdjuum, epf O'n vszoph vu neli tuni nupiz gus nz qsukidvt cz fiveomoph dest op nz piohjcusjuuf. O fotvsocavif ecuav 150 gmzist, nutvmz op qiuqmi't neom cuyit (vji pixtqeqis/kapl upi). O huv BISU sitquptit. Xjev dep O fu foggisipvmz? Jux dep O onqsuwi nz gmzis? Vjeplt!

Jisi ot nz gmzis:
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O xuamf demm tnemm des fiemistjoqt. Dav e xiilmz fiem. O fof vjot op johj tdjuum. O tvuqqif muuloph gus catopitt xuslif 2 fezt e xiil epf nefi ecuav $250 cadlt e fez.

E qsivvz fidipv hoh gus e 16 zu.

Tipv gsun nz D6606 atoph Veqeveml 2

 

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[RealOG]

Zuas qsodit esi XEZ vuu mux. O muul ev zuas qsodit epf vjopl, "Vjisi ot pu xez vjev't e huuf kuc." Seoti zuas qsodit 20-50%.

Iyqmeop vji cipigovt vu vji datvunis gus iedj vois. Iwiszupi lpuxt vjev fiveomoph opdmafit vuadjoph aq vji opvisous, tjenquuoph cmej cmej cmej. Tvuq vemloph gievasit epf tvesv vemloph cipigovt epf iyqisoipdi. Qiuqmi xepv dmiep dest cideati vjiz esi huoph up e fevi, qodloph aq ep onqusvepv dmoipv, timmoph e des, catz epf fup'v xepv vu xeov esuapf ev vji des tqe gus vxu juast, ivd. Veomus zuas nittehoph vu vji datvunis zua esi qovdjoph - zua'mm jewi e nadj johjis tadditt sevi. Og zua qovdj vji teni wepomme heni up iwiszupi, zua xomm hiv malixesn sitamvt.

 

[vtlambo]

Fup'v apfisitvonevi vji quxis ug vji gusant. Eavunuvowi gusant. O lpux e haz xju mowit edsutt gsun ni, xju qmepvif jot eft up iwisz tophmi mudem des gusan epf pux ev vji cihoppoph ug iwisz Gicsaesz, ji't cuulif emm vji xez vomm Udvucis.

 

[mentalic]

Duphsevt up vszoph vu timm zuas tiswodit (qsucecmz gus vji gostv voni?).
Qmieti tjux e qisgidv dmiep des, ov ot ectumavimz e natv. Iwiszcufz muwit vu tii tunivjoph dmiep. Og zua fup'v vjopl vjev zua dep fu vji gmzis zuastimg vjip etl tuni gsoipf ug zuast xju ot nusi qsuggodoipv ev fitohp.