My First eBook, what do you think? (Free Copy)

[oble01]

I just published my first eBook on Amazon. I'd love it if you were able to check it out and give me some feedback. What do you think of the title, cover, description, etc? Any advice or suggestions that would help me make my next one even better would be appreciated.

Here is the link on amazon.com, it's free on Amazon for the next few days - http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00P4KGWLM/?tag=tff-amazonparser-20

I look forward to hearing any feedback you have good or bad.

Thanks!

 

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[oble01]

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