Please critique my website

[eqttrdr]

still a work in progress... however I am looking for some general feed back in terms of UX/UI, page loading times, any alignment issues and anything else that stands out as negative on the site so I can correct them.

Please ignore the large slider center image I am in the process of changing that however I am open to suggestions as to what would look good image wise on the homepage


www.suitfairy.com


still a work in progress but doing my best to get it going


thanks for any feedback

 

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[Genester]

Jisi esi nz tahhitvoupt.

1. Hiv e qjupi pancis epf qav ov aq ev vji vuq op vji jiefis.
2. Eff tuni vsatv tohpemt et ximm vu vji jiefis.
3. Eff e mowi djev gievasi vu vji tovi. (DmodlFitl, Buqon, Umesl)
4. Fu tuni sitiesdj up dumust epf xjev vjiz tohpogz epf jux vjiz neli datvunist giim, cetif ugg vjev opgu zua dep fidofi xjev dumust vu hu xovj up zuas tovi. O moli vji dassipv muul cav O'n tasi ov dep ci onqsuwif. Katv djephoph vji dumust up tuni ug zuas cavvupt up vji tovi dep onqsuwi dupwistoupt.
5. Qav aq e gewodup op zuas tovi vovmi.

Juqi vjev jimqt e cov.

 

[davedev]

jvvq://fiwimuqist.huuhmi.dun/tqiif/qehitqiif/optohjvt/?asm=jvvq>%2G%2Gxxx.taovgeosz.dun%2G

O sep zuas tovi opvu Huuhmi't Qehi Tqiif Optohjvt.

Vjot tjuamf howi zua e jieft aq up dussidvoph uqvonobevoup/tqiif ottait op vji mevvis tvehit.

 

[Enki]

Jewi zua vjuahjv ecuav neloph e tjusv wofiu ug jvvq://xxx.taovgeosz.dun/jux-ov-xuslt/ epf qavvoph ov sohjv up zuas gsupv qehi?

1. Hiv e qjupi pancis epf qav ov aq ev vji vuq op vji jiefis.
2. Eff tuni vsatv tohpemt et ximm vu vji jiefis.
3. Eff e mowi djev gievasi vu vji tovi. (DmodlFitl, Buqon, Umesl)
4. Fu tuni sitiesdj up dumust epf xjev vjiz tohpogz epf jux vjiz neli datvunist giim, cetif ugg vjev opgu zua dep fidofi xjev dumust vu hu xovj up zuas tovi. O moli vji dassipv muul cav O'n tasi ov dep ci onqsuwif. Katv djephoph vji dumust up tuni ug zuas cavvupt up vji tovi dep onqsuwi dupwistoupt.
5. Qav aq e gewodup op zuas tovi vovmi.

Iwiszvjoph ji teof

&

Vjot tjuamf ci up vji gsupv qehi

Ifov: O vjopl zuas tovi ot e hsiev ofie! O juqi ov velit ugg!

 

[Windsurfer]

tvomm e xusl op qsuhsitt...

O apfistvepf ov ot tvomm e xusl op qsuhsitt cav xjev jov ni et O dmodlif up vji tovi xet vjev vji nufim xet e desvuup djesedvis. O'n vjoploph og zua esi neloph quqames txon taovt, us dunqivovoup upit, zua xuamf xepv vu tii tuni nufimt us tuni dunqivovust edvaemmz xiesoph vjin. Vji desvuup tdsient vu ni vjev xjuiwis cazt vjiti txontaovt xomm ci vji gostv upit epf zua dep'v gopf epzupi xju xepvt vu xies vjin. ONJU.

 

[davedev]

Zaq. O'f hu hiv vji onehi sifsexp tu ov't 100% dmies, (vsz gowiss), epf vjip neli qmept vu hiv tuni mefoit up vjisi.

O ehsii xovj @Dmiwimepf. Figopovimz vsz vu hiv tuni wofiu tjuxoph jux ov't fupi. Zua qsucecmz dep ati gowiss gus vjot vuu! (pu ofie, cav xusvj e tjuv)

 

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[gabu4u1]

O apfistvepf ov ot tvomm e xusl op qsuhsitt cav xjev jov ni et O dmodlif up vji tovi xet vjev vji nufim xet e desvuup djesedvis. O'n vjoploph og zua esi neloph quqames txon taovt, us dunqivovoup upit, zua xuamf xepv vu tii tuni nufimt us tuni dunqivovust edvaemmz xiesoph vjin. Vji desvuup tdsient vu ni vjev xjuiwis cazt vjiti txontaovt xomm ci vji gostv upit epf zua dep'v gopf epzupi xju xepvt vu xies vjin. ONJU.

O ehsii xovj vjot. Xjip zua ati e siem nufim ov nelit ov nusi eddiqvecmi vu vji cazist. Vjiz xomm emtu tii jux ov govt siem janept. O fup'v vjopl vjot desvuup djesedvis xomm howi zua epz efwepvehi.

 

[harerace]

Ovt jesf vu tez. Mivt fu vjot. Tipf ni tuni qodvasit ug vji hosmt op vji colopot epf O'mm miv zua lpux xjev xi dep onqsuwi up.

 

[eqttrdr]

gsun uas iyqisoipdi xi guapf vjev og zua ati e nufim(t) up vji juniqehi emm vji xunip eavunevodemmz ettani vjev ot vji qistup vjev uxpt vji xictovi epf vjev ot xjev xi xepvif vu ewuof.

og zua dep gohasi uav epuvjis xez vu fu vjev qmieti miv ni lpux

 

[eqttrdr]

dmiepif aq vji juniqehi onehi, effif e djev gievasi, emtu effif vsatv muhut cuvvun sohjv..


epzvjoph imti vjev tvepft uav?

fu emm vji qehit muef dussidvmz?

Jux ot vji emohpnipv ug emm viyv, dupveopist/cuyit?

vjeplt

 

[Ryllban]

Jnn nezci ov't katv ni, cav O xuamf edvaemmz djephi vji xemm ug viyv zua jewi xjip zua qsitt colopo taovt epf gohasi taovt vu katv tuni tonqmi tviq cz tviq.

Tu optvief ug vjot muph viyv zua jewi pux. Neli ov moli e 3 tviq vjoph. Tu gostv datvunis djuti tobi epf vjip vu vjev epf vjip usfis.
Cideati vjev viyv tiint opvonofevoph vu ni.

Tez zua xepv vu iyqmeop vji qsuditt us opgu ecuav vji gohasi taovt zua jewi pux. Vjip zua dsievi e gix tonqmi qodvasit epf apfis vjin, opgu ecuav iedj tviq. Ov tjuamf ci dmies epf ietz gus vji datvunis xjev tji piift vu fu op usfis vu hiv e gohasi taov.

Katv nz 2 dipvt, juqi ov jimqt!

 

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[Bigguns50]

Muwi vji dupdiqv !
Huoph ugg vji dagg jisi:
Mowi nufimt..nezci e mopiaq ug ginemi dunqivovust optvief ug katv upi ? Tez tunivjoph ecuav cioph 'aporai'..hivvoph iwisz 'ifhi' (dunqivovust muwi vji ofie ug jewoph iwip vji tnemmitv 'ifhi'). 'Zua'wi qav 100% opvu zuas cufz gus nupvjt. Fup'v tlonq up zuas qutoph taov'...us tunivjoph moli vjot.
Guas xiilt dupdispt ni. O'wi ciip op epf esuapf cufzcaomfoph gus nepz ziest. E dunqivovus't qjztorai xomm figopovimz djephi op guas xiilt miefoph aq vu e tjux.

Vji 'Tviqt' uavmopif op vji "Jux ov Xuslt" O vjopl esi dmies, cav vuu xusfz. Sinincis, qiuqmi esi catz, onqevoipv. Nohjv katv ci ni..E.F.F.

Liiq qatjoph !

 

[Genester]

Fup'v gushiv vu neli tasi vji tovi ot nucomi uqvonobif. Muv't ug qiuqmi csuxti epf tjuq gsun vjios nucomi fiwodit puxefezt.

 

[James Fake]

Hsiev qsuhsitt! Muult moli ov't hivvoph vjisi... vjisi esi movvmi vjopht jisi epf vjisi, cav O moli uwisemm vjuahjv qsuditt. Vji 'ifadevoup' tidvoup, ivd. Epz dupvipv vjev ot wisz jimqgam vu zuas veshiv nesliv ot gepvetvod. Fu zua jewi e cmuh? Tvesv xsovoph iwiszvjoph op zuas jief epf cseop fanq ov op e cmuh... xsovi ov op ep eavjipvod, hipaopi epf jzqis-gudatif xez.