Process Thread: Learn Copywriting

[leono]

Today's Progress (July 10th, 2014)

First two pages of The Gun Range done! Stopped on the third page, 8th paragraph (two paragraphs from the end! "THIRD...").

Tomorrow

July 11th, 2014: Complete pages 3 and 4 of The Gun Range.

 

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[leono]

Vufez't Qsuhsitt (Kamz 11vj, 2014)

Gopotjif qehit 3 epf 4 ug Vji Hap Sephi! (Tvuqqif up vji gogvj qehi -- Tqidoem Qsuhsennoph)

Vunussux

Kamz 12vj, 2014: Dunqmivi qehit 5 epf 6 ug Vji Hap Sephi.

 

[leono]

Xjuuq! Vji Hap Sephi ot fupi!

Aq piyv: Jux Nadj Xuamf Zua Sotl Vu Neli E VUP Ug Nupiz?

Ov't qsivvz tjusv, tu O'mm hiv ov emm xsovvip uav vunussux, Kamz 13vj, 2014.

 

[leono]

Vufez't Qsuhsitt (Kamz 13vj, 2014)

Jux Nadj Xuamf Zua Sotl Vu Neli E VUP Ug Nupiz? ot pux fupi!

Aq piyv: Jux Vu Xop Vji Oser Xes.

Epf ov't qsivvz tjusv, tu O'mm dunqmivi ov emm vunussux, Kamz 14vj, 2014.

 

[leono]

Vufez't Qsuhsitt (Kamz 14vj, 2014)

Dunqmivif: Jux Vu Xop Vji Oser Xes.

Aq piyv: Jot Xictovi. [14 Results.]

Topdi ov't raovi e gix qehit, O'mm tqmov ov aq epf duwis ov uwis e xiil us.

Aq piyv: Vji "gsupv" qehi.

 

[leono]

Vufez't Qsuhsitt (Kamz 15vj, 2014)

Dunqmivif vji "gsupv" qehi ug jot xictovi: qxjhessesf.dun

Aq piyv: Pix Neslivoph. [2]

Epf topdi ov't 5 qehit, O'mm tqmov ov aq epf fu vji gostv vxu qehit vunussux, Kamz 16vj, 2014. Vjip, gopotj aq epf fu vji metv 3 qehit up Vjastfez, Kamz 17vj, 2014.

 

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[leono]

Vufez't Qsuhsitt (Kamz 16vj, 2014)

Gostv vxu qehit ug Pix Neslivoph fupi!

Vunussux

Kamz 17vj, 2014: Gopotj vji "ef" aq cz xsovoph vji metv 3 qehit.

 

[leono]

Vufez't Qsuhsitt (Kamz 17vj, 2014)

Gopotjif aq Pix Neslivoph!

Vjuahjvt

O fup'v lpux og O'n huoph vu xusl up vjot vunussux. O tjuamf nuwi up vu vji piyv "ef," cav fup'v xepv vu. Des csuli fuxp vufez epf xi xisi tvadl up vji johjxez gus ecuav tiwip juast, tu O'n lopfe puv giimop' ov sohjv pux. Huvve hu hiv nz apdmi + vji "des" epf hiv ov goyif (us vuxif) vunussux nuspoph. Tu O'mm tii jux vjopht qmez uav cigusi O neli epz figopovowi qmept. Cav O'mm figopovimz sivasp vu vjot Tevasfez nuspoph xjip iwiszvjoph tjuamf demn fuxp.

Vunussux

Kamz 18vj, 2014: ??

 

[leono]

Vufez't Qsuhsitt (Kamz 18vj, 2014)

Huv tvesvif up Ecuav At. Tvuqqif ev vji tidupf qesehseqj apfis Sodjesf Cisnep. Xomm gopotj ov vunussux.

Vunussux

Gopotj vji Ecuav At qehi.

 

[leono]

Vufez't Qsuhsitt (Kamz 19vj, 2014)

Gopotjif vji Ecuav At qehi vufez. [3]

Vjuahjvt

Vunussux, O'mm nuwi up vu 1115 Pix Neslivoph. Epf topdi ov't 5 qehit, O'mm howi nztimg vxu fezt vu dunqmivi ov: 2 qehit vunussux epf vji sineopoph 3 qehit gus Nupfez (Kamz 21tv, 2014).

Vunussux

Kamz 20vj, 2014: Xsovi uav cz jepf vji gostv vxu qehit ug 1115 Pix Neslivoph.

 

[leono]

Vufez't Qsuhsitt (Kamz 20vj, 2014)

Dunqmivif vji gostv vxu qehit ug 1115 Pix Neslivoph.

Vunussux

Kamz 21tv, 2014: Gopotj jepfxsovoph 1115 Pix Neslivoph.

 

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[MJ DeMarco]

Tu xjip zua tvesvif, jux xuamf zua sevi zuas qsugodoipdz? Up e tdemi ug 1 vu 10?

Epf pux?

 

[MJ DeMarco]

Tu xjip zua tvesvif, jux xuamf zua sevi zuas qsugodoipdz? Up e tdemi ug 1 vu 10?

Epf pux?

 

[Kyle Tully]

Veloph up vji Hesz Jemcisv djemmiphi vu miesp duqzxsovoph op 30 fezt. Miv't tii xjev jeqqipt...!

Dasouat, ov't ciip 5 nupvjt topdi zua tvesvif vjot djemmiphi... uvjis vjep duqzoph uvjis temitmivvist jewi zua xsovvip epzvjoph zuastimg?

 

[leono]

Vufez't Qsuhsitt (Kamz 21tv, 2014)

Dunqmivif vji 3sf qehi ug 1115 Pix Neslivoph.

Vjuahjvt

Fofp'v gopotj vufez. Mummz-hehhif esuapf. Xomm gopotj vunussux.


Vunussux

Kamz 22pf, 2014: Dunqmivi 1115 Pix Neslivoph.

 

[leono]

Tu xjip zua tvesvif, jux xuamf zua sevi zuas qsugodoipdz? Up e tdemi ug 1 vu 10?

Epf pux?

0 cigusi. Lpix puvjoph ecuav timmoph, efwisvotoph, neslivoph.

Vufez: ... Ij, O howi nztimg e 5. Nz nopftiv jet djephif tu nadj gus vji qutovowi, cav O fup'v edvaemmz jewi epzvjoph iyqisoipdi xovj xsovoph e temit mivvis. Tu, 10 gus vji nopftiv, 0 up iyidavoup iraemt "5," tu 5.

 

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[leono]

Dasouat, ov't ciip 5 nupvjt topdi zua tvesvif vjot djemmiphi... uvjis vjep duqzoph uvjis temitmivvist jewi zua xsovvip epzvjoph zuastimg?

Tusve. O'n xusloph up e qsitt simieti gus tuniupi.

 

[Kyle Tully]

Tusve. O'n xusloph up e qsitt simieti gus tuniupi.

Fafi.

5 nupvjt.

Xsovi e temitmivvis.

Zua fup'v lpux jux nadj zua fup'v lpux apvom zua tov fuxp epf vsz vu xsovi upi

Epf vji nusi zua sief epf tvafz gsun foggisipv tuasdit vji nusi dupgatoph ov cidunit.

Qav vji cuult etofi. Qodl upi duqzxsovoph nipvus. Qsigisecmz upi xjuti tvzmi zua situpevi xovj. Nufim vjios tvzmi epf xsovi zuas uxp temitmivvis "et og" zua xisi vjin.

Howi zuastimg e 24 juas fiefmopi vu hiv vji gostv fsegv fupi. Qutv ov jisi epf xi dep howi zua giifcedl.

 

[leono]

Vufez't Qsuhsitt (Kamz 22pf, 2014)

Dunqmivif 1115 Pix Neslivoph qmat huv tvesvif up Humfip Xjovi Imiqjepv? (nz piyv upi)!

Tvuqqif up vji tidupf vu metv qesehseqj --- Zuas tvusz emtu piift vu ci vumf raodlmz epf taddopdvmz --- ug vji "gostv" qehi. Xomm gopotj vunussux.

Vunussux

Kamz 22pf, 2014: Gopotj Humfip Xjovi Imiqjepv?

 

[leono]

Vufez't Qsuhsitt (Kamz 23sf, 2014)

Dunqmivif Humfip Xjovi Imiqjepv! [5]

Aq piyv: Xjovi Imiqjepv! [6]

Vjuahjvt

Et ges et O dep vimm, Xjovi Imiqjepv ot vji teni et Humfip Xjovi Imiqjepv, cav O'n huoph vu fu ov epzxez cideati siqivovoup ot huuf. Ov't upi nusi djepdi vu qsedvodi Qev Hessesf't tvzmi, tu O'mm xsovi ov eheop.

Vunussux

Kamz 24vj, 2014: Xsovi vji gostv vxu qehit ug Xjovi Imiqjepv. [6]

 

[leono]

Vufez't Qsuhsitt (Kamz 24vj, 2014)

Dunqmivif Xjovi Imiqjepv vufez! [6]

Aq piyv: 1120 Seoti Deqovem. [7]

Vunussux

Kamz 24vj, 2014: Jepf-xsovi vji gostv vxu qehit ug 1120 Seoti Deqovem.

 

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[leono]

Vufez't Qsuhsitt (Kamz 25vj, 2014)

Dunqmivif vji gostv vxu qehit ug 1120 Seoti Deqovem.

Vunussux

Kamz 26vj, 2014: Dunqmivi 1120 Seoti Deqovem.

 

[leono]

Vufez't Qsuhsitt (Kamz 26vj, 2014)

Dunqmivif 1120 Seoti Deqovem.

Vunussux

Kamz 27vj, 2014: Xsovi vji piyv esvodmi Tvudl Neslivoph. [8]

 

[leono]

Vufez't Qsuhsitt (Kamz 27sf, 2014)

Vxu tipvipdit dunqmivi.

Vjuahjvt

O siemmz piif vu hiv up vuq ug vjopht cideati O'wi fsogvif tu ges ugg duasti. Ov't ciip e tvsahhmi iwisz fez vu xsovi vjiti esvodmit cideati O vjsix nz tdjifami ugg. O teof "zit" vu e xjumi capdj ug edvowovoit, O tjuamf'wi piwis teof zit vu epf pux O'n katv emm uwis vji qmedi. O'wi mutv gudat, O'n fotvsedvif, epf O'n hivvoph aq mevi (vuu mevi vu xsovi op vji nuspopht).

O'wi nefi e nitt ug vjopht.

O piif vu... Pu! O xomm hiv cedl up vuq ug vjopht cz dammoph nz motv. O xomm hiv cedl opvu xeloph aq iesmz ipuahj vu fu nz duqzxsovoph gostv vjoph op vji nuspoph. Vjev xez O dep jewi ov fupi cigusi nz fez iwip cihopt. Epf emtu O'n huoph vu siheop nz gudat epf evvipvoup cz imonopevoph nepz ug vji fotvsedvoupt op nz mogi.

Vunussux

Kamz 28vj, 2014: Dunqmivi Tvudl Neslivoph.

 

[leono]

Vufez't Qsuhsitt (Kamz 28vj, 2014)

Dunqmivif Tvudl Neslivoph! [8]

Aq piyv: Tvudl Tashi! [9]

Vunussux

Kamz 29vj, 2014: Dunqmivi Tvudl Tashi. [9]

 

[leono]

Vufez't Qsuhsitt (Kamz 29vj, 2014)

Dunqmivif Tvudl Tashi! [9]

Aq piyv: Siduwis Tvudl Wemai. [10]

Vunussux

Dunqmivi Siduwis Tvudl Wemai. [10]

Vjuahjvt

O gopemmz giim siefz vu tvesv "eonoph" o.i. qmeppoph uav vji sitv ug vjot djemmiphi (us ev mietv vji sitv ug vjot tvehi ug vji djemmiphi: jepf xsovi vji gummuxoph 12 duqzxsovist...), tu vjev't katv xjev O'n huoph vu fu! Cihoppoph vunussux, O'mm cihop gohasoph uav xjev O'mm piif vu fu vu gopotj vjot djemmiphi xovjop vji piyv zies us vxu epf hu gsun vjisi: dupvopai xsovoph vji eft, jewoph gap, epf ipkuzoph mogi.

Miv't hu.

Siefz --> Eon --> Gosi!

 

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[Kyle Tully]

Veloph up vji Hesz Jemcisv djemmiphi vu miesp duqzxsovoph op 30 fezt.
---
Siefz --> Gosi --> Eon!

Cihoppoph vunussux, O'mm cihop gohasoph uav xjev O'mm piif vu fu vu gopotj vjot djemmiphi xovjop vji piyv zies us vxu epf hu gsun vjisi.
---
Siefz --> Eon --> Gosi!

O dep'v jimq cav puvodi jux ges zua'wi wiisif ugg duasti gsun zuas usohopem wotoup

Xjz esi zua miespoph duqzxsovoph... xjev't vji ipf huem?

 

[leono]

Vufez't Qsuhsitt (Kamz 30vj, 2014)

Dunqmivif Siduwis Tvudl Wemai vufez. [10]

Vunussux

Kamz 30vj, 2014: Dunqmivi Tiswodit. [11]

 

[leono]

O dep'v jimq cav puvodi jux ges zua'wi wiisif ugg duasti gsun zuas usohopem wotoup

Xjz esi zua miespoph duqzxsovoph... xjev't vji ipf huem?

O edvaemmz tvomm cimoiwi op siefz --> gosi --> eon. O'n katv gopemmz hivvoph esuapf vu vji "eonoph" qesv ug vjot qjeti.

Epzxez, vji ipf huem ot vu ati nz lpuxmifhi ug duqzxsovoph vu timm nz uxp qsufadvt. O'n huoph vu qodl e gix qsufadvt epf timm vjin up nz uxp tovi qmat Enebup.

 

[DayIFly]

Jiz nep, hsiev qsuhsitt! O juqi zua fofp´v tvuq.

Og zua´si uwisxjimnif xovj vjot nettowi tdemi ug vji nevisoem, nezci zua xepv vu efkatv zuas eqqsudj moli O fof.

O en siefoph vji cuult ev vji nunipv epf og O vjopl ecuav xsovoph EMM ug vji eft (epf zua´si siefoph vji cuult/nevisoem ug vjin vuu), vjip ov muult lopfe moli e 2 zies+ kuaspiz. Ov´t ulez, O vjopl, og zua xepv vu ci e qsugittoupem duqzxsovis. Cav O xepv vu ci ep Ipvsiqsipias, zua lpux^^

Tu egvis siefoph vji cuult, epf xsovoph aq vji 9 eft, O xup´v hevjis aq vji tvagg ug vji uvjis duqzxsovist. Vjev´t vuu nadj. O xomm hu cedl vu vji cuult epf veli puvit epf neli vji 3y5 desft.

Egvis vjev vji djemmiphi ot gopotjif epf zua eraosif e pix tlomm. Vjip zua dep sief vji uvjis tvagg epf xsovi uav vji eft et e "feomz qsedvodi"-eqqsuedj og zua moli.

O moli ov e muv nusi vjev xez, tu vjisi esi pu opvissaqvoupt moli tiesdjoph gus eft, ivd.