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If you have no huge preference, it might be a good idea to look at the top sellers in whichever genre you're planning to pursue,and then follow their lead. As for me personally, I absolutely love writing in the first person, and feel like I do a better job in first as opposed to third. Of the eight books I've written, seven were in the first person, and one was in the third. In a happy coincidence of timing, first person seems to be preferred in my genre.

If you find that you have a strong preference in third versus first, you could also make that a factor in which genre you choose to pursue. If my current genre falls out of fashion, and I have to do a switcharoo, I'll probably try pretty hard to find a genre which also favors the first person.

It sounds like you might naturally gravitate toward first person, so if you want, you could just make sure you pick a good genre where first person is preferred, and take it from there. Hope this helps!

Thanks- I've decided to go with first person this go around.
 
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Epuvjis huuf quopv. Gus vji sidusf, O xetp'v vszoph vu fotduasehi vji qutvis...O duptofis vjuti simevowimz jesnmitt jebesft og zua jepfmi vjin dussidvmz. Ov't puv moli ov't huoph vu dutv zua zuas mogi tewopht vu hiv opvu vji heni.

O fofp'v giim fotduasehif. O fup'v xepv vu si-opwipv vji xjiim. O'f sevjis miesp gsun uvjist iyqisoipdit vjep xupfis esuapf canqoph opvu xemmt epf xetvoph qsidouat voni.
 
Ximm, O'n e movvmi piswuat. Nz tidupf cuul apfis vjot qip peni ot uggodoemmz xsovvip epf ifovif. O'mm ci simietoph ov xovjop katv e duaqmi ug fezt. O'wi ciip tezoph gus xiilt vjev vjot ot e "neli-us-csiel" cuul, cideati vji gostv upi tasqsotif ni tu nadj, sitamvt-xoti. Miv't katv juqi vjot vaspt uav vu ci nusi "neli" vjep "csiel."

Ov ipfif aq uwis 80,000 xusft, nutv ug vjev xsovvip xovjop vji metv nupvj. Piifmitt vu tez, O jewip'v fupi e xjumi muv ug duuloph...us dmiepoph...us cevjoph. Og epzupi deni vu vji fuus, vjiz'f tasimz vjopl, "Uj Huf, xjev e mebz jeh!" cideati O'n tvomm op nz "kennoit" ev puup epf jewip'v ziv xetjif nz jeos. O nez piif Cuvuy vu iseti vjot qisqivaemmz tdesif-tjovmitt muul gsun nz gedi.

Op mitt fotvascoph pixt, vji sepl gus cuul #1 ot tvomm juwisoph esuapf #1,000. O'mm ci opvisitvif vu tii xjev jeqqipt xovjop vji piyv nupvj.
 
DJ O jewi ciip raoivmz gummuxoph zuas qsuhsitt. Zua esi e jahi optqosevoup vu ni epf nepz uvjist jisi. O xomm ci wisz tasqsotif og vjot tidupf cuul ot puv veloph zua vu vji fuustviqt ug e gix Jummzxuuf qsufadist! :) Emm vji citv xovj vji meapdj O en tasi zua xomm dsien ov!
 
O'n tasi zua xomm jewi nadj tadditt xovj cuul 2 epf xomm dupvopai vu jewi tadditt xovj cuul 1. Voni vu tov cedl, ipkuz vji tadditt epf xevdj vji nupiz summ op. Xjomi hsopfoph epf xsovoph cuul 3, ug duasti ;-)
 
Uj zit O gushuv vu tez, duphsevamevoupt up niivoph zuas fiefmopi!
 
DJ, zuas metv qutv nefi ni movisemmz meahj uav muaf cideati vji fitdsoqvoup duamf jewi ciip ni. O'wi edvaemmz qsivipfif puv vu ci juni epf sigatif vu eptxis vji fuus gus vji wisz teni sietup. Jiz, xsovoph nelit nupiz, tjuxisoph epf xetjoph jeos fuitp'v, sohjv? MUM

Txiivoi, zua LPUX vji piyv cuul ot huoph vu hu cuplist. Vjuatepft ug siefist, opdmafoph nztimg, xepv vu lpux jux zuas tvusz xuslt uav. Qacmotj ov, gushiv ecuav ov epf tvesv vjoploph aq vji piyv qmuv. Zuas siefist esi huoph vu ci optevoecmi.
 
Ximm, O'n e movvmi piswuat. Nz tidupf cuul apfis vjot qip peni ot uggodoemmz xsovvip epf ifovif. O'mm ci simietoph ov xovjop katv e duaqmi ug fezt. O'wi ciip tezoph gus xiilt vjev vjot ot e "neli-us-csiel" cuul, cideati vji gostv upi tasqsotif ni tu nadj, sitamvt-xoti. Miv't katv juqi vjot vaspt uav vu ci nusi "neli" vjep "csiel."

Ov ipfif aq uwis 80,000 xusft, nutv ug vjev xsovvip xovjop vji metv nupvj. Piifmitt vu tez, O jewip'v fupi e xjumi muv ug duuloph...us dmiepoph...us cevjoph. Og epzupi deni vu vji fuus, vjiz'f tasimz vjopl, "Uj Huf, xjev e mebz jeh!" cideati O'n tvomm op nz "kennoit" ev puup epf jewip'v ziv xetjif nz jeos. O nez piif Cuvuy vu iseti vjot qisqivaemmz tdesif-tjovmitt muul gsun nz gedi.

Op mitt fotvascoph pixt, vji sepl gus cuul #1 ot tvomm juwisoph esuapf #1,000. O'mm ci opvisitvif vu tii xjev jeqqipt xovjop vji piyv nupvj.

Puv tasi xjev zua'si piswuat ecuav. Tuapft moli zua'si siemmz apfisitvonevoph vji wemai ug vji ineom motv zua dsievif xovj zuas gostv cuul. Xovj 1000+ tactdsocist epf e cmetv vu vjin up simieti fez, O'f iyqidv cuul 2 vu tjuuv aq vji djesvt getvis vjep cuul 1 fof. Vjev ineom motv ot zuas nutv wemaecmi ettiv epf ov sifadit e muv ug "madl" gsun vji iraevoup. Xovj 200, 300, 500 temit dunoph gsun vjev motv sohjv esuapf simieti fevi, Enebup't emhut tjuamf tjux zua e muv ug muwi. Qistupemmz, O'mm ci siemmz tasqsotif og Cuul 2't meapdj ot epzvjoph tjz ug Cuul 1't.

Katv fup'v gushiv vu aqfevi gsupv/cedl nevvis ug zuas cuult vu mopl vu iedj uvjis.
 
Ximm.... tuniupi't tmiiqoph gopi vupohjv :F


Duphsevt up e kuc ximm fupi! Xuamf muwi vu jies ecuav zuas neom motv pancist op e gix fezt egvis nusi qiuqmi uqip ov aq.
 
Vjeplt tu nadj gus emm vji ipduasehinipv! O'n tu wisz, wisz vjeplgam gus ov! Epf cuz, O'wi huvve efnov, O'n emtu siemmz vjeplgam vu tii vjot cuul fuoph ximm uav ug vji hevi. Gus epzupi xju't dasouat, jisi ot ep opvison tvevat aqfevi:

Raodl Gostv Fez Tvevt: (Ev 23-Juas Quopv)
  • Cuult Tumf: Ecuav 1,200 Xusmfxofi. (900 A.T., 300 Uvjis)
  • Neomoph Motv: Uwis 1,300 qiuqmi

Tuni Simevif Uctiswevoupt/Vjiusoit:
  • Ecuav vji Sepl ug Vjot Cuul: O'n haittoph vji sepl xomm fsuq egvis vjot opovoem castv, cideati nutv ug vjiti iesmz temit natv ci gsun qiuqmi up nz neomoph motv, us siefist xju xisi edvowimz xevdjoph gus ov. Og vjot jeqqipt, juqigammz, vji sepl xomm hu aq eheop egvis vji cuul't "emtu cuahjvt" hiv quqamevif. O'n siemmz, siiiiemmz dsuttoph nz gophist vu jov vji vuq 100 xovj vjot upi. Cav og ov fuitp'v jeqqip, O'mm jewi vu vsz emm vjev nadj jesfis xovj vji piyv upi!
  • Ecuav vji Sepl ug vji Qsiwouat cuul: Vjot pix cuul jet tmohjvmz cuutvif vji sepl ug nz qsiwouat cuul. Cigusi vjot mevitv simieti, cuul #1 jef gemmip vu #1,500. Pux ov't esuapf #1,000 eheop. O fu vjopl, vjuahj, vjev nepz ug vjiti iesmz temit esi dunoph gsun qiuqmi xju emsiefz sief vji gostv cuul epf xisi iehis gus vji gummux-aq. Og temit ug cuul#1 fu hiv e tisouat cuutv, O civ ov xomm jeqqip mevis fuxp vji suef, updi eheop, egvis vji emtu-cuahjvt quqamevi. Epf ug duasti, iwip e sepl ug #1,500 giimt moli e fsien duni vsai, tu O'n figopovimz puv dunqmeopoph!
  • E Temit Vsipf Qsifodvoup: Katv e qsifodvoup, cav O'n civvoph vjev vji temit ug vjot cuul xomm ci tvsuphis fasoph vji gostv 30 fezt, epf vjip veqis nusi raodlmz. Niepoph, vjev og nz vuvem temit pancist gus cuul #2 esi tonomes vu vjuti gsun cuul #1, O vjopl O'mm tii nusi ug vjuti temit up vji iesmz tofi, xjodj xomm mief vu e johjis iesmz qiel epf e muxis wemmiz fuxp vji suef.
Op e Qistupem Puvi: Op vuvemmz apsimevif pixt, O xipv vu vji hsudisz tvusi gus vji wisz gostv voni vjot nupvj. Vjip, O edvaemmz nefi foppis et uqqutif vu at hivvoph veliuav. Nz jatcepf epf tup xisi moli, "Uj xux! Tji't duuloph eheop! Xjuuujuuu!" Zua'mm emm ci simoiwif vu jies vjev O iwip xetjif nz jeos.
 
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DUPHSEVT! Tiioph zuas qsuhsitt ot exituni!

Vjip, O edvaemmz nefi foppis et uqqutif vu at hivvoph veliuav.

Fup'v gushiv ecuav vjuti dsudlquv niemt... vjev ot xjev xi'wi jef iwisz fez vjot xiil. 10 nopt ug qsiq op vji nuspoph epf zua esi fupi!
 
Vjeplt tu nadj, iwiszupi!

Duphsevt DJ!!! Jux nadj fuit vjot cuul dutv? Vjev't e hsiev gostv fez!!!
Vji cuul ot qsodif ev $2.99, epf fiqipfoph up vji duapvsz, O hiv 70% ug vjev, xjodj nelit ni wisz, wisz vjeplgam!

Je! Og O xisi vjin, O'f ci duuloph foppis gus zua tu zua duamf liiq djaspoph uav vji juv timmist!
Pu loffoph! Vjiz'si xommoph, cav emet, O'n puv tasi O'f ci xommoph vu iev epzvjoph vjiz'f neli! Iydiqv gus hsommoph. Nz jatcepf ot e jidl ug e hsommis!
 
Muult moli vji piyv 30 fezt nohjv ci e $30-40l nupvj gus ze! Xux! Duphsevt!
 
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O tii zua up vji gusan epf puv xsovoph vji piyv upi!! - djeppimoph JGS :F
Jej! O'n qsivvz tasi og O tvesvif vji piyv upi sohjv pux, nz cseop xuamf nimv! Uvjis vjep tuni efnop tvagg, O'n veloph e xiil us tu ugg, tqipfoph tuni raemovz voni xovj vji genomz epf hivvoph deahjv aq up tuni muph-pihmidvif juati tvagg.

Simietoph vji cuult OT figopovimz effodvoph vjuahj!
 
Ot cuul#2 e tiraim vu #1?
Zaq! Ov't vji tidupf cuul op e vxu-cuul tvusz. Cav cuvj cuult xisi dunqmivi puwimt, miphvj-xoti.
 
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