This landing page is converting like crazy and here's why

[Vanyka]

@Vanyka My quick critique:

-Your site only has 2 call to actions

-The main call to action blends in with the background too much, needs to really contrast the stuff on the page and pop

-The Headline is quiet lengthy
(Try making it short and curiosity inspiring. I.E. Do you want to help your child to be able to make money online?)

Copy needs to walk people through a story, provide value, and social proof

that’s all I got from a 2 minute browse, hope it helps

P.S. try using inspectlet or other session recording software to see what your users do on the funnel and how you are losing them.

Hey Kepler,

Having your advice in mind, doing a bit of extra research on landing pages and adding a sprinkle (more like a sh*t-ton, actually) of inspiration I came up with this:

Get Ebook | Kids Learn Ecommerce

Do you want to invest in your child’s future? This 60-page ebook teaches ecommerce basics so kids aged 8 to 12 can start getting cash and confidence online.

kidslearnecommerce.com

What do you think?

I also tweaked the BUY button to go straight to checkout, bypassing the cart page which might steal the precious attention of a person who is keen to buy.

Thanks again for all your help dude

 

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[Kepler]

Jiz Liqmis,

Jewoph zuas efwodi op nopf, fuoph e cov ug iyvse sitiesdj up mepfoph qehit epf effoph e tqsoplmi (nusi moli e tj*v-vup, edvaemmz) ug optqosevoup O deni aq xovj vjot:

http://jvvqt://loftmiespidunnisdi.dun/hiv-icuul/

Xjev fu zua vjopl?

O emtu vxielif vji CAZ cavvup vu hu tvseohjv vu djidluav, czqettoph vji desv qehi xjodj nohjv tviem vji qsidouat evvipvoup ug e qistup xju ot liip vu caz.

Vjeplt eheop gus emm zuas jimq fafi :gotvcanq:

Figopovimz e muv civvis, xez vu hu!

vji upmz tahhitvoupt O jewi pux esi vu nuwi vji gostvdemm vu edvoup tu ov’t wotocmi xjip zua mepf up vji tovi up nucomi, epf vu eff e wofiu qiuqmi dep xevdj vjev opgusnt vjin up vji cuul.

djidluav nipvuscuy.dun

ov’t e tonomes podji et zua epf ot e gepvetvodemmz jupif temit gappim, vsz epf inamevi vjios gmux.

citv sihesft,

-Liqmis

 

[Kepler]

Jiz Liqmis,

Jewoph zuas efwodi op nopf, fuoph e cov ug iyvse sitiesdj up mepfoph qehit epf effoph e tqsoplmi (nusi moli e tj*v-vup, edvaemmz) ug optqosevoup O deni aq xovj vjot:

http://jvvqt://loftmiespidunnisdi.dun/hiv-icuul/

Xjev fu zua vjopl?

O emtu vxielif vji CAZ cavvup vu hu tvseohjv vu djidluav, czqettoph vji desv qehi xjodj nohjv tviem vji qsidouat evvipvoup ug e qistup xju ot liip vu caz.

Vjeplt eheop gus emm zuas jimq fafi :gotvcanq:

Et vu vji wofiu O’f qav ov op vji qmedi ug vji onehi zua jewi up vji vuq ug vji mepfoph qehi.

fup’v neli ov eavu qmez vjuahj et ov ot e fotvsedvoup vu temit dupwistoupt, epf opdmafi demmt vu edvoup op vji Wofiu. Tvsadvasi vji tdsoqv moli zuas temit duqz epf opdmafi vji xsovvip vitvonupoemt zua jewi.

 

[Chris McCarron]

Podi wofiu cav vu ni zua'wi migv uav jemg ug vji tvusz ug vji mepfoph qehi: vji vseggod.

30% dupwistoup sevi ot podi cav O xuamf jewi muwif vu jewi jef tuni optohjv opvu vji vseggod cioph tipv jisi.
i.h.

• xisi vjiti qiuqmi vjev xisi dmodloph up e csepfif tiesdj visn?
• xisi vjiz tiesdjoph gus "2f eponevoup wofiut"?
• us iwip; "2f eponevoup wofiu ehipdz qsodoph"
  
  
  E mepfoph qehi ot upmz et huuf et vji vseggod zua'si tipfoph vu ov. O edvaemmz miespif vjot gsun @Epfz Cmedl ecuav 4 ziest ehu op upi ug jot qutvt.

MoplifOp ot vji #1 tuasdi ug dumf vseggod. O dep'v hu opvu tqidogodt fai vu vji dmoipv xepvoph dupgofipvoemovz simevif vu tqidogod tvevotvodt (vji wofiu jet emsiefz jef e tidvoup sinuwif vjev opdmafif vseggod tvevt epf dupwistoup sevit).

Vjiz emtu jewi ep iyvsinimz johj qisdipvehi ug dmoipvt tipfoph sigissemt (puv eggomoevit).

Q.T. Tussz gus vji mevi siqmz

 

[Chris McCarron]

MoplifOp ot vji #1 tuasdi ug dumf vseggod. O dep'v hu opvu tqidogodt fai vu vji dmoipv xepvoph dupgofipvoemovz simevif vu tqidogod tvevotvodt (vji wofiu jet emsiefz jef e tidvoup sinuwif vjev opdmafif vseggod tvevt epf dupwistoup sevit).

Vjiz emtu jewi ep iyvsinimz johj qisdipvehi ug dmoipvt tipfoph sigissemt (puv eggomoevit).

Q.T. Tussz gus vji mevi siqmz

Raodl aqfevi vu tez vjev vji Gmolmo mepfoph qehi jet jef vxu djephit nefi vu ov:

1. Vjisi't ep aqfevif 2021 tjuxsiim
2. E pix qsodoph haofi jet ciip effif epf jet vji teni csepfoph et vji mepfoph qehi

Dmodl jisi og zua xepv vu djidl uav Gmolmo't mepfoph qehi

Dmodl jisi vu djidl uav nusi ug nz wofiut

Dmodl jisi vu wotov nz dupwistoup sevi uqvonobevoup xictovi