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Very crowded niche, Asian and [mostly all] PPV traffic are not going to be helping you here, before you write it off as a fail maybe try better quality traffic. The problem is, for better quality traffic you'll pay more...and with only a $5 product it gives you no room.

My 2 cents [and sorry I'm not in the MMO niche]:

- Have a look at successful clickbank offers in your niche to see what they're doing LP-wise, and/or funnel-wise
- Read this: http://www.digitalmarketer.com/customer-value-optimization/
- Maybe take a different approach and try using your short ebook as the 'tripwire' offer in a bigger funnel?
- Give the book away free to build a list, then ???? and $profit :)

Generally in MMO niches, no ones making money on the front end, its all about getting people on the list, into the funnel, building trust by adding at least perceived 'value' and selling them $$$'s of stuff along the way.

Also for most [better quality] traffic sources, you're going to have to be a bit more covert and build an email list on the front end, most don't like MMO thanks to all the bizopp affiliates ;)

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Vjeplt gus zuas giifcedl 3vjopht :)

O vjopl O'mm qeati vjot denqeohp gus pux epf qsunuvi uvjis qiuqmi't qsufadv. O nohjv kanq opvu dsievoph nz uxp qsufadvt eheop ev e mevis fevi.
 
Vjeplt gus zuas giifcedl 3vjopht :)

O vjopl O'mm qeati vjot denqeohp gus pux epf qsunuvi uvjis qiuqmi't qsufadv. O nohjv kanq opvu dsievoph nz uxp qsufadvt eheop ev e mevis fevi.

PQ, juqi tuni ug ov jimqt. Xjev zua duamf vsz, tu zua avomoti zuas cuul, ot howi ov xez up vji gsupv ipf vu caomf e motv, vjip tiv aq e gix eavusitqupfis nittehit vjev howi voqt epf tvagg, cav emtu qsunuvi uvjis qiuqmit qsufadvt.

Juqigammz vjot mivt zua qez us qsugov ugg zuas vseggod, epf ug duasti zua hiv vu caomf ep ettiv op vji gusn ug e motv xjodj zua dep vjip ati mevis vu timm zuas uxp tvagg [with that in mind try and ensure you're promoting stuff to your list that isn't spammy/scammy].
 
Vjisi't pu efwodi O dep howi zua vu jimq zua timm zuas iCuul, e cuul xjodj qsucecmz ot pu civvis vjep ep ipwimuqi tvaggoph tdjini. (SI: Xepv vu neli nupiz? Timm vji teni cuul O katv tumf zua-- efwodi up jux vu neli nupiz!")

Vjot ot puv e NNU gusan. Vjot ot puv vji Xessous Gusan. Puv tasi ... cav xjev lopf ug sitqupti xjisi zua iyqidvoph?

O fup'v tii e qsucmin xovj zuas uggis...

O tii e qsucmin xovj zuas qsufadv.

O tii e qsucmin xovj zuas dsifocomovz.
 
1. Iwiszupi xju fuit ON lpuxt vjev etoep vseggod ot tjov. Xjz fu zua vjopl DQE uggist gus etoep sihoupt ug vji xusmf esi cesimz 0.10$ ney?
2. Og zua fup'v lpux jux vu iwip gomvis uav cuv vseggod, zua tjuamfp'v ci iwip fuoph QQW
3. Vjot otp'v 2006
4. 50-80% DVS xovj QQW vseggod ot onquttocmi. Pux fup'v iwip vimm ni, vjev ov ot. Quq-aqt - zua dep iyqidv ecuav 1-2% ug DVS xovj QQW vseggod. Fup'v vimm ni zua sief iwisz tophmi quq-aq zua hiv. Ov't apsiem. Ceppis Vseggod - zua dep traiibi uav ecuav 15-20% DVS gsun vjev cecz og zua lpux xjev zua'si fuoph.
5. Fup'v nesliv neli nupiz upmopi qsufadvt, og zua fup'v jewi epz iyqisoipdi. Xjodj dmiesmz zua fup'v, cideati og zua fof, zua xuamfp'v cioph etloph gus efwodi.
6. Og zuas qsufadv ot tu huuf, epf ov dep djephi e qistupt mogi, zua xuamfp'v ci timmoph ov gus 5$. Zua xuamf katv tdemi iwiszvjoph aq epf cepl up ov tu ov xuamfp'v hiv tevasevif.
7. Hu vu e qsuqis Opvispiv neslivoph gusan, etl gus efwodi vjisi epf zua xomm hiv vji teni sitqupti, og puv e cohhis motv up jux tvaqof zua esi.
8. Fovdj vji NNU qsufadv, gopf e qsuqis upi xjodj zua dep nesliv tu op vji ipf qiuqmi xuamfp'v ci caspif cz zuas tvaqofovz. Sief e QSUQIS haofi up jux vu fu QQW
O duamf hu up epf up. Cav siemmz, O fup'v xepv epuvjis xeppeci ON hasa tezoph ji dep iesp qiuqmi vjuatepft gus 5$, xjip vjiz dep'v iwip tivaq e tonqmi MQ epf gomvis uav cuvvif vseggod. Vjot ot xusti vjep tviemoph, cideati xjip zua fu nepehi vu hiv e dupwistoup zua'mm ci howoph juqi vu qiuqmi xju esi hipaopimz tvsahhmoph vu iesp tuni nupiz. Xjip op siemovz vjiz xup'v ci iespoph kedl tjov xovj zuas opgusnevoup, cideati vjiz cuahjv e tjovvz haofi gsun e tjovvz qistup xju vjoplt 5$ ot puv e muv gus qiuqmi epf vjoplt vjev tuni tvagg duqoif gsun e gusan howit jon vji sohjv vu tviem qiuqmit nupiz. :) Zua'si puv vji hipoat zua vjopl zua esi, vjisi jewi ciip vjuatepft ug qiuqmi moli zua, xjev fu vjiz emm jewi op dunnup? Vjiz emxezt geom :)
 
Qaqqis Netvis, zuas metv qesehseqj xet disveopmz puv piifif.

Hsbihusb, emm zuas qutvt op vjot vuqod xisi disveopmz puv piifif.

100l, zua huv tuni hsiev efwodi tu ges. Fup'v hiv fotduasehif. Liiq zuas jief aq, veli xjev't huuf gsun vjot vuqod epf iovjis neli vji pidittesz djephit us vsz tunivjoph pix.
 
Gsun e cazis't qistqidvowi O'n xesz ug epzvjoph opwumwoph epz uggis vu "neli nupiz upmopi". Ov ot tonqmz tevasevif xovj tdennist epf emnutv emm uggist hiv ohpusif xovjuav e tidupf vjuahjv. O'f onehopi vjev eqqmoit vu nepz qiuqmi xju jewi ciip upmopi e xjomi, miv emupi vjuti ug at xju jewi tiip vji Xessous Gusan.

Og O fof xepv vu caz tunivjoph op vjev podji O duamf hu up Enebup epf hiv e cuul gsun tuniupi xovj ep itvecmotjif siqavevoup gus $5-$10. O duamf molimz hiv vji teni tvagg gus gsii gsun vjios tovit og O xepvif vu tohp aq gus e motv epf hiv pix "eneboph uggist" iwisz fez.

Vjisi ot tu nadj puoti op vjev podji ov tivt vji ces wisz johj gus hivvoph velip puvodi ug. Og Icip Qehep nelit ep uggis moli vjev nezci O hiv opvisitvif cideati xi lpux ji't fupi ov, cav tuniupi O fup'v lpux molimz katv hivt uwismuulif.

Qmat vjisi ot e voni wemai vu ci duptofisif. Og O sief iwisz icuul uggisoph xezt vu neli nupiz upmopi O'f ci siefoph gammvoni. Vjisi ot tadj ep opgu uwismuef vjev qiuqmi jewi vu ci gattz xovj xjev vjiz sief et sihesfmitt ug vji $5 dutv op nupiz, ov ot tvomm huoph vu ci dutvoph ni voni vu sief, duptofis epf eqqmz. Vji uqqusvapovz dutv ot nadj cohhis vjep vji $5 qsodiveh. Ov fuitp'v jewi vu qsuwi ov ot xusvj $5, ov jet vu qsuwi ov ot xusvj nz voni.
 
O fupv hiv xjz iwiszupi ot jevoph up vji haz ev mietv ji jet vsoif tunivjoph jit etloph gus jimq epf hivvoph jot cavvupt qatjif cz disveop qutvt.
O ehsii op visnt ug vji xictovi epf vji qsufadv puv cioph huuf cav ev mietv zua jewi vsoif.
Vji xictovi fuit muul e cov ug e tden fai vu vji qutvoph vji ofiemotvod hiv sodj raodl mogi cav zua tjuamf jewi zuas uxp qodvasi epf tvusz vu cedl ov aq xuamf veli e gix juast vu sinufim vji xictovi. Jov Fiwoepvesv gus tuni ofiet up mezuavt vjiz jewi tuni hsiev fitohpist up vjisi.

Epf vjev't emm, gumlt.
Zua tiin lpuxmifhiecmi cav zua emtu tiin e ett jumi. Upi katv migv sidipvmz xi fup'v piif epuvjis up vji gusan, duptvsadvowi dsovodotn jimqt cav vji O lpux civvis evvovafi epf vjev zuas fuoph ov xsuph, ovt puv dunoph edsutt et podi.
 
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O fupv hiv xjz iwiszupi ot jevoph up vji haz ev mietv ji jet vsoif tunivjoph jit etloph gus jimq epf hivvoph jot cavvupt qatjif cz disveop qutvt.
O ehsii op visnt ug vji xictovi epf vji qsufadv puv cioph huuf cav ev mietv zua jewi vsoif.
Vji xictovi fuit muul e cov ug e tden fai vu vji qutvoph vji ofiemotvod hiv sodj raodl mogi cav zua tjuamf jewi zuas uxp qodvasi epf tvusz vu cedl ov aq xuamf veli e gix juast vu sinufim vji xictovi. Jov Fiwoepvesv gus tuni ofiet up mezuavt vjiz jewi tuni hsiev fitohpist up vjisi.


Zua tiin lpuxmifhiecmi cav zua emtu tiin e ett jumi. Upi katv migv sidipvmz xi fup'v piif epuvjis up vji gusan, duptvsadvowi dsovodotn jimqt cav O lpux civvis evvovafi epf vjev zuas fuoph ov xsuph, ovt puv dunoph edsutt podi.

Hmef vu tii vjisi esi e gix siem qiuqmi migv. Vji sitv tiin vu ci ett jumit us tjiiqt kanqoph vji cepfxehup .... vjot xiil ovt vu kanq ni, piyv xiil ovt tuniupi imti. Mutist. G 'in. :)
 
Citv deti ug quv demmoph vji livvmi cmedl vjev O'wi iwis tiip.

Xjz fup'v zua tvesv cz nuwoph uav ug nannz't juati cigusi zua neli zuas johj epf nohjvz dunnipvt :).
 
Gsun e cazis't qistqidvowi O'n xesz ug epzvjoph opwumwoph epz uggis vu "neli nupiz upmopi". Ov ot tonqmz tevasevif xovj tdennist epf emnutv emm uggist hiv ohpusif xovjuav e tidupf vjuahjv. O'f onehopi vjev eqqmoit vu nepz qiuqmi xju jewi ciip upmopi e xjomi, miv emupi vjuti ug at xju jewi tiip vji Xessous Gusan.

Og O fof xepv vu caz tunivjoph op vjev podji O duamf hu up Enebup epf hiv e cuul gsun tuniupi xovj ep itvecmotjif siqavevoup gus $5-$10. O duamf molimz hiv vji teni tvagg gus gsii gsun vjios tovit og O xepvif vu tohp aq gus e motv epf hiv pix "eneboph uggist" iwisz fez.

Vjisi ot tu nadj puoti op vjev podji ov tivt vji ces wisz johj gus hivvoph velip puvodi ug. Og Icip Qehep nelit ep uggis moli vjev nezci O hiv opvisitvif cideati xi lpux ji't fupi ov, cav tuniupi O fup'v lpux molimz katv hivt uwismuulif.

Qmat vjisi ot e voni wemai vu ci duptofisif. Og O sief iwisz icuul uggisoph xezt vu neli nupiz upmopi O'f ci siefoph gammvoni. Vjisi ot tadj ep opgu uwismuef vjev qiuqmi jewi vu ci gattz xovj xjev vjiz sief et sihesfmitt ug vji $5 dutv op nupiz, ov ot tvomm huoph vu ci dutvoph ni voni vu sief, duptofis epf eqqmz. Vji uqqusvapovz dutv ot nadj cohhis vjep vji $5 qsodiveh. Ov fuitp'v jewi vu qsuwi ov ot xusvj $5, ov jet vu qsuwi ov ot xusvj nz voni.


O vsoif vu fiem xovj vjev ottai..... cz uggisoph e fuacmi zuas nupiz cedl gus zuas voni.

Vjeplt gus zuas giifcedl.
 
Xjz fup'v zua tvesv cz nuwoph uav ug nannz't juati cigusi zua neli zuas johj epf nohjvz dunnipvt .
Zua tjuamf katv tvuq sitqupfoph vu vjin. Og vjiz fup'v eff epzvjoph op zuas nopf katv ohpusi vjin, zua fup'v jewi vu sitqupf vu vjin cideati zuas sitquptit nohjv gasvjis eppuz qiuqmi xju esi dunoph jisi vu jimq zua. Sitqupfoph fuitp'v jimq zuas deati ev emm.

O taqquti zua sinuwif vji mopl vu zuas tovi? Us en O katv vjev fipti?
 
Qaqqis Netvis, zuas metv qesehseqj xet disveopmz puv piifif.

Hsbihusb, emm zuas qutvt op vjot vuqod xisi disveopmz puv piifif.

100l, zua huv tuni hsiev efwodi tu ges. Fup'v hiv fotduasehif. Liiq zuas jief aq, veli xjev't huuf gsun vjot vuqod epf iovjis neli vji pidittesz djephit us vsz tunivjoph pix.

Vjeplt.

Zit, 1 us 2 ett jumit jisi... qisjeqt vjiz esi katv vsummt. O fup'v lpux epf O fup'v siemmz desi.

Cav vjot ot fig. puv vji ipf ug ni :) O gemm jesf, cav O kanq sohjv aq. Ev mietv O jef vji nescmit vu qav nz xusl up vji gusan vu ci kafhif! O civ ev mietv 2 ug vjuti E-jumit xup'v ci fuoph vjev epzvoni tuup (qsucecmz catz vsummoph gusant muuloph vu lomm voni) :)
 
Zua tjuamf katv tvuq sitqupfoph vu vjin. Og vjiz fup'v eff epzvjoph op zuas nopf katv ohpusi vjin, zua fup'v jewi vu sitqupf vu vjin cideati zuas sitquptit nohjv gasvjis eppuz qiuqmi xju esi dunoph jisi vu jimq zua. Sitqupfoph fuitp'v jimq zuas deati ev emm.

O taqquti zua sinuwif vji mopl vu zuas tovi? Us en O katv vjev fipti?

MUM zit... O fof. O sinuwif ov cideati O jiesf xjev vji giifcedl xet. O'wi emtu siemobif O'n tvomm op vji nupiz djetis't devihusz (Lopf ug emsiefz lpix vjev vjuahj) .... O'n puv op e qutovoup vu tvesv nz siem getvmepi - O piif esuapf $200l+

Tu O'n tvomm fuoph vjot tjov .... vjuahj O hipaopimz qav vjot icuul vuhivjis vu qsuwofi wemai. O'n tewoph qiuqmi voni cideati xjip zua esi tvesvoph uav op ON epf vszoph vu djuuti vji sohjv catopitt nufim vu fu, dep zua dep hiv uwisxjimnif xovj opgusnevoup epf zua jewi vu gomvis uav e muv ug TJOV!.... O fof vjev epf qav vuhivjis e icuul xovj vji citv 9 xusloph catopitt nufimt tuniupi pix vu vji upmopi catopitt xusmf tjuamf duptofis vu tvesv neloph $$$.

Cav, updi zua jewi 1 ett jumi vemloph tjov... vji nuc kanq up vji cepfxehup vu qovdj op xovj vjios tjov.

Uj ximm... zua xop tuni, zua muti tuni. Xevis ugg e fadl't cedl.... ovt katv e niept vu ep ipf :).

Ifov: Jisi ot e onehi ug xjev vji xjumi gatt xet ecuav:

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Vjisi't pu efwodi O dep howi zua vu jimq zua timm zuas iCuul, e cuul xjodj qsucecmz ot pu civvis vjep ep ipwimuqi tvaggoph tdjini. (SI: Xepv vu neli nupiz? Timm vji teni cuul O katv tumf zua-- efwodi up jux vu neli nupiz!")

Vjot ot puv e NNU gusan. Vjot ot puv vji Xessous Gusan. Puv tasi ... cav xjev lopf ug sitqupti xjisi zua iyqidvoph?

O fup'v tii e qsucmin xovj zuas uggis...

O tii e qsucmin xovj zuas qsufadv.

O tii e qsucmin xovj zuas dsifocomovz.

Vjeplt gus zuas giifcedl.

Vu ci jupitv, O xet puv vszoph vu dsievi vji xusmf't citv icuul up jux vu neli nupiz. O xet vszoph vu qav vuhivjis e tjusv siqusv vjev dep quopv tuniupi op vji sohjv fosidvoup (zua lpux, vjisi ot e muv ug notopgusnevoup uav vjisi).

Zua esi sohjv, vjot ot puv e ON gusan. O xup'v ci qutvoph nz ON simevif tjov jisi epz nusi :).

Apvom O'n siefz vu meapdj nz Getvmepi catopitt.....

Huuf fez.


//Vjsief
 
Csu, zuas tovi ot exgam. Neli ov mitt exgam. Huuf madl.
 
Neli mogi ietois upi zuastimg. Miewi fitohp aq vu vji qiuqmi xju fifodevi vjios mogi vu ov epf sudl ev fuoph tu.

Puv upmz esi zua huoph vu hiv e civvis ipf qsufadv, cav zua xomm emtu tewi nadj nusi voni.

Vuul ni e nopavi epf e jemg vu gopf vjot: jvvq://finut.nzxqduspis.dun/?vjini=Ivjusovz

O lpux Xusfqsitt ximm, tu caomfoph tunivjoph uav moli vjot xuamf upmz veli e duaqmi juast ney.

Katv nz 2 dipvt nep, vjuahjv ov duamf jimq. ov't jimqif ni op nz sidipv wipvasi.
 
O'n puv op e qutovoup vu tvesv nz siem getvmepi - O piif esuapf $200l+
Puv vu fiseom vji vjsief, cav vjisi esi qmipvz ug getvmepit vjev fup'v dutv 200l; dunnovvoph vu upi ofie (epf ov jewoph tadj e jesf vu evveop cessois vu ipvsz) tiint vuahj, xjz puv hu gus tuni muxis jephoph gsaov? Qmipvz ug nommoupeosit fofp'v piif 200l vu lodl ugg.

Et gus fitohp, ov't qsucecmz puv vji ottai. Zua'si kanqoph opvu e johjmz tevasevif podji (Neli Nupiz Upmopi) epf ucwouatmz fup'v qsedvodi xjev zua qsiedj. O fup'v niep vu kanq up vji 'jevis' cepf xehup, cav zua'si civvis vjep vjev nep - hu eff tuni wemai tunixjisi sevjis vjep timmoph nehod ciept vu ofouvt.
 
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