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In my new book (which has entered the production phase!) I have a statement that I can't quite determine the correct format.
Please vote for what you think it should be.
Here the phrase is in context:
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With a crumbling marriage and looming bankruptcy, the Trotmans are forced to face the red-pill truth they long denied: They were living, but they weren’t alive. Determined to resurrect their life and their marriage, the Trotman’s plot a rat-race escape—but only find themselves more thickly in it.
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With a crumbling marriage and looming bankruptcy, the Trotmans are forced to face the red-pill truth they long denied: They were alive, but they weren't living. Determined to resurrect their life and their marriage, the Trotman’s plot a rat-race escape—but only find themselves more thickly in it.
For advance updates on the project, please feel free to register.
Please vote for what you think it should be.
Here the phrase is in context:
#1
With a crumbling marriage and looming bankruptcy, the Trotmans are forced to face the red-pill truth they long denied: They were living, but they weren’t alive. Determined to resurrect their life and their marriage, the Trotman’s plot a rat-race escape—but only find themselves more thickly in it.
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With a crumbling marriage and looming bankruptcy, the Trotmans are forced to face the red-pill truth they long denied: They were alive, but they weren't living. Determined to resurrect their life and their marriage, the Trotman’s plot a rat-race escape—but only find themselves more thickly in it.
For advance updates on the project, please feel free to register.
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