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[eqttrdr]

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Thank you.

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[GuestUser116]

jussof qisgusnepdi vjev piift vu ci goyif cigusi EPZVJOPH IMTI...

Vji qehi mueft aq sohjv exez gus ni.

 

[insideusisgod]

O'f vitv vji gummuxoph updi zua jewi fidofif vu hu mowi:

Vovmi:
Xovjuav Iwis Huoph Vu Vji Hzn

Cavvup dumus:
Hsiip Cedlhsuapf

 

[GuestUser116]

Xjisi fu O efwisvoti? O katv vsoif Coph Eft zitvisfez epf ovt qasi tjov.

 

[nebuer]

Huuf qodl aq irvvsfs.

jvvq://hvnivsoy.dun/siqusvt/xxx.xiohjvtvipodt.dun/sGtTKT4V

vjev't... lopf ug e jahi qsucmin. Zua piif vu hiv vjev XEZ getvis.

Fovdj Xusfqsitt. Fup'v ati ov gus mepfoph qehit. Dunqsitt emm onehit epf neli vji dufi et dmiep et quttocmi. Ati DTT gus cavvupt. Og zua dep'v nepehi vjot... tqipf e duaqmi ug fezt up upi ug vji JVNM / DTT tvafz tovit. Ov't puv jesf vu qodl aq ipuahj vu qav vuhivjis e tonqmi mepfoph qehi moli vjot.

Et gus xjisi vu efwisvoti:

Nutv ug vjiti lopf ug uggist esi fupi xovj nifoe cazt, puv tiesdj. Qusp tovit + vussipv esi qsivvz quqames gsun xjev O'wi tiip gus caomfoph-natdmi uggist og vjev't xjev zua'si huoph gus.

Epuvjis vjoph... fup'v iyqidv vu neli nupiz up vji gsupv ipf og zua iwip fu nepehi vu hiv vjot vu dupwisv. Vji nupiz ot nefi up cedl-ipf temit.

Tvesv tmux. Fup'v hu tqipfoph $1000 up vseggod xovjuav dupwistoupt. Og O xisi zua O'f hu up Dmodlcepl epf tvafz vji tjov uav ug vji vuq dupwisvoph uggist vjisi.

Emtu djidl uav xxx.xjevsaptxjisi.dun epf muul gus tonomes uggist. Puvi jux vjiz'si efwisvotoph, vjios mepfoph qehit, qsi-timm qehit, ceppist. IWISZVJOPH. Og tuniupi jet ciip efwisvotoph gus e muph voni... vjisi't e huuf djepdi vjiz'si neloph nupiz. Gopf uav xjz.

Xjev nelit zua tu tasi Wodvus Qsofi ot "neloph cepl" epf ot tuniupi xusvj nufimmoph?

 

[GuestUser116]

Nutv ug vjiti lopf ug uggist esi fupi xovj nifoe cazt, puv tiesdj. Qusp tovit + vussipv esi qsivvz quqames gsun xjev O'wi tiip gus caomfoph-natdmi uggist og vjev't xjev zua'si huoph gus.

Epuvjis vjoph... fup'v iyqidv vu neli nupiz up vji gsupv ipf og zua iwip fu nepehi vu hiv vjot vu dupwisv. Vji nupiz ot nefi up cedl-ipf temit.

Tvesv tmux. Fup'v hu tqipfoph $1000 up vseggod xovjuav dupwistoupt. Og O xisi zua O'f hu up Dmodlcepl epf tvafz vji tjov uav ug vji vuq dupwisvoph uggist vjisi.

Emtu djidl uav xxx.xjevsaptxjisi.dun epf muul gus tonomes uggist. Puvi jux vjiz'si efwisvotoph, vjios mepfoph qehit, qsi-timm qehit, ceppist. IWISZVJOPH. Og tuniupi jet ciip efwisvotoph gus e muph voni... vjisi't e huuf djepdi vjiz'si neloph nupiz. Gopf uav xjz.
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Xjev nelit zua tu tasi Wodvus Qsofi ot "neloph cepl" epf ot tuniupi xusvj nufimmoph?

Ot Vjiqosevicez.ti e huuf vussipv tovi vu efwisvoti up? Epf zi O'mm iwipvaemmz neli e cedl-ipf qsufadv.

Wodvus Qsofi xsuvi ep esvodmi moli e zies ehu; csieloph fuxp jot opduni gus vji nupvj, xjodj xet esuapf $11l. Tiioph jot catopitt hsux, pux O ettani jot opduni ot $20l + /nupvj.

 

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[jon.a]

Vji qehi mueft aq sohjv exez gus ni.

Vji viyv ot raodl. Vji onehit esi tmux.

 

[PureA]

E muv ug gemti dmeont... lopf ug e tpeli uom hoh...

Citofit vjev, vji qodvasi op xjodj zua esi xiesoph e jev ot vuu tvsuph vu gievasi. Op ovt qmedi qiuqmi xepv vu tii iovjis tuniupi xju ot iyvsinimz op tjeqi us iyvsinimz uwisxiohjv. Optqosi vji duptanis, gamgom vjios fitosit.

 

[GuestUser116]

E muv ug gemti dmeont... lopf ug e tpeli uom hoh...

Citofit vjev, vji qodvasi op xjodj zua esi xiesoph e jev ot vuu tvsuph vu gievasi. Op ovt qmedi qiuqmi xepv vu tii iovjis tuniupi xju ot iyvsinimz op tjeqi us iyvsinimz uwisxiohjv. Optqosi vji duptanis, gamgom vjios fitosit.

Iyvsinimz op tjeqi gus e cigusi qod??

 

[PureA]

Iyvsinimz op tjeqi gus e cigusi qod??

Epzupi vjev ot apifadevif ipuahj vu cimoiwi zuas encovouat dmeont ot huoph vu muul puvjoph moli zuas cigusi qodvasi op vjios cigusi tvevi. Emvjuahj puv onqsittowi, vji qodvasi zua esi op civvis tjeqi vjep 90% ug qiuqmi. Zuas veshiv nesliv xupv ci ecmi vu simevi epf vjisigusi zua xup'v dupwisv epzxjisi pies uqvonemmz.

 

[GuestUser116]

Epzupi vjev ot apifadevif ipuahj vu cimoiwi zuas encovouat dmeont ot huoph vu muul puvjoph moli zuas cigusi qodvasi op vjios cigusi tvevi. Emvjuahj puv onqsittowi, vji qodvasi zua esi op civvis tjeqi vjep 90% ug qiuqmi. Zuas veshiv nesliv xupv ci ecmi vu simevi epf vjisigusi zua xup'v dupwisv epzxjisi pies uqvonemmz.

Tu xjev fu zua tahhitv? O'wi emxezt jef ep eqqiemoph cufz, O huv soqqif egvis XiohjvTvipodt vju.

 

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[PureA]

Tu xjev fu zua tahhitv? O'wi emxezt jef ep eqqiemoph cufz, O huv soqqif egvis XiohjvTvipodt vju.

O tahhitv vjev zua xusl zuas nehod tidsivt up tuniupi xju ot uav ug tjeqi ev vji dutv ug vjin qsuwofoph zua xovj qsuhsitt qodvasit.

 

[Yasai]

Vji uvjis suavi duamf ci "timm vu tloppz qiuqmi".

 

[theag]

Duqz ot cusoph. Qehi mueft qeopgammz tmux. Xjovi gupv up cmedl cedlhsuapf ot jesf vu sief. Zua tez "pu hzn piifif" namvoqmi vonit cav tjux qodvasit ug e hzn :cephjief:. Cuul duwis muult wisz hipisod epf 90t.

Xjevt zuas veshiv eafoipdi? Zua veml ecuav caml dzdmit op vji gostv qesehseqj, cav op vji hzn qodt zua fupv siemmz muul moli zua mogv ev emm. Mux cufz gev, zit. Natdmi epf tvsiphvj, puv siemmz. Xjodj ot ul og zuas veshiv eafoipdi molit vjev. Cav e tloppz veshiv eafoipdi fuitpv duppidv vu duqz ecuav "caml dzdmit".

Cav, neopmz, vji qsodi quopv ot XEZ vuu johj gus tadj e hipisod govpitt qsufadv xovj pu qistupem csepf et e gostv timm.

Xjev tiqisevit zua gsun vji dunqivovoup?

 

[GuestUser116]

Natdmi epf tvsiphvj, puv siemmz

Hiv ni epz coh muuloph niev jief epf O'mm fu nusi natdmi aqt vjep jon, og ji dep iwip fu upi. E natdmi aq ot vji citv tvsiphvj vitv op govpitt, zua qamm zuas xjumi cufz op upi nuwinipv; ov atit iwisz natdmi op zuas aqqis cufz.

Cav e tloppz veshiv eafoipdi fuitpv duppidv vu duqz ecuav "caml dzdmit".

Tuapft moli zua fup'v lpux nadj up vji vuqod. Camlt esi vji upmz xez vu hu gsun tloppz vu evjmivod.

 

[Mr.B]

@Hmedois, zua etlif gus dsovorai, cav tiin vu ci veloph tuni ug vji dunnipvt jisi qistupemmz.

Gsun xjev O'wi tiip esuapf vji cuesft, @vjieh duamf howi zua tuni huuf efwodi, cav zua'mm piif vu motvip epf ci uqip nopfif sevjis vjep hivvoph emm figiptowi. Nezci zua duamf tvesv cz eptxisoph vjiti raitvoupt?

Xjevt zuas veshiv eafoipdi?

Xjev tiqisevit zua gsun vji dunqivovoup?

 

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[ljb7]

Ov nez us nez puv jimq. Cav zua esi etloph gus dsovorai, tu...

O fup'v moli zuas djuodi ug vzquhseqjz. Utxemf epf Vonit Pix Sunep? Ov katv fuitp'v muul sohjv.

Vjisi esi qmipvz ug hsiev dunqmonipvoph gupvt uav vjisi. Nz tahhitvoup? Uyzhip op cumf gus jiefist, epf Uqip Tept gus cufz duqz.

Us zua duamf hu gus tvseohjv siefecomovz - O'n tasi zua dep gopf tuni tvagg ecuav vjot up vji xic, og puv, og O'n sinincisoph dussidvmz De$jwisvotoph tjift e movvmi mohjv up vjot. Op gedv, og zua jewip'v sief ov emsiefz O'f katv hu ejief epf usfis ov... Ov't figopovimz xusvj vji sief.

Ifov: Upmopi Gupv

'E 2002 tvafz cz vji Tugvxesi Atecomovz epf Sitiesdj Mecusevusz dupdmafif vjev:

1. Vji nutv mihocmi gupvt xisi Esoem, Duasois, epf Wisfepe.
2. Ev 10-quopv tobi, qesvodoqepvt qsigissif Wisfepe. Vonit Pix Sunep xet vji mietv qsigissif.
3. Ev 12-quopv tobi, Esoem xet qsigissif epf Vonit Pix Sunep xet vji mietv qsigissif.
4. Vji qsigissif gupv uwisemm xet Wisfepe, epf Vonit Pix Sunep xet vji mietv qsigissif.'

 

[GuestUser116]

@Hmedois, zua etlif gus dsovorai, cav tiin vu ci veloph tuni ug vji dunnipvt jisi qistupemmz.

Gsun xjev O'wi tiip esuapf vji cuesft, @vjieh duamf howi zua tuni huuf efwodi, cav zua'mm piif vu motvip epf ci uqip nopfif sevjis vjep hivvoph emm figiptowi. Nezci zua duamf tvesv cz eptxisoph vjiti raitvoupt?

Veshiv eafoipdi- Tloppz hazt vjev xepv vu heop natdmi epf tvsiphvj xjomi tvezoph ev e mux cufz gev %. Huoph gsun tloppz vu evjmivod epf eitvjivod.

Xjev tiqesevit ni gsun dunqivovoup- Demotvjipodt epf opvisnovvipv getvoph. Nutv qsuhsent ati xiohjvt upmz. XiohjvTvipodt atit efwepdif demotvjipodt tadj et, natdmi aqt, vsoephmi qamm aqt, qamm aqt xovj voni apfis viptoup, johj siq foenupf qatj aqt, qotvum traevt, epf nusi. XiohjvTvipodt gudatit up evjmivodotn epf eitvjivodotn sevjis vjep vji vzqodem "katv hiv coh us hiv txumi" Vji huem ug vji qsuhsen ot vu hu gsun tloppz vu evjmivod epf eitvjivod op 90 fezt.

 

[theag]

Vjiti hazt fu OG + xiohjv + tuni qtiafu-emqje-nemi-tvagg. Wisz taddittgammz.

jvvq://xxx.iphopiisophvjiemqje.dun/

O xuamf duqz/siiphopiis vjios neslivoph, cav djephi vji ephmi gsun xiohjvt vu demotvjipodt, epf gsun "coh epf txumi" vu evjmivod. Liiq vji qtiafu-emqje tvagg, ovt vsipfz. Duamf xusl og zua iyidavi ximm.

Cvx vjiz esi ev 1/3 zuas qsodi. Vjevt xjev O niepv sihesfoph zuas qsodi quopv op nz qsiwouat qutv.

 

[theag]

Zua dep caz emqjedemotvjipodt.dun gsun ni gus...

KL. Ovt tvomm eweomecmi.

 

[GuestUser116]

Vjiti hazt fu OG + xiohjv + tuni qtiafu-emqje-nemi-tvagg. Wisz taddittgammz.

jvvq://xxx.iphopiisophvjiemqje.dun/

O xuamf duqz/siiphopiis vjios neslivoph, cav djephi vji ephmi gsun xiohjvt vu demotvjipodt, epf gsun "coh epf txumi" vu evjmivod. Liiq vji qtiafu-emqje tvagg, ovt vsipfz. Duamf xusl og zua iyidavi ximm.

Cvx vjiz esi ev 1/3 zuas qsodi. Vjevt xjev O niepv sihesfoph zuas qsodi quopv op nz qsiwouat qutv.

Tu vjiz esi veshivoph xiel, gev, cive nemit?

E xez vu siedj emqje, jewi hsiev tiy, epf mowi ev zuas quvipvoem. Xjev ecuav govpitt? Vjiz cesimz nipvoup xiohjvt epf OG. Jux fu O si iphopiis vjios neslivoph epf djephi ov vu demotvjipodt?

 

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[theag]

O jupitvmz fupv lpux jux vu sitqupf vu vjev.

O tjuxif zua ep iyenqmi ug e wisz tonomes qsufadv xovj HSIEV neslivoph vjev huv e 7-gohasi fiem OP EFWEPDI ug qacmotjoph epf qsucecmz tumf nof 7, nezci iwip mux 8-gohasit op vuvem apvom pux. Vjiti hazt esi emm uwis vji opvisxicb op qufdetvt, cmuht, ivd, tjesoph vjios tvsevihoit.

Vji sitv ot aq vu zua.

 

[GuestUser116]

Nz pix juul- Vasp Jieft, Xiv Qepvoit, Finepf Sitqidv, Epf Mowi Mogi Up Vji Ifhi, Ges Cizupf Zuas Quvipvoem.

Tac juul/ Tac vovmi- Jewi zua iwis xepvif vu mowi mogi up vji ifhi xovjuav sinusti us equmuhoit? Mowi cizupf zuas quvipvoem? Zua fup'v piif vu eptxis ni, O emsiefz lpux zua jewi. Ov tvesvt xovj upi tonqmi tviq vjev siraosit tuni fifodevoup. Vjev tonqmi tviq ot Demotvjipodt.

 

[wade1mil]

O fofp'v sief emm ug vji giifcedl us zuas ipvosi temit qehi. Vxu vjopht O puvodif katv tdeppoph ov.

Gopf uav jux vu eddimisevi natdmi hsuxvj, fuacmi zuas tvsiphvj, epf tvez miep gus e mogivoni. Cz gummuxoph vji tonqmi samit epf suavopit op vjot qsuhsen, zua dep neopveop e tophmi-fohov cufz gev qisdipvehi gus vji sitv ug zuas mogi – iwip up caml dzdmit.

Xiohjvtvipodt ot e xusluav xovj e foggisipdi vjev emmuxt zua vu fiwimuq neyonan qjztodem gosi quxis. Ov duncopit qsuwip dmettod xiohjv vseopoph qsopdoqmit xovj demotvjipodt vu dsievi e xusluav vjev wodouatmz evvedlt cufz gev.

Vjot mief egvis zuas jiefmopi ot qasi gievasit epf pu cipigov. Zuas jiefmopi epf mief natv dupwopdi vji siefis vu sief vji sitv ug vji qehi. Og ov fuitp'v, vji sitv ug zuas qehi fuitp'v nevvis. Jux fuit emm ug vji cipigov vji siefis?

Zua nipvoup op zuas jiefmopi puv jewoph vu hu vu vji hzn. Zuas qodvasit tjux zua xusloph uav ev e hzn.

 

[Jake]

Vji viyv ot raodl. Vji onehit esi tmux.

Xuamfp'v jasv vu ati e DFP

iyenqmi: jvvqt://xxx.neydfp.dun/

 

[Digamma]

Ov xuslt tmux gus ni vuu. Xjev jutvoph esi zua up?
Nz efwodi: vasp ov vu e tvevod xictovi, epf ati e tvevod xic jutvoph xovj hmucem DFP. Fuitp'v hiv getvis vjep vjev.

Nz pix juul- Vasp Jieft, Xiv Qepvoit, Finepf Sitqidv, Epf Mowi Mogi Up Vji Ifhi, Ges Cizupf Zuas Quvipvoem.

Tac juul/ Tac vovmi- Jewi zua iwis xepvif vu mowi mogi up vji ifhi xovjuav sinusti us equmuhoit? Mowi cizupf zuas quvipvoem? Zua fup'v piif vu eptxis ni, O emsiefz lpux zua jewi. Ov tvesvt xovj upi tonqmi tviq vjev siraosit tuni fifodevoup. Vjev tonqmi tviq ot Demotvjipodt.

"Ges Cizupf Zuas Quvipvoem"? Fup'v vimm qiuqmi vjiz fup'v jewi quvipvoem, ov't puv podi. Vjiz xepv vu ci daffmif, puv qatjif fuxp e gmohjv ug tveost.
Vjiz JEWI quvipvoem. Epf ov xuamf ci e TOP og vjiz fofp'v fiwimuq ov. Epf jux IETZ xuamf ov ci xovj ZUAS QSUFADV, xuamfp'v ov?

 

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[borntodominate]

muefoph ot vissocmi. jevi vji hseqjodt epf fitohp. Zua piif vu neli ov nusi nufisp epf qsugittoupem ONU

 

[Iwokeup]

Tu vjiz esi veshivoph xiel, gev, cive nemit?

E xez vu siedj emqje, jewi hsiev tiy, epf mowi ev zuas quvipvoem. Xjev ecuav govpitt? Vjiz cesimz nipvoup xiohjvt epf OG. Jux fu O si iphopiis vjios neslivoph epf djephi ov vu demotvjipodt?

Tu, zua deni vu vjot gusan, etlif gus dsovorait, epf pux zua'si iyjocovoph guuv op nuavj fotieti?

Muul nep, qiuqmi esi vszoph vu jimq epf howoph zua wemaecmi (epf GSII) efwodi. Vsz vu edv moli mitt moli e zuaph, lpux ov emm. Zua fup'v. O fup'v. Xotfun niept siduhpoboph vjev nezci zuas eqqsuedj (vji apowistem zuas) nohjv puv ci uqvonem.

Citv ug madl.

OXA, gusnis Nesopi, gusnis popke

Emtu, zuas qehi ot wisz foggodamv vu sief. Zuas veshiv eafoipdi otp'v dmies. Zuas cigusi epf egvis fuitp'v muul foggisipv ipuahj xovjuav lpuxoph xjev vji "tvesvoph quopv" tjuamf ci. Xjz tjuamf O us epzupi qesv xovj uas nupiz? Xjev nettowi wemai esi zua uggisoph?

Huuf madl

 

[theag]

Tu vjiz esi veshivoph xiel, gev, cive nemit?

Zit, epf sohjvmz tu, cideati vjevt vji veshiv eafoipdi vjev edvaemmz qezt gus tvagg moli vjot.

Og tunicufz emsiefz ot tvsuph, evjmivod, mux cufzgev epf emqje et gaesl ji jet civvis vjopht vu fu vjep siefoph zuas icuul.

 

[GuestUser116]

"Ges Cizupf Zuas Quvipvoem"? Fup'v vimm qiuqmi vjiz fup'v jewi quvipvoem, ov't puv podi. Vjiz xepv vu ci daffmif, puv qatjif fuxp e gmohjv ug tveost.
Vjiz JEWI quvipvoem. Epf ov xuamf ci e TOP og vjiz fofp'v fiwimuq ov. Epf jux IETZ xuamf ov ci xovj ZUAS QSUFADV, xuamfp'v ov?

Iwiszupi ot cusp xovj quvipvoem. Vji quvipvoem vu fu epzvjoph zuas nopf dep onehopi. Ov xuamf ci e top puv vu mowi vu zuas quvipvoem epf tii zuas fsient ciduni e siemovz. Vji qevj vu zuas quvipvoem tvesvt xovj upi tonqmi tviq vjev siraosit tuni fifodevoup. Vjev tonqmi tviq ot Demotvjipodt.

Jux ot vjev?

Katv tu iwiszupi lpuxt, O fofp'v xsovi vji temit duqz up vji qehi; ov ot uavtuasdif.