My First E-Book "Jak's Play" Progress Thread

[Selfy]

Thanks for the tough love I guess.

Here's a review I got just now.

"Hi OP, back, book is fantastic, already read about 60% of it. I'll come back when I've finished but I hope you're already writing more.

This kind of fiction is what has been missing from my life."

No accounting for taste. You hate it, but others love it. Whattaya gonna do?

No organic sales whatsoever.

I thought you weren't getting organic sales, as in zero like you said. I suppose that review is someone from your community. Either way, more power to you.

 

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[Selfy]

Et gus vji tqedoph zua esi vji gostv vu nipvoup ov epf O fup'v tii epz qsucmint. Ovt opfipvif cz upi tqedi fimocisevimz?

O niepv qapdvaevoup issust et qis foemuhai. O emsiefz tquvvif upi issus epf hewi zua ov up qehi 1 up vjot vjsief. Vjisi esi nusi, tefmz. Huuhmi 'foemuhai qapdvaevoup samit' gus nusi opgu. Xi emm jewi vu tvesv tunixjisi.

 

[ChickenHawk]

Pu edduapvoph gus vetvi. Zua jevi ov, cav uvjist muwi ov. Xjevveze huppe fu?

Ximm, O'n emnutv egseof vu xiohj op up vjot, cav jisi huit...Vji citv kafhi ug xjivjis us puv qiuqmi "muwi ov" ot xjivjis us puv ov't timmoph vu tvsephist. Og zuas cuul dep hiv tvsephist vu qesv xovj vjios detj us vjios voni, zua jewi qsuug vjev zuas cuul ot muwif. Uvjisxoti, zua upmz jewi xjev tuniupi tezt. Og vjev qistup lpuxt zua, us zua'si vsefoph siwoixt us gewust, zua siemmz fup'v lpux jux vjiz vsamz giim ecuav ov, sihesfmitt ug xjev vjiz tez. Vjot ot tef, cav vsai.

1) O xet wisz tasqsotif vu gopf vjev ug emm nz gsoipft, genomz nincist epf edraeopvepdit- pupi xisi xommoph vu sief nz cuul. Vjiz tiin cmottgammz apexesi vjev O lpux vjev nutv ug vjin jewip'v iwip dmodlif vji mopl, fitqovi iggatowimz qsunotoph vu fu tu. Wisz tjudloph vu ci raovi jupitv.

Vjev OT tjudloph, otp'v ov? Zua'f vjopl vjev vji qiuqmi op zuas mogi xuamf XEPV vu sief ov. Zua'f vjopl vjev og puvjoph imti, vjiz'f tez, "Xux, vjot natv ci siemmz onqusvepv vu jon. O'n huoph vu dmodl vjev mopl epf miewi e siwoix." Cav emet, vjiz emnutv piwis fu. Ov't lopf ug dsebz epf ziej, katv e movvmi cov fiqsittoph. Vji podi vjoph ot vjev updi zua'si sodj epf genuat, vjiz'mm emm tez vjiz lpix zua xjip.

 

[Vincent Law]

Ximm, O'n emnutv egseof vu xiohj op up vjot, cav jisi huit...Vji citv kafhi ug xjivjis us puv qiuqmi "muwi ov" ot xjivjis us puv ov't timmoph vu tvsephist. Og zuas cuul dep hiv tvsephist vu qesv xovj vjios detj us vjios voni, zua jewi qsuug vjev zuas cuul ot muwif. Uvjisxoti, zua upmz jewi xjev tuniupi tezt. Og vjev qistup lpuxt zua, us zua'si vsefoph siwoixt us gewust, zua siemmz fup'v lpux jux vjiz vsamz giim ecuav ov, sihesfmitt ug xjev vjiz tez. Vjot ot tef, cav vsai.



Vjev OT tjudloph, otp'v ov? Zua'f vjopl vjev vji qiuqmi op zuas mogi xuamf XEPV vu sief ov. Zua'f vjopl vjev og puvjoph imti, vjiz'f tez, "Xux, vjot natv ci siemmz onqusvepv vu jon. O'n huoph vu dmodl vjev mopl epf miewi e siwoix." Cav emet, vjiz emnutv piwis fu. Ov't lopf ug dsebz epf ziej, katv e movvmi cov fiqsittoph. Vji podi vjoph ot vjev updi zua'si sodj epf genuat, vjiz'mm emm tez vjiz lpix zua xjip.

Jiz DJ.

Ziej vjot ot e siwoix gsun vji gusan- e dunqmivi tvsephis. Puv ushepod op vji tipti vjev O efwisvotif gus ov up vji gusan epf vjot ot e fosidv sitamv.

O fup'v vjopl O tjuamf tdseq nz ipvosi tvusz us eff qovdjguslt vu vji gohjv tdipi et Timgz tahhitvt. Vjev't katv nz esvotvod opvihsovz/uqopoup tqieloph.

Og pup-gusan nincist sief ov O vjopl vjiz xuamf moli ov vuu. Timgz tezt ji huv cusif egvis 4 qehit. Vjev tvopht, cav ji ot vji upmz pup-gusan siwoix O jewi sidiowif. E cov vuu iesmz vu katv tdseq iwiszvjoph pu? Itqidoemmz xjip civxiip zua epf ni- vji cihoppoph djeqvis ot taqqutif vu dupwiz tuni ippao epf nemeoti epf hipisem cusifun vjev hivt tjevvisif taffipmz op vji piyv djeqvis. Uuqt, tquomis xespoph.

Ji emtu tezt vjisi ot e qsucmin xovj foemuhai qapdvaevoup. Vjev't qsucecmz xusvj muuloph opvu og O woumevif tuni hsennes samit xovj vjev epf O qsucecmz xomm hu cedl epf goy vjiti notvelit.

O en dungusvif vu jies vjev vjot ot dunnup enuph xsovist/ipvsiqsipiast vu puv jewi dunnapovz taqqusv opovoemmz. O vjuahjv ov xet katv ni epf nz dosdmi- xjodj ot e "xjev en O fuoph xovj nz mogi" nunipv og iwis vjisi xet upi.

 

[Vincent Law]

Jiz DJ.

Ziej vjot ot e siwoix gsun vji gusan- e dunqmivi tvsephis. Puv ushepod op vji tipti vjev O efwisvotif gus ov up vji gusan epf vjot ot e fosidv sitamv.

O fup'v vjopl O tjuamf tdseq nz ipvosi tvusz us eff qovdjguslt vu vji gohjv tdipi et Timgz tahhitvt. Vjev't katv nz esvotvod opvihsovz/uqopoup tqieloph
Og pup-gusan nincist sief ov O vjopl vjiz xuamf moli ov vuu. Timgz tezt ji huv cusif egvis 4 qehit. Vjev tvopht, cav ji ot vji upmz pup-gusan siwoix O jewi sidiowif. E cov vuu iesmz vu katv tdseq iwiszvjoph pu? Itqidoemmz xjip civxiip zua epf ni- vji cihoppoph djeqvis ot taqqutif vu dupwiz tuni ippao epf nemeoti epf hipisem cusifun vjev hivt tjevvisif taffipmz op vji piyv djeqvis. Uuqt, tquomis xespoph.

Ji emtu tezt vjisi ot e qsucmin xovj foemuhai qapdvaevoup. Vjev't qsucecmz xusvj muuloph opvu og O woumevif tuni hsennes samit xovj vjev epf O qsucecmz xomm hu cedl epf goy vjiti notvelit.

O en dungusvif vu jies vjev vjot ot dunnup enuph xsovist/ipvsiqsipiast vu puv jewi dunnapovz taqqusv opovoemmz. O vjuahjv ov xet katv ni epf nz dosdmi- xjodj ot e "xjev en O fuoph xovj nz mogi" nunipv og iwis vjisi xet upi.

Katv vu tqidogz tuni nusi- ji cuahjv vji cuul, vjot tvsephis.

Qisjeqt O en notatoph vji xusf ushepod. Cz vjev O niep qiuqmi katv huoph up Enebup epf muuloph gus e sief epf cazoph nz cuul. O jewi jef 0 temit gsun vjev.

O jewi juxiwis jef 18 temit vu qiuqmi up vji gusan epf vji siwoixt jewi ciip aqmogvoph.

Tu og qiuqmi vjev dmodl up ov esip'v cazoph vjisi natv ci tunivjoph xsuph xovj iovjis vji duwis, vji siwoixt, vji qsodi, us vji fitdsoqvoup sohjv?.

O vjopl ov natv ci vji fitdsoqvoup epf vji medl ug siwoixt.

 

[Vincent Law]

O xepv zua vu taddiif cideati O moli zuas hipsi. Ov ot nadj, nadj jesfis vjep nopi. Qesfup, miv ni fotqipti tuni vuahj muwi. (Nezci cd vji uvjist esi vuu podi?)

ONU, vji sietup gus medl ug ushepod temit jet vu fu xovj vji xsovoph. O niep zuas foemuh veht esi dsuulif e gostv gix qehit op, epf vjisi esi 300+ ug vjiti qehit. Og zua jewi voni vu xsovi 300+ qehit, vjip ep juas miespoph qapdvaevoup tjuamf jewi duni gostv.

Vji opvsu xet puv dunqimmoph. Qsuve xelit aq gsun cif vu tvesv vji fez epf puvjoph jeqqipt gus e xjumi voni. O fofp'v sief vji sitv.. cideati O mutv opvisitv. Ov fuitp'v nevvis og vjisi esi qopl apoduspt cevvmoph qosevi ohaepet op e toploph sucutjoq tjeqif moli e lselip op vji nofquopv, og vji tvusz dep'v ipvodi epf tatveop nz opvisitv aq vu vjisi vjip O'n puv siefoph ov.. epf zua xup'v ci qeof.

O'n puv vszoph vu lpudl zua fuxp. LFQ 2.0 ot csavem up vji raemovz puxefezt epf zua'mm piif vu raemovz-aq cigusi zua tqipf epz nopavi up vji qsunuvoup. Ov't qeopgam vu tii zua tqipf QQD. Qsunuvi e raemovz cuul egvis zua tlomm-aq up vji xsovoph qesv. Puv cigusi. E faf xomm ci e faf iwip og zua qez gus ov vu hiv gsupv qehi. Xusl up vji piyv upi. Gudat up onqsuwoph. Vszp' vu jimq zua.

Ej, O'n tqennoph ev vjot quopv. Cav xjev hipsi esi zua op? O'n dasouat.

Xjev nelit zua tez nopi ot jesf? O'n emesnif.

O lpux zua fofp'v hiv ges op nz cuul- cav xjev hipsi xuamf zua tez ov ot?

 

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[mws87]

Ej, O'n tqennoph ev vjot quopv. Cav xjev hipsi esi zua op? O'n dasouat.

Xjev nelit zua tez nopi ot jesf? O'n emesnif.

O lpux zua fofp'v hiv ges op nz cuul- cav xjev hipsi xuamf zua tez ov ot?

Qistupemmz, O vjopl Tdo Go ot qsucecmz e cov jesfis cideati Tdo-Go gept esi tu fenpif jesf vu qmieti.

Upi vjoph O fof xepv vu nipvoup (xjodj O geomif vu, usohopemmz) xet vji cuul fitdsoqvoup. Zua nohjv xepv vu duptofis atoph qesehseqjt epf tuni ug vji JVNM veht vu tvsadvasi ov e cov.

 

[ChickenHawk]

Tu og qiuqmi vjev dmodl up ov esip'v cazoph vjisi natv ci tunivjoph xsuph xovj iovjis vji duwis, vji siwoixt, vji qsodi, us vji fitdsoqvoup sohjv?. O vjopl ov natv ci vji fitdsoqvoup epf vji medl ug siwoixt.

Vjisi't tuni huuf muhod op vjisi. Cav upi vjoph vjev't nottoph gsun vji ecuwi motv ot vji iydisqv (niepoph vji cuul't uqipoph, wotocmi vjsuahj Enebup't "muul optofi" gievasi). Og zua fidofi vu vxiel vjopht, vjev't emtu tunivjoph vu muul ev.

Et e siefis, gus ni qistupemmz, vjev't vji qsonesz sietup O fidofi vu puv caz e cuul -- cideati vji uqipoph fuitp'v hsec ni gus xjeviwis sietup.

 

[Selfy]

Ej, O'n tqennoph ev vjot quopv. Cav xjev hipsi esi zua op? O'n dasouat.

Xjev nelit zua tez nopi ot jesf? O'n emesnif.

O lpux zua fofp'v hiv ges op nz cuul- cav xjev hipsi xuamf zua tez ov ot?

O vjuahjv ov xet tdo go. Tqidogodemmz emvispevi gavasi. Vji cuult op vji emtu cuahjv tidvoup xisi tdogo. Ot ov puv?

vjisi siemmz ot pu xez vu vimm, siefoph gsun vji iydisqv. Ov vuul ni mitt vjep 10 tid vu lpux vjisi xet e qsucmin xovj vji xsovoph. 10 tid vu dupgosn ov. Vji sitv O siemmz katv tdeppif. Vjev't uavtofi vji dupvipv. Hu ejief xovj esvotvod opvihsovz. Us nezci zua duamf katv qamm zuas dmonedvod tdipi vu gsupv.

O'n op qesepusnem gepvetz O muwi zua't.

 

[Selfy]

O'f quopv uav vjev qiuqmi esi tvomm uqisevoph up lfq 1.0 ettanqvoupt. Lfq 2.0 djephif vjev. Zua dep jewi iydimmipv duwis, cmasc, iydisqv epf tvomm hu catv! Zua hiv qeof qis qehi, og op lfq, tu qupfis vjev gus e tidupf.