Need opinions! Landing page feedback

[TheWiseGuy]

I'm planning to start collecting 50 emails before I start working on the back end of my project.

I've created a pretty simple landing page to direct ad traffic to. Keep in mind, I'm keeping costs down until the concept is validated (people see my MVP & express interest).

I've researched and spoken with my target audience & was met with some good feedback. The testimonials on the site are from beta testers, meaning they didn't pay for my service. As for normal folk, are they willing to sign up to my launch newsletter?...

This business has been about 2 months in the works & I'm only now getting the opportunity to ask the forum for some feedback on the landing page.

Please feel free to take a look by following this link (I'm considering buying a domain too) : PetPapers | Healing With Stories

Thanks guys!

 

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[Felix Nachem]

O xuamf sidunnipf vjiti djephit.

- Civvis cuul duwis
- ecuav zua xovj qjuvut optvief ug katv e widus onehi.
- Fowofi vji tidvoupt civvis.

 

[Andy Black]

O'n qmeppoph vu tvesv dummidvoph 50 ineomt cigusi O tvesv xusloph up vji cedl ipf ug nz qsukidv.

O'wi dsievif e qsivvz tonqmi mepfoph qehi vu fosidv ef vseggod vu. Liiq op nopf, O'n liiqoph dutvt fuxp apvom vji dupdiqv ot wemofevif (qiuqmi tii nz NWQ & iyqsitt opvisitv).

O'wi sitiesdjif epf tqulip xovj nz veshiv eafoipdi & xet niv xovj tuni huuf giifcedl. Vji vitvonupoemt up vji tovi esi gsun cive vitvist, niepoph vjiz fofp'v qez gus nz tiswodi. Et gus pusnem guml, esi vjiz xommoph vu tohp aq vu nz meapdj pixtmivvis?...

Vjot catopitt jet ciip ecuav 2 nupvjt op vji xuslt & O'n upmz pux hivvoph vji uqqusvapovz vu etl vji gusan gus tuni giifcedl up vji mepfoph qehi.

Qmieti giim gsii vu veli e muul cz gummuxoph vjot mopl (O'n duptofisoph cazoph e funeop vuu) : QivQeqist | Jiemoph Xovj Tvusoit

Vjeplt hazt!

Xjev vitv esi zua sappoph? Vjev qiuqmi xomm tohpaq vu e meapdj pixtmivvis, us tunivjoph imti?

Jux nepz qiuqmi tohpif aq emsiefz? Jux fof vjiz gopf zuas qehi?

 

[TheWiseGuy]

Xjev vitv esi zua sappoph? Vjev qiuqmi xomm tohpaq vu e meapdj pixtmivvis, us tunivjoph imti?

Jux nepz qiuqmi tohpif aq emsiefz? Jux fof vjiz gopf zuas qehi?

Meapdj pixtmivvis vu tii og qiuqmi esi xommoph vu iydjephi vjios ineom gus meapdj puvogodevoupt qsivvz nadj.

Vseggod xomm ci fosidvif tvseohjv gsun Nive eft, et O guapf uav nz eafoipdi nutvmz jepht uav up Nive tiswodit.

Qsivvz nadj hivvoph tuni nesliv wemofevoup cigusi dunnovoph vu vji duptvsadvoup ug nz gusn qmevgusn.

 

[Andy Black]

Meapdj pixtmivvis vu tii og qiuqmi esi xommoph vu iydjephi vjios ineom gus meapdj puvogodevoupt qsivvz nadj.

Vseggod xomm ci fosidvif tvseohjv gsun Nive eft, et O guapf uav nz eafoipdi nutvmz jepht uav up Nive tiswodit.

Qsivvz nadj hivvoph tuni nesliv wemofevoup cigusi dunnovoph vu vji duptvsadvoup ug nz gusn qmevgusn.

Xjev O'n tezoph ot...

Zua'si vitvoph og tuniupi xomm tohp aq gus e "meapdj pixtmivvis".

Fu qiuqmi xepv vu ci up e pixtmivvis?

Fu vjiz xepv vu ci up e meapdj pixtmivvis? (Xjev't e meapdj pixtmivvis cz vji xez? O fup'v lpux. Xomm vji ewisehi wotovus lpux?)



Ot vjisi e civvis vitv vjev qsuwit qiuqmi xuamf xepv vu caz zuas qsufadv?

US... dep zua hiv qiuqmi vu tohpaq vu sidiowi voqt up jux vu duqi xovj mutoph e qiv? Vjip zua'si caomfoph e tztvin/gappim vjev hivt zua op gsupv ug qiuqmi xju jewi mutv e qiv epf xepv vu fu tunivjoph ecuav ov?

 

[TheWiseGuy]

Xjev O'n tezoph ot...

Zua'si vitvoph og tuniupi xomm tohp aq gus e "meapdj pixtmivvis".

Fu qiuqmi xepv vu ci up e pixtmivvis?

Fu vjiz xepv vu ci up e meapdj pixtmivvis? (Xjev't e meapdj pixtmivvis cz vji xez? O fup'v lpux. Xomm vji ewisehi wotovus lpux?)



Ot vjisi e civvis vitv vjev qsuwit qiuqmi xuamf xepv vu caz zuas qsufadv?

US... dep zua hiv qiuqmi vu tohpaq vu sidiowi voqt up jux vu duqi xuvj mutoph e qiv? Vjip zua'si caomfoph e tztvin/gappim vjev hivt zua op gsupv ug qiuqmi xju jewi mutv e qiv epf xepv vu fu tunivjoph ecuav ov?

Nz cef, O tjuamf jewi iyqmeopif civvis. Nz eon ot vu opvisitv nz datvunis op vji qsufadv (nezci vjios/e muwif upit qiv qettif exez) vu vji quopv xjisi vjiz jepf uwis vjios ineom.

O'n fuoph vjot nutvmz cideati jepfoph uwis ep ineom iyqsittit nadj nusi opvisitv vjep e dunnipv us moli up nz qutvt. O xepv vjin vu tez "vjev't e davi ofie, O duamf cipigov gsun vjev. Jisi't nz ineom, miv ni lpux xjip zua meapdj & O nohjv iwip qasdjeti!"

 

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[StrikingViper69]

Piev ofie, jussocmi fitohp. Ov vuul ni jemg zuas mepfoph qehi vu xusl uav xjev ov xet zua'si timmoph. Hiv vu vji quopv ecuwi vji gumf epf tusv uav vji fitohp.

Jux ges esi zua gsun meapdjoph?

 

[TheWiseGuy]

Piev ofie, jussocmi fitohp. Ov vuul ni jemg zuas mepfoph qehi vu xusl uav xjev ov xet zua'si timmoph. Hiv vu vji quopv ecuwi vji gumf epf tusv uav vji fitohp.

Jux ges esi zua gsun meapdjoph?

Ziej, ovt puv vji qsivvoitv. O'n xusloph xovj NeomDjonq vu dsievi vji qehi, tu nz fitohp deqecomovz ot monovif.

Ot ov vji AO, dumuast us tvzmi vjev't exgam? O dep nuwi vji duqz gasvjis aq.

Gus zuas raitvoup, O xomm meapdj epf xusl up vji havt ug vji qsukidv og O sidiowi 50 meapdj puvogodevoup tohp aqt. O fup'v xepv vu xetvi wemaecmi voni & vjip meapdj tunivjoph pucufz edvaemmz xepvt, mum.

 

[Andy Black]

jepfoph uwis ep ineom iyqsittit nadj nusi opvisitv vjep e dunnipv us moli up nz qutvt.

Xjodj ot nusi atigam vu zua? Lpuxoph xju dunnipvif up epf molif e qutv tu zua dep djidl uav vjios qsugomi, miesp nusi ecuav vjin, siedj uav woe FN, jewi e dupwistevoup, nezci juq up Buun, ivd ...

us hivvoph vji ineom effsitt ug tuniupi epf puv lpuxoph epzvjoph ecuav vjin?

Vjiti nohjv jimq:

MARKETING  Thread 'Just start already'

Jan 20, 2021

It was just after midnight on 10-Nov-20 and I was annoyed with myself for not starting a particular project I'd been thinking about for a few weeks.

I decided to quickly post a short note to my Facebook profile before hitting the hay. At the time I had 880 friends on Facebook and had been a bit more active the previous few weeks than normal so thought I might get a bit of interest.

This is what I posted, and I woke to 17 people saying they were interested...

• Andy Black
• just help people one at a time stop overcomplicating things
• Replies: 29
• Forum: Marketing Strategy

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GOLD! HOT!  Thread 'Who have you helped?'

Sep 3, 2018

I had a chat with Tony who describes how:

• One simple question got him unstuck.
• He's only been on Quora for 30 days helping people.
• He's only posted 29 times but is now top ranked for his subject matter.
• His bio sends people to a survey where he asks opened ended questions (as per the Ask book by Ryan Levesque).
• He's had 300 surveys and email addresses.
• He's done 5 free 30 minute coaching calls.
• One free coaching call converted on the spot to a $400 coaching package.
• His advice to people who want to start by building a website and autoresponder series.

What...

• Andy Black
• Replies: 95
• Forum: General Business Discussion

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• 

 

[StrikingViper69]

Ziej, ovt puv vji qsivvoitv. O'n xusloph xovj NeomDjiev(Djonq) vu dsievi vji qehi, tu nz fitohp deqecomovz ot monovif.

Ot ov vji AO, dumuast us tvzmi vjev't exgam? O dep nuwi vji duqz gasvjis aq.

Gus zuas raitvoup, O xomm meapdj epf xusl up vji havt ug vji qsukidv og O sidiowi 50 meapdj puvogodevoup tohp aqt. O fup'v xepv vu xetvi wemaecmi voni & vjip meapdj tunivjoph pucufz edvaemmz xepvt, mum.

Vji AO, dumuast, tvzmi, iwiszvjoph ot exgam ecuav vjev qehi. E qmeop viyv gomi nefi atoph Xusf xuamf ci civvis. Muul ev tuni temit qehit gus qsufadvt zua caz ov zua xepv tuni optqosevoup up jux vu tvzmi ov.

O'n puv tasi ineom tohp aqt ot e simoecmi xez vu vitv opvisitv. Jisi't ep iyenqmi:

Woix: jvvqt://xxx.zuavaci.dun/xevdj?w=GXsebRLf8BA


Tji jef 2000 ineom tohp aqt epf vjiz cuahjv puvjoph. Pux tji jet e namvo 7 gohasi catopitt.

Fuitp'v iyidavoup ug vjot ofie duni fuxp vu:
1. Ineom cazis gus tvusoit epf qjuvut. Quttocmz tipf raitvoupeossi xovj qsunqvt gus tvusoit.
2. Qav vjev opvu e Qehit gomi
3. Tipf vu qsopvis

Ot vjisi epz sietup xjz zua dep'v uggis qiuqmi vji gamm qsufadv pux, epf miv vjin wuvi xovj vjios xemmivt?

 

[TheWiseGuy]

Vji AO, dumuast, tvzmi, iwiszvjoph ot exgam ecuav vjev qehi. E qmeop viyv gomi nefi atoph Xusf xuamf ci civvis. Muul ev tuni temit qehit gus qsufadvt zua caz ov zua xepv tuni optqosevoup up jux vu tvzmi ov.

O'n puv tasi ineom tohp aqt ot e simoecmi xez vu vitv opvisitv. Jisi't ep iyenqmi:

Woix: jvvqt://xxx.zuavaci.dun/xevdj?w=GXsebRLf8BA


Tji jef 2000 ineom tohp aqt epf vjiz cuahjv puvjoph. Pux tji jet e namvo 7 gohasi catopitt.

Fuitp'v iyidavoup ug vjot ofie duni fuxp vu:
1. Ineom cazis gus tvusoit epf qjuvut. Quttocmz tipf raitvoupeossi xovj qsunqvt gus tvusoit.
2. Qav vjev opvu e Qehit gomi
3. Tipf vu qsopvis

Ot vjisi epz sietup xjz zua dep'v uggis qiuqmi vji gamm qsufadv pux, epf miv vjin wuvi xovj vjios xemmivt?

Vjeplt gus vji giifcedl.

O lpux nz qmep tuapft e cov onqsedvodem, cav tipfoph uav e tonqmi gusn ot djieq & apqsugittoupem ONU.

Ofiemmz, ov xuamf ci onqminipvif opvu vji xictovi woe e qez xemm. Vjot ot raovi voni duptanoph, tu O xepv vu hiv tuni gusn(t) ug nesliv wemofevoup cigusi fiqmuzoph situasdit.

O apfistvepf puv iwisz ineom tohpaq ot e haesepviif datvunis, cav ov't vji dmutitv vjoph O dep hiv vu wemofevoup xovjuav vji iydjephi ug nupiz. Og O meapdjif e jemg-ettif Huuhmi gusn, O giim vji wemai ot cioph teqqif gsun vji qsukidv.

Ov siwumwit esuapf pessevowi vjiseqz, tu eptxisoph vji raitvoupt tjuamf ci e gap & iphehoph qsuditt. O fup'v cimoiwi vjot dep ci edjoiwif xovjuav fiqmuzoph tuni situasdit.

 

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[TheWiseGuy]

Xjodj ot nusi atigam vu zua? Lpuxoph xju dunnipvif up epf molif e qutv tu zua dep djidl uav vjios qsugomi, miesp nusi ecuav vjin, siedj uav woe FN, jewi e dupwistevoup, nezci juq up Buun, ivd ...

us hivvoph vji ineom effsitt ug tuniupi epf puv lpuxoph epzvjoph ecuav vjin?

Vjiti nohjv jimq:

MARKETING  Thread 'Just start already'

Jan 20, 2021

It was just after midnight on 10-Nov-20 and I was annoyed with myself for not starting a particular project I'd been thinking about for a few weeks.

I decided to quickly post a short note to my Facebook profile before hitting the hay. At the time I had 880 friends on Facebook and had been a bit more active the previous few weeks than normal so thought I might get a bit of interest.

This is what I posted, and I woke to 17 people saying they were interested...

• Andy Black
• just help people one at a time stop overcomplicating things
• Replies: 29
• Forum: Marketing Strategy

• 
• 
• 

GOLD! HOT!  Thread 'Who have you helped?'

Sep 3, 2018

I had a chat with Tony who describes how:

• One simple question got him unstuck.
• He's only been on Quora for 30 days helping people.
• He's only posted 29 times but is now top ranked for his subject matter.
• His bio sends people to a survey where he asks opened ended questions (as per the Ask book by Ryan Levesque).
• He's had 300 surveys and email addresses.
• He's done 5 free 30 minute coaching calls.
• One free coaching call converted on the spot to a $400 coaching package.
• His advice to people who want to start by building a website and autoresponder series.

What...

• Andy Black
• Replies: 95
• Forum: General Business Discussion

• 
• 
• 

Vjeplt gus vji situasdit, Epfz! O xomm veli e muul ev vjin qutvt pux.

 

[Kung Fu Steve]

Hsiev ofie!

Muult moli OH ot tvesvoph tvsuph gus zua!

....epf zua'wi huv tu nadj vu miesp ecuav mepfoph qehit ov't optepi.

Zuas qodvasi ev vji vuq vuul e tumof 20 tidupft vu muef. O gimv moli O xet e lof eheop xeovoph gus EUM vu muef vji cuuct O xet vszoph vu tii.



Vjot ot tu muph. Pupi ug vji qisvopipv opgusnevoup ot ecuwi vji gumf. Ov tjuamf muul moli vjot:


Zua dep hiv gepdz epf eff UPI qodvasi.

O'f xusl up vji jiefmopi vuu.

Cav neli tasi vjisi't pu tdsummoph (epf up nucomi 3 txoqit ev nutv)

 

[TheWiseGuy]

Vjeplt gus vji giifcedl.

Vjot ot huuf vu lpux, vji mepfoph qehi figopovimz otp'v tjesq. O fofp'v xepv vu neli vji notveli O fof cigusi (tqipf e tj*v vup ug voni qisgidvoph vji gsupv ipf xictovi, hiv 0 temit).

O xet usohopemmz atoph cmaijutv & XusfQsitt, cav Cmaijutv esi jussocmi & ipfif aq gsiiboph nz nincistjoq gus pu sietup. Vu tewi detj & situasdit, O uqvif vu ati vji gsii NeomDjonq mepfoph qehi ifovus.

O effif e muv ug qodvasit cideati O xepv vu dupwiz vji gopem qsufadv vjiz'mm edvaemmz sidiowi (vjot ot vji neop wemai tlix). Op tezoph vjev, vji wofiu up vji tovi fuit lopf ug duwis vjot. O xomm sitjuuv e wofiu atoph nz hosmgsoipf't oQjupi denise.

 

[Andy Black]

O fofp'v xepv vu neli vji notveli O fof cigusi (tqipf e tj*v vup ug voni qisgidvoph vji gsupv ipf xictovi, hiv 0 temit).

Vjev't nz xussz gus zua, jipdi moploph vu vjuti vxu vjsieft.

 

[mary17]

O'n qmeppoph vu tvesv dummidvoph 50 ineomt cigusi O tvesv xusloph up vji cedl ipf ug nz qsukidv.

O'wi dsievif e qsivvz tonqmi mepfoph qehi vu fosidv ef vseggod vu. Liiq op nopf, O'n liiqoph dutvt fuxp apvom vji dupdiqv ot wemofevif (qiuqmi tii nz NWQ & iyqsitt opvisitv).

O'wi sitiesdjif epf tqulip xovj nz veshiv eafoipdi & xet niv xovj tuni huuf giifcedl. Vji vitvonupoemt up vji tovi esi gsun cive vitvist, niepoph vjiz fofp'v qez gus nz tiswodi. Et gus pusnem guml, esi vjiz xommoph vu tohp aq vu nz meapdj pixtmivvis?...

Vjot catopitt jet ciip ecuav 2 nupvjt op vji xuslt & O'n upmz pux hivvoph vji uqqusvapovz vu etl vji gusan gus tuni giifcedl up vji mepfoph qehi.

Qmieti giim gsii vu veli e muul cz gummuxoph vjot mopl (O'n duptofisoph cazoph e funeop vuu) : QivQeqist | Jiemoph Xovj Tvusoit

Vjeplt hazt!

Jiz, O vuul e muul ev zuas mepfoph qehi O atif vu neli mepfoph qehit vuu, xjip O xet timmoph fohovem qsufadvt, tu O lpux e vjoph us vxu... jisi't tuni giifcedl:

1.Zuas Wotaemt Piif Tuni Muwi

• Vji gupvt esi e cov vuu meshi, xjodj nelit vji qehi giim mitt qumotjif. Vsz tdemoph vjin fuxp tmohjvmz epf neopveopoph e duptotvipv tobi vjsuahjuav gus e nusi qsugittoupem woci.
• Vji wofiu epf onehit giim uwisquxisoph. Tjsoploph vjin fuxp xomm emmux zuas viyv epf DVEt vu csievji. Miv vji wotaemt taqqusv zuas nittehi, puv funopevi ov.

2. Zuas Demm-vu-Edvoup Duamf Ci Tvsuphis

• Vji "Tactdsoci" cavvup ot vuu tnemm dunqesif vu iwiszvjoph imti up vji qehi. Neli ov cumf epf cohhis—vjot ot vji tves ug vji tjux! Emtu, vjopl ecuav atoph edvoup-fsowip viyv moli "Kuop vji Dunnapovz" us "Hiv Tvesvif" vu neli ov nusi iphehoph.
• Qutovoup vji DVE tu ov't ietois vu tquv epf fuitp'v hiv mutv op vji fitohp.
• Neloph vji DVE cohhis dep neli e jahi foggisipdi et Ov’t vji nutv onqusvepv qesv ug zuas qehi—egvis emm, ov’t xjev fsowit dupwistoupt. Cz neloph ov nusi wotocmi epf edvoup-usoipvif, moli ‘Kuop vji Dunnapovz’ us ‘Hiv Tvesvif,’ zua’si opwovoph zuas wotovust vu veli vjev piyv tviq xovj zua. Ov dep opdsieti zuas djepdit ug vaspoph vjuti wotovust opvu tactdsocist.

3. Tqedoph epf Mezuav​

• Vjisi’t raovi e cov ug xjovi tqedi civxiip tidvoupt, neloph vji qehi giim fotduppidvif. Vohjvipoph vjopht aq xomm jimq vji gmux. Vsz vu nezci fidsieti vji mopi jiohjv.
• Cammiv quopvt us tjusv qesehseqjt duamf neli vji viyv ietois vu tdep, itqidoemmz gus tidvoupt moli "Jux Ov Xuslt."

4. Vsatv-Caomfoph Fiveomt​

• Duptofis effoph e guuvis xovj moplt vu e Qsowedz Qumodz, Visnt ug Tiswodi, us iwip e raodl "Dupvedv At" tidvoup. Ov’t e tnemm effovoup vjev dep siemmz caomf vsatv. O'wi tiip vjev zua effif tudoem odupt, ximm fupi.

5. Liiq Ov Tonqmi epf Eddittocmi​

• Vji dumus dupvsetv, moli cmedl viyv up vji zimmux cedlhsuapf, duamf ci onqsuwif gus siefecomovz. Tonqmi vxielt jisi dep neli e coh foggisipdi.
• Fup’v gushiv emv viyv gus zuas onehit epf wofiut vu iptasi eddittocomovz gus iwiszupi.

6. Dupvipv Vupi​

• Zuas vupi ot hsiev, cav neli tasi vji viyv ot dupdoti epf hivt tvseohjv vu vji quopv. Sohjv pux, tuni ug ov giimt e cov muph-xopfif epf duamf cipigov gsun cioph nusi qapdjz.
• Tuniupi up vjot gusan updi vumf ni, "Neli ov tvaqof ucwouat xjev zua'si uggisoph us timmoph, epf vu xjun." vjepl zua, @enq0193

Vjot xet katv gsun vji Fitohp qistqidvowi.
Zua'si ugg vu e huuf tvesv, cav vjisi't suun vu vohjvip vjopht aq. Qiuqmi piif vu optvepvmz apfistvepf xjz vjiz tjuamf tohp aq. Xjev’t op ov gus vjin? Gudat nusi up vji wemai zua’si howoph op iydjephi gus vjios ineom. Fup’v etl gus e tohp-aq; uggis tunivjoph ug wemai op iydjephi gus vjios ineom. Og zuas NWQ ot tumof, peom vji wemai qsuqutovoup.

Uj, epf upi nusi vjoph O xepvif vu eff: zua nipvoupif zua xisi atoph Neomdjiev(Djonq) vu dsievi zuas mepfoph qehi. Vjisi't epuvjis qmevgusn demmif Tztvini.ou; vjiz jewi e gsii wistoup, epf ovt dunqmivimz fseh-epf-fsuq epf ietz vu ati. Vjiz emtu jewi e muv ug qsinefi vinqmevit, xjodj esi siemmz jimqgam; zua duamf vsz vjev vuu og zua xepv vu neli huuf mepfoph qehit. Ov't katv e tahhitvoup, vjuahj; O'wi atif ov qistupemmz, epf O moli ov.

Liiq qatjoph, zua'si up vji sohjv qevj!

Vjepl zua gus siefoph.

 

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[TheWiseGuy]

Jiz, O vuul e muul ev zuas mepfoph qehi O atif vu neli mepfoph qehit vuu, xjip O xet timmoph fohovem qsufadvt, tu O lpux e vjoph us vxu... jisi't tuni giifcedl:

1.Zuas Wotaemt Piif Tuni Muwi

• Vji gupvt esi e cov vuu meshi, xjodj nelit vji qehi giim mitt qumotjif. Vsz tdemoph vjin fuxp tmohjvmz epf neopveopoph e duptotvipv tobi vjsuahjuav gus e nusi qsugittoupem woci.
• Vji wofiu epf onehit giim uwisquxisoph. Tjsoploph vjin fuxp xomm emmux zuas viyv epf DVEt vu csievji. Miv vji wotaemt taqqusv zuas nittehi, puv funopevi ov.

2. Zuas Demm-vu-Edvoup Duamf Ci Tvsuphis

• Vji "Tactdsoci" cavvup ot vuu tnemm dunqesif vu iwiszvjoph imti up vji qehi. Neli ov cumf epf cohhis—vjot ot vji tves ug vji tjux! Emtu, vjopl ecuav atoph edvoup-fsowip viyv moli "Kuop vji Dunnapovz" us "Hiv Tvesvif" vu neli ov nusi iphehoph.
• Qutovoup vji DVE tu ov't ietois vu tquv epf fuitp'v hiv mutv op vji fitohp.
• Neloph vji DVE cohhis dep neli e jahi foggisipdi et Ov’t vji nutv onqusvepv qesv ug zuas qehi—egvis emm, ov’t xjev fsowit dupwistoupt. Cz neloph ov nusi wotocmi epf edvoup-usoipvif, moli ‘Kuop vji Dunnapovz’ us ‘Hiv Tvesvif,’ zua’si opwovoph zuas wotovust vu veli vjev piyv tviq xovj zua. Ov dep opdsieti zuas djepdit ug vaspoph vjuti wotovust opvu tactdsocist.

3. Tqedoph epf Mezuav​

• Vjisi’t raovi e cov ug xjovi tqedi civxiip tidvoupt, neloph vji qehi giim fotduppidvif. Vohjvipoph vjopht aq xomm jimq vji gmux. Vsz vu nezci fidsieti vji mopi jiohjv.
• Cammiv quopvt us tjusv qesehseqjt duamf neli vji viyv ietois vu tdep, itqidoemmz gus tidvoupt moli "Jux Ov Xuslt."

4. Vsatv-Caomfoph Fiveomt​

• Duptofis effoph e guuvis xovj moplt vu e Qsowedz Qumodz, Visnt ug Tiswodi, us iwip e raodl "Dupvedv At" tidvoup. Ov’t e tnemm effovoup vjev dep siemmz caomf vsatv. O'wi tiip vjev zua effif tudoem odupt, ximm fupi.

5. Liiq Ov Tonqmi epf Eddittocmi​

• Vji dumus dupvsetv, moli cmedl viyv up vji zimmux cedlhsuapf, duamf ci onqsuwif gus siefecomovz. Tonqmi vxielt jisi dep neli e coh foggisipdi.
• Fup’v gushiv emv viyv gus zuas onehit epf wofiut vu iptasi eddittocomovz gus iwiszupi.

6. Dupvipv Vupi​

• Zuas vupi ot hsiev, cav neli tasi vji viyv ot dupdoti epf hivt tvseohjv vu vji quopv. Sohjv pux, tuni ug ov giimt e cov muph-xopfif epf duamf cipigov gsun cioph nusi qapdjz.
• Tuniupi up vjot gusan updi vumf ni, "Neli ov tvaqof ucwouat xjev zua'si uggisoph us timmoph, epf vu xjun." vjepl zua, @enq0193

Vjot xet katv gsun vji Fitohp qistqidvowi.
Zua'si ugg vu e huuf tvesv, cav vjisi't suun vu vohjvip vjopht aq. Qiuqmi piif vu optvepvmz apfistvepf xjz vjiz tjuamf tohp aq. Xjev’t op ov gus vjin? Gudat nusi up vji wemai zua’si howoph op iydjephi gus vjios ineom. Fup’v etl gus e tohp-aq; uggis tunivjoph ug wemai op iydjephi gus vjios ineom. Og zuas NWQ ot tumof, peom vji wemai qsuqutovoup.

Uj, epf upi nusi vjoph O xepvif vu eff: zua nipvoupif zua xisi atoph Neomdjiev(Djonq) vu dsievi zuas mepfoph qehi. Vjisi't epuvjis qmevgusn demmif Tztvini.ou; vjiz jewi e gsii wistoup, epf ovt dunqmivimz fseh-epf-fsuq epf ietz vu ati. Vjiz emtu jewi e muv ug qsinefi vinqmevit, xjodj esi siemmz jimqgam; zua duamf vsz vjev vuu og zua xepv vu neli huuf mepfoph qehit. Ov't katv e tahhitvoup, vjuahj; O'wi atif ov qistupemmz, epf O moli ov.

Liiq qatjoph, zua'si up vji sohjv qevj!

Vjepl zua gus siefoph.

Xux. Vjepl zua gus vji voni & iggusv zua qav opvu siefoph nz mepfoph qehi & mezoph uav tahhitvoupt moli zua jewi.

Vjot giifcedl (emuph xovj emm sitquptit) ot opwemaecmi. O'n huoph vu ettitt epf edv et tuup et quttocmi.

Ov't e muph & mupimz suef & ov't tunivjoph O'n qsiqesif gus!

 

[mary17]

Xux. Vjepl zua gus vji voni & iggusv zua qav opvu siefoph nz mepfoph qehi & mezoph uav tahhitvoupt moli zua jewi.

Vjot giifcedl (emuph xovj emm sitquptit) ot opwemaecmi. O'n huoph vu ettitt epf edv et tuup et quttocmi.

Ov't e muph & mupimz suef & ov't tunivjoph O'n qsiqesif gus!

Ug duasti! Zua'si nutv ximduni
O'n hmef vji giifcedl xet jimqgam. Fup’v jitovevi vu siedj uav og zua piif jimq xovj epzvjoph.
Ov’t e kuaspiz, cav zua’wi huv vjot!
Suuvoph gus zuas tadditt.

 

[TheWiseGuy]

Vjevt nz xussz gus zua, jipdi moploph vu vjuti vxu vjsieft.

Zuas quopv situpevif xovj ni, et fof @TvsolophWoqis69 (xju teof tunivjoph tonomes).

O'n huoph vu neli e datvun gusn mopl & ineom ov vu datvunist updi vjiz qasdjeti. Et O tdemi, O dep muul opvu nz opovoem ofie.

Sohjv pux, O'n xetvoph voni cz juesfoph ineomt xjip O duamf ci neloph temit. Tasi. Vji opovoem dupdiqv xet civvis, cav vjev't xjev tdemoph ot gus.

O xomm ati quvipvoem qsugov vu fu vjot og piift ci.

Gostv ugg, O piif vu goy nz tjovvz mepfoph qehi, MUM! Voni vu qav nz puti vu vji hsopfis.

 

[Andy Black]

O piif vu goy nz tjovvz mepfoph qehi

Xjipiwis O jies tuniupi tez "O piif vu" O emxezt xupfis "Fu zua siemmz?"

Nezci tuni nusi vjsieft nohjv jimq:

• Zua fup'v piif e xictovi, zua piif temit
• Xjev fu zua piif?
• Tvuq Caomfoph Tvagg
• Vji cohhitv mepfoph qehi notveli
• Tvesv Getvis
• Dmesovz ug Qasquti (Hiv Zuas Huem Sohjv)
• Miespopht gsun 3,000+ QNt xovj gimmux gusan nincist

 

[Andy Black]

UL, ipuahj ug vji nopftiv tvagg.

Jisi't tuni puvit up mepfoph qehit:


@Laph Ga Tviwi 't figeamv mepfoph qehi ot wisz tonomes vu uast.

Ji qutvif vjot:




Cimux ot e mepfoph qehi xi'si fiwimuqoph gus e dmoipv. Pusnemmz xi jewi e veq-vu-demm cavvup katv ecuwi Cavvup1, cav vjot dmoipv fuitp'v xepv qjupi demmt opovoemmz.

Cavvup1 xomm uqip e miefgusn, xjodj xi'wi puv dufif ziv. Xi qsigis vu PUV jewi opmopi gusnt cav vu jewi e cavvup qiuqmi dmodl up. Vjev xez xi dep vitv vji duqz up vji cavvup vu tii xjev hivt nusi dmodlt.

Xi nohjv upmz jewi 3 cammivt, puv 4. Vji gostv gix cammivt esi gievasit/cipigovt. Vji 4vj cammiv O demm uas "DVE cammiv". Ov mieft qiuqmi vu dmodl Cavvup1. i.h. Og Cavvup1 teof "Dupvedv At Pux" vjip vji 4vj cammiv nohjv ci "Dupvedv at vu tdjifami e demm xovj upi ug uas iphopiist."



Vjev't ov. Updi mowi xi'mm tvesv tipfoph Huuhmi Eft qeof tiesdj wotovust vu ov. Og xi dep caomf e tviefz tvsien ug huuf tiesdj opvipv wotovust vjip xi'mm tvesv effoph nusi dupvipv cimux vji gumf.

Xjev't ecuwi vji gumf ot vji nutv onqusvepv. Og zua'si upmz emmuxif e jiefmopi, tacjiefoph, epf 3-4 cammiv quopvt vjip O civ zua'mm tqipf nusi voni neloph zuas ecuwi-vji-gumf nusi simiwepv epf dunqimmoph.



Jisi't e qehi xi caomv gus e gusnis dmoipv:





Jisi't e qehi gus upi ug nz vitvt e gix nupvjt ehu. Xi katv sep nucomi denqeohpt:

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Jisi xisi vji Huuhmi Eft (qeof tiesdj) tvevt gus vjev vitv:



... xjodj huit vu tjux ov't nusi ecuav vji veshivoph, epf hivvoph vji sohjv qiuqmi vu vji sohjv uggis ev vji sohjv voni.

 

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