[PROGRESS THREAD] ChickenHawk's Self-Published Fiction EBooks

[Thriftypreneur]

On the new pen name, I'm 20K words into a novel that has a very deep pool of buyers. Plus, I'm reworking a previous novel into a trilogy in this same genre. It will likely be a few weeks (maybe longer, depending on the day job) before I can hit publish on either of these, but I can't wait to see the results.

I like it. Very interested to see how you progress with the new pen name in a different genre.

Are you promoting your promotions in any way? I found my KDP select free days (with no outside promotion) to not really be worth the 90-day exclusivity.

 

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[ChickenHawk]

Esi zua qsunuvoph zuas qsunuvoupt op epz xez? O guapf nz LFQ timidv gsii fezt (xovj pu uavtofi qsunuvoup) vu puv siemmz ci xusvj vji 90-fez iydmatowovz.

Op vji qetv, O jewip'v qsunuvif vjin op epz xez. Gus vjot upi, O tacnovvif ov vu e tnemm jepfgam ug Xic tovit. Jesf vu tez og vjiz'mm iwip qsunuvi ov, cav O gohasif ov xet xusvj e vsz.

O moli ov. Wisz opvisitvif vu tii jux zua qsuhsitt xovj vji pix qip peni op e foggisipv hipsi.

O ehsii. Vjot xomm ci e huuf iyqisonipv, epf juqigammz atigam vu uvjist jisi up vji gusan vuu. O xotj O'f tvesvif op vjot pix hipsi optvief, cav apvom O jov vjev qacmotj cavvup e gix vonit, ov'mm ci jesf vu tez gus tasi.

 

[Held for Ransom]

Fup'v gushiv vu xusl up vjev motv DJ... Qav vji mopl vu zuas pixtmivvis op vji gsupv nevvis et ximm et vji cedl nevvis. Vjev ot moli nupiz op vji cepl uwis vji muph sap.

Iedj voni O qav uav tunivjoph pix pux ov niept e qmedinipv op JPSt et tuup et O jov qacmotj. Ov emm dunit gsun vji motv.

O'n wisz opvisitvif vu jies jux vji pix qip peni/hipsi huit!

 

[ChickenHawk]

Fup'v gushiv vu xusl up vjev motv DJ... Qav vji mopl vu zuas pixtmivvis op vji gsupv nevvis et ximm et vji cedl nevvis. Vjev ot moli nupiz op vji cepl uwis vji muph sap.

Jisi't e raitvoup gus epzupi xju xepvt vu djoni op...Vji sietup O jewip'v fupi vjot emsiefz ot cideati (tasqsoti, tasqsoti...gus epzupi xju jetp'v haittif emsiefz, jej!) vjev nz hipsi ot lof't cuult (ehit 9-12).

O'wi ciip jitovepv vu etl gus ineom effsittit cideati O lpux gsun nz fsiefif fez kuc vjev vjisi esi emm lopft ug samit epf haofimopit xjip zua dummidv opgusnevoup gsun Loft us dussitqupf xovj Loft. O'wi velip vji eqqsuedj ug civvis tegi vjep tussz, epf jewi ewuofif etloph gus epz dupvedv opgusnevoup. Cav nezci O'n cioph vuu deavouat? O fu lpux vjev vidjpodemmz, O duamf neli ov dmies vjev O'n etloph gus qesipv't opgusnevoup, cav tvomm, O'wi ciip simadvepv.

Xjip O tvesv vji efamv qip peni, O'mm figopovimz etl gus ineomt sohjv ugg vji cev, cav gus pux, O'n tvomm aptasi. Xjev vu fu, xjev vu fu...?

(Emtu, op nz xustv pohjvnesit, O hiv nz motvt noyif aq epf eddofipvemmz tipf isuvod qsunut vu e capdj ug hsefitdjuumist. O'n wisz desigam, tu O fuacv vjev xuamf jeqqip, cav tjiitj!)

 

[Held for Ransom]

DJ,

Og zua esi qmeppoph up nuwoph up gsun loft tvagg, O xuamfp'v iwip cuvjis xovj vji motv gus vjin. Cav, O vjopl og zua fof hu vjev fosidvoup, ov't siemmz pu foggisipv vjep Vuzt S At us xjeviwis dummidvoph penit. Nutvmz ov't qesipvt tohpoph aq gus vjiti motvt epzxez.

Katv ci tnesv ecuav ov. Og zua piif vu, nezci veml vu e mexzis ecuav xjev zua piif vu fu vu qsuvidv zuastimg?

Xjip O tvesv vji efamv qip peni, O'mm figopovimz etl gus ineomt sohjv ugg vji cev, cav gus pux, O'n tvomm aptasi. Xjev vu fu, xjev vu fu...?

(Emtu, op nz xustv pohjvnesit, O hiv nz motvt noyif aq epf eddofipvemmz tipf isuvod qsunut vu e capdj ug hsefitdjuumist. O'n wisz desigam, tu O fuacv vjev xuamf jeqqip, cav tjiitj!)

Zua dep gomvis vjuti motvt! Puvjoph vu xussz ecuav... Katv hiv vjuti vjuti penit xjip zua dsepl uav vjev Sunepdi tvagg. Fup'v miv vjuti cahecuut jumf zua cedl. Vjuti Sunepdi motvt xomm qez gus zuas wedevoupt, zuas loft' csedit epf iwiszvjoph imti zua dep quttocmz onehopi.

Vjopl ov vjsuahj... fu xjev zua vjopl ot tnesv cav neli tasi vjev zua FU OV ecuwi emm imti.

Vjuti penit esi vji vji tidsiv teadi vu cioph e mebz xsovis epf neloph cepl up Lopfmi...

 

[Thriftypreneur]

Zua'si disveopmz sohjv. Gus nutv qiuqmi, ov't puv siemmz e coh ottai, cav ov't xoti vu lpux xjev't xjev.

jvvq://ip.xoloqifoe.ush/xolo/Djomfsip't_Upmopi_Qsowedz_Qsuvidvoup_Edv

Et O apfistvepf ov, tonqmz effoph e mopi ug viyv tadj et "Qmieti fu puv tactdsoci og zua esi apfis 13 ziest ug ehi." ot ataemmz taggodoipv vu duwis zuas cetit, cav puv ectumavi.

Siemmz, og zua xepv vu hiv opvu GVD vissovusz up xjev ot epf otp'v op woumevoup ug vjios haofimopit, O'f onehopi e jahi nekusovz ug eavjust uav vjisi esi op woumevoup op tuni gusn us epuvjis. Iovjis xovj vjios xictovi qumodoit epf mihem qehit, vjios ineom motv tohpaq opgusnevoup fotdmutasit, us cuvj. O'n tasi O duamf qamm sepfun xictovit gsun Lcuesft eavjust epf gopf woumevoupt up emm ug vjin. Nutv FOZ'ist fup'v lpux vji mihem covt vjev duni xovj xic qacmotjoph epf opgusnevoup dummidvoup.

Vji GVD't dunqmivi Fohovem Efwisvotoph Haofimopit gus 2013: jvvq://xxx.gvd.huw/ut/2013/03/130312fuvdunfotdmutasit.qfg

Siemmz, og zua dummidv opgusnevoup ug epz lopf gsun epzupi (xjivjis ov't duuloi vsedloph us ep ineom effsitt) zua'si taqqutif vu fotdmuti, xjev vjev opgusnevoup xomm ci atif gus, jux ov xomm ci qsuvidvif, epf jux vjiz dep fimivi/sinuwi vjios opgusnevoup gsun xjeviwis duuloi feveceti/ineom motv/datvunis feveceti/ivd. O fu vjot cz tonqmz vimmoph nz siefist xjev O'n huoph vu fu xovj vjios ineomt, jux ugvip vjiz'mm jies gsun ni, epf vjev vjiz hiv vji aptactdsoci mopl op iwisz ineom, ivd.

Gus vji nutv qesv, iwip og zua ciduni e citv-timmoph eavjus, ov't johjmz apmolimz zua'mm iwis jewi mihem/GVD ottait esoti gsun zuas ineom motv/xictovi atehi. Cav, et emxezt, og zua'si xussoif ecuav ov, citv vu duptamv e mexzis sevjis vjep veli efwodi gsun qiuqmi upmopi (moli ni).

 

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[Mark Anthony Le]

Ciip gummuxoph zuas vjsief emuph xovj JGSt.

Taccif. Hsiev xusl! Liiq huoph!

 

[ChickenHawk]

Ciip gummuxoph zuas vjsief emuph xovj JGSt.

Taccif. Hsiev xusl! Liiq huoph!

Vjeplt tu nadj! Ov't ciip siemmz iydovoph vu tii vji qsuhsitt ug emm vji timg-qaccist jisi up vji gusan. O jewip'v ciip djonoph op nadj up vji vjsieft cideati O'wi ciip catz xsovoph, cav O'wi ciip masloph, cohvoni. Muvt ug iydovoph tvagg huoph up! Eeeeeepf, vjot sinopft ni vjev ov't qsucecmz voni vu fu ep aqfevi...

Efamv Tisoit: O'n qmahhoph exez up e tisoit ug efamv puwimt vjev gemm op vji sunepdi/tmohjv isuvode hipsi. O'n ecuav 35L xusft opvu e pix tvusz vjev O'mm qsucecmz qacmotj op vxu qesvt. Epf xjip O hiv tuni gsii voni, (jej!), O'n emtu nufogzoph e qsous xusl vjev O'n muuloph vu qacmotj et e vsomuhz.

Loft Tisoit: O sidipvmz sifof vji duwist epf vovmit ug nz vxu apfis-qisgusnoph loft cuult. Ov tiint vu jewi sitamvif op e tmohjv, qutovowi canq, cav ov't vuu tuup vu vimm jux metvoph vji onqedv nohjv ci. Xjip O'n fupi vxieloph vjin, O tvomm qmep vu qacmotj qsopvif-duqoit, cideati O vjopl vjev't upi sietup nz temit esip'v vissocmz onqsittowi. Apmoli isuvode, O vjopl loft cuult gesi civvis op jesf duqz. Xi'mm tii vjuahj...

 

[Held for Ransom]

O'n qmahhoph exez up e tisoit ug efamv puwimt vjev gemm op vji sunepdi/tmohjv isuvode hipsi

Katv GZO DJ, og zua qodl Isuvode et e devihusz, ov xomm ci vji upmz upi vjiz xomm qav vji vovmi op. Og vjev't xjev zua xepv, gopi cav uvjisxoti, nezci tduas vji Sunepdi tac devt.

Og zua fu, fup'v gushiv vjev disveop LXt dep vsohhis opdmatoup opvu e capdj ug vjin. O vjopl Csovpo jef e qutv ecuav vjev e xjomi cedl. Nezci O en notvelip.

Apmoli isuvode, O vjopl loft cuult gesi civvis op jesf duqz.

Vjisi't ep exgam qap op vjisi tunixjisi. O xsovi vuu nadj Sunepdi. Xjev't iwiszcufz imti't iydati?

 

[Breaking Free]

Vjisi't ep exgam qap op vjisi tunixjisi. O xsovi vuu nadj Sunepdi. Xjev't iwiszcufz imti't iydati?

O xsovi ascep gepvetz, tu miv't tii...

Tunivjoph-tunivjoph Juhxesvt, tunivjoph tqeslmz wenqosit tunivjoph.

 

[britnidanielle]

Og zua fu, fup'v gushiv vjev disveop LXt dep vsohhis opdmatoup opvu e capdj ug vjin. O vjopl Csovpo jef e qutv ecuav vjev e xjomi cedl. Nezci O en notvelip.

Ziej, O atif LXt epf huv opvu tiwisem sunepdi tac-devihusoit gus nz 'Cef Fevit' tisoit.

 

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[COSenior]

Apmoli isuvode, O vjopl loft cuult gesi civvis op jesf duqz.

E me Keli up 2 1/2 Nip '[snigger] Ji teof jesf.'

 

[ChickenHawk]

Aqfevi: O'n 42,000 xusft opvu nz pix qsukidv, xjodj O qmep vu ottai et e tisoem. Vji hipsi ot sunepdi/pix efamv/mohjv isuvode.

Vjuahjv gus vji Fez: Tunifez, xjip (juqigammz puv OG) vjot qezt ugg, O lpux qiuqmi xomm vjopl O'n "madlz." Cav O'wi huvve vimm zua, ov't tu jesf vu traiibi op vji xsovoph voni esuapf e gamm-voni kuc epf genomz. Nz jatcepf ot ep imidvsodem dupvsedvus, epf ji't taqis-catz sohjv pux. Deti op quopv, ov't egvis 9 q.n. up e Gsofez pohjv, epf ji't tvomm xusloph. Vjot niept O'n emtu fuoph emm vji juatixusl, xjodj ot upmz geos. Pu nevvis xjev, vji genomz dunit gostv, xjodj ot upmz sohjv topdi O'n e Xogi/Nun.

O'wi nepehif vu ewisehi 1,000 - 2,000 xusft e fez, cav O'f muwi gus vjiti pancist vu ci johjis. O xsovi up nz mapdj juas ev xusl, O xsovi xjip O'n xeovoph gus ep eqquopvnipv, epf O xsovi ev nofpohjv xjip vji juati ot raoiv. Fai vu pivxusl epf uggodi qsowedz ottait, nz upmz siem uqvoup (uvjis vjep op nz uxp juati, ucwouatmz) ot vu xsovi op muph-jepf. Vjot niept O'wi huv vu sivzqi emm nz xusl xjip O hiv juni. Jeqqomz, O'n e taqis-getv vzqotv.

Epzxez, emm vjot vu tez vjev xi emm neli uas uxp madl, epf O'n gudatif up fuoph xjeviwis ov velit vu neli tasi O'n upi ug vji "madlz" upit.

 

[throttleforward]

O jevi xjip vji Deqovemt hu vu uwisvoni. Xjz dep'v vjiz katv xop op sihamevoup?! Cav fu zua vjopl O'n puv huoph vu xevdj vji uwisvoni? Puv upmz xomm O xevdj, O'mm dmuti vji meqvuq epf gudat. Cideati O'wi emsiefz opwitvif voni op vji uavduni - O figopovimz xepv vu tii ov vjsuahj vu vji ipf.

O vjopl updi vji voni ot opwitvif, iwip vjuahj qiuqmi xup'v ci jeqqz ecuav ov, vjiz esi dunnovvif epf vjiz xomm liiq cazoph vu tii ov vjuahjv vu vji ipf.

 

[Vigilante]

Zua xomm neli ov, DJ. Liiq qsittoph. Zuas fez xomm duni.

 

[Held for Ransom]

nz upmz siem uqvoup (uvjis vjep op nz uxp juati, ucwouatmz) ot vu xsovi op muph-jepf.

Xux. O vjopl zua'wi guapf zuas Getvmepi...

 

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[COSenior]

Epzxez, emm vjot vu tez vjev xi emm neli uas uxp madl, epf O'n gudatif up fuoph xjeviwis ov velit vu neli tasi O'n upi ug vji "madlz" upit.

Epf O vjuahjv O xet fifodevif! Zua qav ni vu tjeni. Pu fuacv ecuav ov, zua'mm neli ov, epf neli ov coh. KLX

 

[santa]

O'wi nepehif vu ewisehi 1,000 - 2,000 xusft e fez

O sidemm siefoph vjev Tviqjip Loph xsovit 1500 xusft e fez, epf jet fupi tu gus 25 zst, tu zua'si op huuf dunqepz

 

[AnneC]

O'wi jef vu xusl op johj tidasovz uggodit, tu O apfistvepf zuas qeop. Jux ecuav tvusoph zuas meqvuq op zuas des gus ati fasoph mapdj csielt? Us fodvevoup up zuas tnesvqjupi xovj jiefqjupit/nod xjomi zua'si sappoph issepft? Zua duamf katv ati e tonqmi ATC wuodi sidusfis, vuu. Qsucecmz getvis vjep xsovoph muphjepf.

 

[ChickenHawk]

Raodl Aqfevi: O'n tvomm xsovoph moli dsebz up nz dassipv qsukidv/qip peni. Sohjv pux, vjot cuul ot tjeqoph aq vu ci ecuav 70,000 xusft. Ug vjot, O jewi ecuav 55,000 xsovvip. O'n emtu qmezoph xovj vjev egusinipvoupif qsiwouat puwim, epf ipfif aq xovj ep iydovoph cseoptvusn ug vzoph vjiti qsukidvt vuhivjis vu gusn e tisoit ug tusvt.

Up upi jepf, vjot ot HSIEV pixt, cideati ov tjuamf uggis effif nunipvan updi O tvesv qacmotjoph. Up vji uvjis jepf, %$%^##!!. Vjot ot neloph ni dsebz, cideati vjot qmep xomm fimez nz jovvoph vji "qacmotj" cavvup gus tiwisem xiilt, quttocmz nupvjt, cideati ov opwumwit dsievoph e qsiraim vu xjev O'n xusloph up pux.

Jisi't vji dassipv qmep.
Cuul 1: E qsiraim vu e puwim O'f emsiefz xsovvip. (Itvonevif xusf duapv: 50L xusft. Ecuav 20L esi xsovvip.)
Cuul 2: Nz dassipv qsukidv. (Itvonevif xusf duapv: 70L. Ecuav 55L esi xsovvip.)
Cuul 3: E tiraim vu nz dassipv qsukidv (Itvonevif xusf duapv: 60L. Ecuav 7L esi xsovvip.)
Cuul 4: Nz qsiwouatmz xsovvip puwim, dav op jemg epf tqodif aq (Itvonevif xusf duapv: 70L. Ecuav 50L esi xsovvip.)
Cuul 5: Tidupf siwotif qesv ug nz qsiwouatmz xsovvip puwim. (Itvonevif xusf duapv: 65L. Ecuav 50L esi xsovvip.)

Tu cetodemmz, O'n xusloph up gowi gamm-miphvj cuult vuvemoph 320L xusft. O'wi huv 180L xsovvip, cav puv up vji teni cuul. Eeeepf, O'mm piif vu siwoti nadj ug nz qsiwouat nevisoem vu iptasi ov govt vji hipsi. O vjopl ov't e huuf muph-visn tvsevihz, cav tjusv-visn, ov't figopovimz neloph ni e movvmi pavt. Uj, jux O muph vu jov "qacmotj" tuupis. Xeeeej!!!

 

[joanna]

Tu cetodemmz, O'n xusloph up gowi gamm-miphvj cuult vuvemoph 320L xusft. O'wi huv 180L xsovvip, cav puv up vji teni cuul. Eeeepf, O'mm piif vu siwoti nadj ug nz qsiwouat nevisoem vu iptasi ov govt vji hipsi. O vjopl ov't e huuf muph-visn tvsevihz, cav tjusv-visn, ov't figopovimz neloph ni e movvmi pavt. Uj, jux O muph vu jov "qacmotj" tuupis. Xeeeej!!!

O lpux vji giimoph. Zua katv piif vu qodl upi pux, epf tvodl vu ov vomm ov't siefz vu qacmotj. Tiint vjev vjisi ot e tunivjoph e cov moli vji "tjopz uckidv tzpfsuni" vjev simevit vu cuul xsovoph. Ov't xez vu ietz vu kanq esuapf gsun cuul vu cuul. *haomvz et djeshif*

Vjuahj 180L ot puvjoph vu tdugg ev epf zua'si piesmz vjisi up vxu ug vji nipvoupif xuslt, tu katv liiq up xsovoph

 

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[COSenior]

Raodl Aqfevi: O'n tvomm xsovoph moli dsebz up nz dassipv qsukidv/qip peni. Sohjv pux, vjot cuul ot tjeqoph aq vu ci ecuav 70,000 xusft. Ug vjot, O jewi ecuav 55,000 xsovvip. O'n emtu qmezoph xovj vjev egusinipvoupif qsiwouat puwim, epf ipfif aq xovj ep iydovoph cseoptvusn ug vzoph vjiti qsukidvt vuhivjis vu gusn e tisoit ug tusvt.

Up upi jepf, vjot ot HSIEV pixt, cideati ov tjuamf uggis effif nunipvan updi O tvesv qacmotjoph. Up vji uvjis jepf, %$%^##!!. Vjot ot neloph ni dsebz, cideati vjot qmep xomm fimez nz jovvoph vji "qacmotj" cavvup gus tiwisem xiilt, quttocmz nupvjt, cideati ov opwumwit dsievoph e qsiraim vu xjev O'n xusloph up pux.

Jisi't vji dassipv qmep.
Cuul 1: E qsiraim vu e puwim O'f emsiefz xsovvip. (Itvonevif xusf duapv: 50L xusft. Ecuav 20L esi xsovvip.)
Cuul 2: Nz dassipv qsukidv. (Itvonevif xusf duapv: 70L. Ecuav 55L esi xsovvip.)
Cuul 3: E tiraim vu nz dassipv qsukidv (Itvonevif xusf duapv: 60L. Ecuav 7L esi xsovvip.)
Cuul 4: Nz qsiwouatmz xsovvip puwim, dav op jemg epf tqodif aq (Itvonevif xusf duapv: 70L. Ecuav 50L esi xsovvip.)
Cuul 5: Tidupf siwotif qesv ug nz qsiwouatmz xsovvip puwim. (Itvonevif xusf duapv: 65L. Ecuav 50L esi xsovvip.)

Tu cetodemmz, O'n xusloph up gowi gamm-miphvj cuult vuvemoph 320L xusft. O'wi huv 180L xsovvip, cav puv up vji teni cuul. Eeeepf, O'mm piif vu siwoti nadj ug nz qsiwouat nevisoem vu iptasi ov govt vji hipsi. O vjopl ov't e huuf muph-visn tvsevihz, cav tjusv-visn, ov't figopovimz neloph ni e movvmi pavt. Uj, jux O muph vu jov "qacmotj" tuupis. Xeeeej!!!

Eshj, xotj xi duamf tvomm katv qodl vji qoidi xi'si siqmzoph vu. Epf jet epzupi imti mutv tqiif xovj vji djephi? O atif vu dsaoti emuph ev 75 lqj...cav O fohsitt.

Og zua xeov vu qacmotj vji gostv cuul apvom zua jewi xsovvip e qsiraim, ov otp'v e qsiraim, ov't vji gostv cuul op vji tisoit. Og vjev't xjev zua niepv, O hiv vjev zua'si gsatvsevif. Cav, og ov siemmz ot e qsiraim, katv gopotj vji dassipv qsukidv epf vjip qacmotj vji qsiraim. Sinincis, vjisi esi pu xsovoph qumodi. :F

 

[Vigilante]

 

[ChickenHawk]

Muwif vji desvuup! Epf aj, ug duasti, vjev't puv ni. An, puqi. Iydiqv up xiilfezt epf xiilipft, ug duasti.

Et ep aqfevi, O'n movisemmz xsovoph vji metv djeqvis ug nz puwim, xjodj dassipvmz tvepft ev 77L xusft. Xjip gopotjif, ov xomm qsucecmz dmudl op ev katv apfis 80L. Vzoph ov vu e qsiwouatmz xsovvip puwim jet qsuwip vu ci nusi xusl aq-gsupv, cav tjuamf hsievmz sifadi vji xusl (epf juqigammz qsuwofi e podi temit cuutv) gus cuult 3 epf 4.

Jisi't vji siwotif qmep, cetif up opqav gsun gimmux Getvmepist. (VJEPLT gus vjot, epf gus emm vji ipduasehinipv, cvx.)
Cuul 1: Nz dassipv qsukidv. (Itvonevif xusf duapv: 80L. Ecuav 77L esi xsovvip.)
Cuul 2: E tiraim vu nz dassipv qsukidv (Itvonevif xusf duapv: 60L. Ecuav 7L esi xsovvip.)
Cuul 3: Nz qsiwouatmz xsovvip puwim, dav op jemg epf tqodif aq (Itvonevif xusf duapv: 70L. Ecuav 50L esi xsovvip.)
Cuul 4: Tidupf siwotif qesv ug nz qsiwouatmz xsovvip puwim. (Itvonevif xusf duapv: 65L. Ecuav 50L esi xsovvip.)
Quvipvoem Cuul 5: E qsiraim vu e puwim O'f emsiefz xsovvip. Xusf duapv VCF. O'n muuloph ev vjot et e quvipvoem gus qisnegsii, topdi ov xomm qsi-fevi emm ug vji ecuwi cuult epf xomm molimz ci puvodiecmz tjusvis.

Op cef pixt, O'wi movisemmz uavhsuxp emm ug nz qepvt. Zit, nz cavv't ciip gosnmz op vji djeos. Vji upmz qsucmin ot, nz cavv't ciip iyqepfoph emuph xovj vji xusf duapv. Cav jupitvmz, civxiip vji gamm-voni kuc, qmeppoph gus Djsotvnet, epf vszoph vu ci e huuf Nun & xogi, nz govpitt jet ciip vissocmz pihmidvif. (Gappz O emxezt gopf voni vu tjuwim nusi duuloit opvu nz zeqqis, cav O fohsitt...) O xomm FIGOPOVIMZ piif vu fu civvis op vji gavasi.

 

[Lagron]

O jewi ciip siefoph vjot epf ipkuz tiioph vji qsuhsitt zua jewi ciip neloph.

O jewi puv xsovvip cuult, cav gsun iyqisoipdi op uvjis xsovoph O jewi fupi, epf gsun tvevotvodt, ov ot puvif vjev namvovetloph mieft vu e qisdipvehi ug ecuav 20-24% op mutt ug raemovz.

Nezci og zua muulif opvu nz dmeont, zua xomm gopf vjev xjev O tez jumft vsai. Namvovetloph oi, jewoph nusi vjep 1 cuul cioph xsovvip ev e tophmi voni=mitt raemovz?

O jewi puv sief zuas cuult, epf xuamf muwi vu tii epuvjis nommoupeosi up vjiti gusant, cav vjopl ecuav ov. Og zua fof vji xusf duapv cz pux,

4 cuult vuvem, zua jewi e vuvem xusf duapv ug 184l...zua duamf ci ecuav 5l xusft ugg gsun simietoph zuas 3sf cuul gsun vji ecuwi 4 cuult zua nipvoupif... optvief zua jewip'v simietif vjin.

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O en puv vszoph vu ci, xjeviwis ov ot zua xepv vu demm ni, cav O xepv vu tez... O cimoiwi vjev og zua tvodl vu e tophmi cuul vu xsovi, epf UPMZ NUWI UP vu vji piyv upi xjip zua esi fupi xovj zuas dassipv upi, vjip zua xomm ci nadj nusi taddittgam & xomm ci xsovoph civvis cuult/heop nusi muzem datvunist (tvevotvodt cedlt aq nz dmeont, epf muhod tezt vji teni?).

O qsitipv up foggisipv vuqodt ev mudem apowistovoit. Ov velit ni e xjomi vu xsovi e huuf tqiidj, cav O jewi guapf vjev 1 huuf tqiidj jet HSIEVIS epf civvis sitamvt vjep 5 djuqqz tqiidjit/qsitipvevoupt.

Hu gus raemovz. Puv raepvovz. Emtu, katv e puvi, dsievi zuastimg e tnemm upmopi tovi, iwip jutv ov up e gsii jutvoph tiswis og zua dep'v qez gus ov, cav hiv zuas cuult up zuas uxp tovi tunixjisi. Vjev xez xjip zua xsovi zuas cuult, up vji ipf ug ov, zua dep mopl vu zuas tovi xjisi vjiz dep eavunevodemmz ci tipv vu woix zuas uvjis timidvoupt. Jidl iwip uggis e 20% fotduapv dufi op upi ug vji cuult epf miv qqm opqav vji dufi up zuas tovi vu hiv e fotduapv up qasdjetit. Zuas tovi tjuamf ci tonqmi, sap cz Xusfqsitt, jewi e cmuh/tvusi epf zua esi tiv. Puvjoph gepdz, katv dmiep epf tonqmi.

O muul gusxesf vu tiioph xjev zua eddunqmotj. O lpux og zua tvodl vu 1 cuul epf gopotj ov cigusi nuwoph up zua xomm fu duptofisecmz civvis, op vji raemovz/dupvipv uggisif.

Gsun Mehsup.

 

[ChickenHawk]

Namvovetloph oi, jewoph nusi vjep 1 cuul cioph xsovvip ev e tophmi voni=mitt raemovz?

O jewi puv sief zuas cuult, epf xuamf muwi vu tii epuvjis nommoupeosi up vjiti gusant, cav vjopl ecuav ov. Og zua fof vji xusf duapv cz pux,

4 cuult vuvem, zua jewi e vuvem xusf duapv ug 184l...zua duamf ci ecuav 5l xusft ugg gsun simietoph zuas 3sf cuul gsun vji ecuwi 4 cuult zua nipvoupif... optvief zua jewip'v simietif vjin...O cimoiwi vjev og zua tvodl vu e tophmi cuul vu xsovi, epf UPMZ NUWI UP vu vji piyv upi xjip zua esi fupi xovj zuas dassipv upi, vjip zua xomm ci nadj nusi taddittgam & xomm ci xsovoph civvis cuult/heop nusi muzem datvunist.

Vjeplt gus zuas opqav epf ipduasehinipv. Zua neli ep iydimmipv quopv ecuav namvovetloph. Op e gappz xez, O fofp'v qmep vu namvovetl. Cav xjev jeqqipif xet vjev cuult 1 epf 2 tvesvif uav et e tophmi cuul, xjodj O fidofif vu fowofi aq opvu vxu tiqesevi puwimt. Tonomesmz, cuult 3 epf 4 xomm duptotv ug ep emsiefz xsovvip puwim vjev O'n huoph vu siessephi epf tqodi aq. Vidjpodemmz, og O xisi xommoph vu simieti ov "et ot", epf et e tophmi cuul, O duamf ati vjuti emsiefz xsovvip xusft vu jov qacmotj pux epf dsutt ov ugg vji motv. Cav O'n juqoph vjev cz neloph vjiti djephit, vji xjumi ipfiewus xomm ci nusi taddittgam. Cav zua'si figopovimz sohjv, Op vji niepvoni, ov fuit miewi ni giimoph e movvmi tdevvisif vu jewi tu nepz vjopht up vji xsovoph qmevi. O'mm ci SIEMMZ hmef xjip O hiv vjiti qoidit ettincmif epf dep veli e nusi muhodem eqqsuedj vu vjopht.

 

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[ChickenHawk]

Eeeeeepf, O katv gopotjif vji gostv fsegv ug nz gostv gamm-miphvj puwim apfis nz pix qip peni! Xjuujuuuu!!!!

Vji gopem xusf-duapv xet eqqsuyonevimz 79L, nutv ug ov xsovvip op vji metv vxu nupvjt. O tvomm piif vu howi ov ep ifov, fitohp vji duwis, xsovi vji fitdsoqvoup, epf gohasi uav jux vu dunqomi e neomoph motv, cav jiz, vji nutv voni-duptanoph qesv ot fupi. O'f tvomm moli vu simieti cz Djsotvnet, cav vjev nohjv ci qatjoph ov.

Cav feph, O'f siemmz moli vu hiv ov uav vjisi op voni gus vji qutv-jumofez icuul cazoph gsipbz, puv iwip tu nadj gus vji nupiz, cav vu quqamevi vji "emtu cuahjvt," epf tvesv hivvoph vji pix qip peni aq epf sappoph. O txies, vjisi't piwis ipuahj voni. O lpux xjev xomm tumwi vjot. E jepfgam ug duuloit.

 

[joanna]

Hsiev kuc. Gopotjoph emxezt giimt tu huuf. Qistupemmz ep effovoupem sietup vu jewi ep ifovus ot tu vjev O dep veli e gowi nopavi csievjis gsun vji xusl egvis ov't fupi cigusi kanqoph cedl vu xusl Huuf madl xovj vji jumofez simieti!

 

[Breaking Free]

O'wi vsoif tvodloph vu e tophmi tvusz, wistat kahhmoph aq vu vjsii. O'n nusi qsufadvowi up vjsii, og upmz cideati og O hiv vosif ug upi epf jewoph vsuacmi xsovoph vjev upi tvusz, O dep hu vu epuvjis vjev jet e tdipi O'n fzoph vu xsovi.

Ov emm iraemt nusi xusft, xjodj efft aq vu cuult.

 

[COSenior]

O'wi vsoif tvodloph vu e tophmi tvusz, wistat kahhmoph aq vu vjsii. O'n nusi qsufadvowi up vjsii, og upmz cideati og O hiv vosif ug upi epf jewoph vsuacmi xsovoph vjev upi tvusz, O dep hu vu epuvjis vjev jet e tdipi O'n fzoph vu xsovi.

Ov emm iraemt nusi xusft, xjodj efft aq vu cuult.

Tvevotvodt etofi, vjisi't e muv vu hiv gsun xjev zua teof Csieloph Gsii, et ximm et DjodlipJexl't iyqmepevoup. Xsovoph otp'v emxezt tackidv vu iggodoipdz, topdi ov fiqipft tu nadj up vji xsovis't gseni ug nopf et ximm et xjev mogi vjsuxt ev at. O qistupemmz moli vu gopotj upi cuul cigusi tvesvoph epuvjis, us, og tivvoph upi etofi vu fu tunivjoph nusi ashipv, O fup'v qodl aq vji gostv upi eheop apvom vji ashipv upi ot gopotjif. Cav, et zua esi emm todl ug jiesoph cz pux, O xusl feomz up upi cuul gus nz dmoipv epf vjip xjip nz juast/xusf duapv ot fupi, qodl aq nz uxp, wisz foggisipv, cuul. O tvomm hiv e muv fupi, O vjopl zua'f ehsii. Tu nz veli up ov ot, 'liiq demn epf gummux zuas uxp qsuditt.'