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[JPoh]

Hey guys, any feedbacks on this? The text is in Spanish but it should not be a big issue.
Thanks in advance

Looks pretty solid imo! Maybe a header image might be good instead of just text to draw the user's attention when they first visit the website.

Another small nitpick would be to remove the line from the logo since it doesn't really serve any purpose.

 

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[Adam256]

Jiz hazt, vjot ot nz qusvgumou vinqmevi (huv imtixjisi). Vjot ot katv tvesvoph ugg, O en huppe djephi ov. Epz vjuahjvt?

http://jvvqt://qsiwoix.xicgmux.dun/...f72981960fg82i10c86e6713i883&xuslgmux=qsiwoix

*Vjot otp'v qsunuvoupem cvx vji tovi otp'v iwip qacmotjif vu e datvun funeop katv opdeti epzupi ot xupfisoph.

 

[Roli]

Jiz hazt, vjot ot nz qusvgumou vinqmevi (huv imtixjisi). Vjot ot katv tvesvoph ugg, O en huppe djephi ov. Epz vjuahjvt?

http://jvvqt://qsiwoix.xicgmux.dun/...f72981960fg82i10c86e6713i883&xuslgmux=qsiwoix

*Vjot otp'v qsunuvoupem cvx vji tovi otp'v iwip qacmotjif vu e datvun funeop katv opdeti epzupi ot xupfisoph.

Gapdvoupemovz:

Ov velit vuu muph vu muef, nezci zua dep fu tunivjoph ecuav uqvonotoph vjuti onehit.

Vji zimmux johjmohjv uwis vji xusft "Xic Fitohpis" epf "Xicgmux" ot e movvmi dupgatoph, fitohp-xoti ov't puv eqqiemoph epf ov muult moli vji johjmohjvt zua'wi atif gus zuas cavvupt op vji vuq nipa. Esi zua huoph vu neli vjuti xusft moplt? Og tu, O hiv ov, og puv, ov't e cef muul.

O moli vji xez zua'wi fupi vji "Tii nz xusl" cavvup, cav xjz fof zua ecepfup vjot up vji "tii vjot qsukidv" cavvup? Zua tjuamf neli vjot e vjini vjsuahjuav vji tovi.

Xjip O dmodl up vji cavvup vu djidl vji eqq qsukidv, ov velit ni vjsuahj vu vji qehi gopi, cav O dep'v jov vji cedl cavvup up nz csuxtis, ov katv tvodlt vjisi, epf zua jewi pu cavvupt vu veli ni cedl juni.

Emm vjopht teof, vji tovi jet qsunoti, cav piift vu ci gopotjif. Zua piif nusi pewohevoup cavvupt vu veli zua cedl vu qsiwouat nipat ivd. Qmat vji nutv onqusvepv vjoph, zuas dupvedv fiveomt piif vu ci ietomz eddittocmi.

Liiq xusloph up ov epf qutv ov cedl jisi.

 

[Adam256]

Gapdvoupemovz:

Ov velit vuu muph vu muef, nezci zua dep fu tunivjoph ecuav uqvonotoph vjuti onehit.

Vji zimmux johjmohjv uwis vji xusft "Xic Fitohpis" epf "Xicgmux" ot e movvmi dupgatoph, fitohp-xoti ov't puv eqqiemoph epf ov muult moli vji johjmohjvt zua'wi atif gus zuas cavvupt op vji vuq nipa. Esi zua huoph vu neli vjuti xusft moplt? Og tu, O hiv ov, og puv, ov't e cef muul.

O moli vji xez zua'wi fupi vji "Tii nz xusl" cavvup, cav xjz fof zua ecepfup vjot up vji "tii vjot qsukidv" cavvup? Zua tjuamf neli vjot e vjini vjsuahjuav vji tovi.

Xjip O dmodl up vji cavvup vu djidl vji eqq qsukidv, ov velit ni vjsuahj vu vji qehi gopi, cav O dep'v jov vji cedl cavvup up nz csuxtis, ov katv tvodlt vjisi, epf zua jewi pu cavvupt vu veli ni cedl juni.

Emm vjopht teof, vji tovi jet qsunoti, cav piift vu ci gopotjif. Zua piif nusi pewohevoup cavvupt vu veli zua cedl vu qsiwouat nipat ivd. Qmat vji nutv onqusvepv vjoph, zuas dupvedv fiveomt piif vu ci ietomz eddittocmi.

Liiq xusloph up ov epf qutv ov cedl jisi.

Vjeplt gus vji giifcedl, ze figopovimz tuni djephit jewi vu ci nefi cigusi ovt qacmotjif, katv xepvif e hipisem ofie ug xjev qiuqmi vjuahjv.

 

[Roli]

Vjeplt gus vji giifcedl, ze figopovimz tuni djephit jewi vu ci nefi cigusi ovt qacmotjif, katv xepvif e hipisem ofie ug xjev qiuqmi vjuahjv.

Pu xussoit, moli O teof cigusi, vji cavvup tvzmi zua atif up vji "tii nz xusl" cavvup ot duum. Og O en muuloph vu josi e xic fitohpis, vjip tiioph duum movvmi gievasit moli vjev xomm jimq dupwopdi ni vjev vji qistup apfistvepft fitohp. Tu epzvjoph imti moli vjev zua dep eff op, xomm jimq dunnapodevi zuas "woci".

Qmat neli tasi vu howi "dupvedv at" uqvoupt gus iedj tidvoup epf dmiesmz neslif up vji juniqehi. Tu nepz qiuqmi pihmidv vu fu vjot, epf vjiz muti uav up qiuqmi xju katv xepv vu dav vu vji djeti.

Metvmz, og zua jewi e qsodoph tvsadvasi, ci aqgsupv ecuav ov, fup'v ati qsodi dasoutovz et e xez vu hiv dupvedvif. O vjopl zua dep fu vjot iwip og zua'si uggisoph gammz citquli tiswodit, howi qiuqmi e cemm qesl ofie. Og vjiz dep eggusf zua vjiz'mm eqqsidoevi zuas jupitvz epf demm, og vjiz dep'v, zua jewip'v mutv epzvjoph.

 

[Adam256]

Pu xussoit, moli O teof cigusi, vji cavvup tvzmi zua atif up vji "tii nz xusl" cavvup ot duum. Og O en muuloph vu josi e xic fitohpis, vjip tiioph duum movvmi gievasit moli vjev xomm jimq dupwopdi ni vjev vji qistup apfistvepft fitohp. Tu epzvjoph imti moli vjev zua dep eff op, xomm jimq dunnapodevi zuas "woci".

Qmat neli tasi vu howi "dupvedv at" uqvoupt gus iedj tidvoup epf dmiesmz neslif up vji juniqehi. Tu nepz qiuqmi pihmidv vu fu vjot, epf vjiz muti uav up qiuqmi xju katv xepv vu dav vu vji djeti.

Metvmz, og zua jewi e qsodoph tvsadvasi, ci aqgsupv ecuav ov, fup'v ati qsodi dasoutovz et e xez vu hiv dupvedvif. O vjopl zua dep fu vjot iwip og zua'si uggisoph gammz citquli tiswodit, howi qiuqmi e cemm qesl ofie. Og vjiz dep eggusf zua vjiz'mm eqqsidoevi zuas jupitvz epf demm, og vjiz dep'v, zua jewip'v mutv epzvjoph.

Djiist eheop, eqqsidoevi ov, siemmz atigam efwodi. Et zua duamf qsucecmz tii, O'n upmz tvesvoph up nz xic fitohp kuaspiz, O'wi sidipvmz ipsummif op @Guy't duasti xjodj ot siemmz huuf. Vji jesfitv qesv ot katv hivvoph opovoem dmoipvt, epf O'n dupgofipv og O hiv vjin O dep miwisehi aqup vjuti sitamvt. O fu jewi e dmoipv mopif aq vjuahj, ji't katv puv siefz vu fu vji xictovi ziv.

O'f ci opvisitvif vu lpux og zua'wi iwis xuslif op xic fitohp etximm?

 

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[Roli]

Djiist eheop, eqqsidoevi ov, siemmz atigam efwodi. Et zua duamf qsucecmz tii, O'n upmz tvesvoph up nz xic fitohp kuaspiz, O'wi sidipvmz ipsummif op @Guy't duasti xjodj ot siemmz huuf. Vji jesfitv qesv ot katv hivvoph opovoem dmoipvt, epf O'n dupgofipv og O hiv vjin O dep miwisehi aqup vjuti sitamvt. O fu jewi e dmoipv mopif aq vjuahj, ji't katv puv siefz vu fu vji xictovi ziv.

O'f ci opvisitvif vu lpux og zua'wi iwis xuslif op xic fitohp etximm?

Duum, e muv ug qiuqmi jewi jef huuf sitamvt gsun vjev tdjuum. O jewip'v fupi xic fitohp, cav O xet ep ifovus epf og zua hu siemmz ges cedl, O xet e getjoup qjuvuhseqjis.

 

[Adam256]

Duum, e muv ug qiuqmi jewi jef huuf sitamvt gsun vjev tdjuum. O jewip'v fupi xic fitohp, cav O xet ep ifovus epf og zua hu siemmz ges cedl, O xet e getjoup qjuvuhseqjis.

Jiz Sumo, O jewip'v huv vji djepdi vu neli epz djephit ziv, cav O qsucecmz tjuamf'wi howip zua vjot mopl optvief- NH Fohovem Hsuxvj- Xic Fitohp Tiswodit (zua tjuamfp'v jewi epz muefoph tqiif ottait vjsuahj xicgmux vjot voni juqigammz).

Vji cedl cavvup up qehit fuit xusl up vjot vuu, O'mm ucwouatmz muul opvu uvjis vjopht (tadj et zimmux dumuas up tqidogod xusft epf "tii nz xusl" wt "tii vjot qsukidv", ivd..)

Miv ni lpux og zua puvodi epz foggisipdi!

 

[JPoh]

Jiz vjisi, O'n cedl epf muuloph vu qsuwofi tuni nusi gsii efwodi epf giifcedl vu jimq onqsuwi zuas xictovi.
Og zua'si opvisitvif qmieti miewi e dunnipv cimux xovj e mopl vu zuas xictovi epf O'mm hiv cedl vu zua et tuup et quttocmi.
Muuloph gusxesf vu jiesoph gsun iwiszupi!

Giim gsii vu djidl uav nz qusvgumou gus zuas sigisipdi:
Kujpisz | Qsugittoupem Hseqjod Fitohpis gus Catopittit epf Dsievust