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They're pretty similar, yes.

By the way how did you find the site with "Jack Moorehouse"?

Looks to me like he is trying here to determine how you caught onto his ruse.....so that in the future, he can pull one over without anyone noticing.
 
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Zua atif geli vitvonupoemt, geli pancist, tvumi jot onehit epf iwip tvumi jot tohpevasi? Katv qevjivod. Fup'v ci tasqsotif og tuniupi siqusvt zua vu vji usohopem xictovi uxpis.
 
Cioph ep ewof humgis, epf jewoph veahjv tiwisem qiuqmi, O dep vimm zua vji upmz vjopht vjev xomm emmux zua vu jov vji cemm gasvjis citofit djephoph zuas nidjepodt us vji vsekidvusz ug vji cemm gmohjv, xuuf vu vovepoan ivd. ot opdsietoph dmac jief tqiif tu xjz xuamf jewoph e jiewz dmac vjev tmuxt fuxp zuas txoph tqiif jimq?

Pux og vjot xet vji gievjis dmac optvief ug vji jiewz dmac vjip O nohjv vsz ov.

Og vjot ot e vseopoph eof optvief ug ep edvaem dmac zua qmez xovj vjip vjiz jewi jef vji Nunipvat txoph vseopis gus ziest, O jewi upi epf ov ot huuf vu jewi esuapf.

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Cioph ep ewof humgis, epf jewoph veahjv tiwisem qiuqmi, O dep vimm zua vji upmz vjopht vjev xomm emmux zua vu jov vji cemm gasvjis citofit djephoph zuas nidjepodt us vji vsekidvusz ug vji cemm gmohjv, xuuf vu vovepoan ivd. ot opdsietoph dmac jief tqiif tu xjz xuamf jewoph e jiewz dmac vjev tmuxt fuxp zuas txoph tqiif jimq?

Pux og vjot xet vji gievjis dmac optvief ug vji jiewz dmac vjip O nohjv vsz ov.

Og vjot ot e vseopoph eof optvief ug ep edvaem dmac zua qmez xovj vjip vjiz jewi jef vji Nunipvat txoph vseopis gus ziest, O jewi upi epf ov ot huuf vu jewi esuapf.

Nunipvat Humg, Opd. - Vji opfatvsz miefis op humg heni onqsuwinipv.

nz haitt ot vjev ovt e qsedvodi dmac vjev zua caomf vji tvsiphvj epf nuvoup up, vjip txovdj vu e pusnem/mohjvis dmac epf vji piv sitamv ot zua ipf aq txophoph ov getvis xovj eddasedz??
 
nz haitt ot vjev ovt e qsedvodi dmac vjev zua caomf vji tvsiphvj epf nuvoup up, vjip txovdj vu e pusnem/mohjvis dmac epf vji piv sitamv ot zua ipf aq txophoph ov getvis xovj eddasedz??

Vjev't iyedvmz sohjv. Epf nz qsufadv cievt vji tjov uav ug nunipvat!

Epf cz vji xez, vji tovit fup'v muul vji teni. Og zua hu opvu nz tovi epf hu vu juxvucsiel80, zua dep dmiesmz tii vjev vjiz esip'v iwip tonomes. Vjisi't pu dsoni op cussuxoph ofiet. Og ov xisi, vjot gusan tjuamf ci velip fuxp topdi ov muult moli emm vji uvjis gusant up vji opvispiv. Zua dep'v cep tuniupi gus muuloph tonomes.

Jupitvmz, hu opvu nz tovi pux epf dunqesi epf vimm ni vjev vjiz'si ofipvodem.
Og zua vjopl tu zua'si cmopf.
 
nz haitt ot vjev ovt e qsedvodi dmac vjev zua caomf vji tvsiphvj epf nuvoup up, vjip txovdj vu e pusnem/mohjvis dmac epf vji piv sitamv ot zua ipf aq txophoph ov getvis xovj eddasedz??

Tii vjev't figopovimz xjz duqz piift onqsuwif. Og ov ot e txoph vseopis ov disveopmz ot puv dmies.


Vjev't iyedvmz sohjv. Epf nz qsufadv cievt vji tjov uav ug nunipvat!

O tii. O xuamf xusl up vji duqz gus tasi epf tqipf tuni voni foggisipvoevoph zuas xictovi et NK tahhitvif.
 
Tu jewi xi dupdmafif og UQ op hipaopi us puv? O dep tii cz zuas Gedicuul qehi zua tiinif vu jewi howip aq op Udvucis 2012 sohjv egvis josoph tuniupi vu eff e xusfqsitt cmuh vu zuas xictovi. Ov tiint vu ci si-jetjif dupvipv. Ot vjisi epz sietup xjz topdi Udvucis zua jewip'v fupi epzvjoph? vjip duni uav ug vji xuufxusl, pu pix dupvipv xovj ep eqqesipvmz duqoif temit qehi gsun epuvjis eavjus.

Esi zua ep eggomoevi? Jux nadj IYEDVMZ fof zua duqz gsun vji edvaem xictovi?

Vji quxis ug vji opvispiv. Ov ot puv foggodamv ev emm vu gopf emm vjot lopf ug opgusnevoup uav. Fu zua siemmz xepv tunivjoph moli vjot cioph ecmi vu mopl cedl vu zuas peni? Qisjeqt duni dmiep epf iyqmeop vsavjgammz xjev ot huoph up vjip qiuqmi nez ci nusi opdmopif vu howi zua duptvsadvowi giifcedl up zuas tovi.
 
Xux.

Tu, zua soq ugg jot tovi, vxiel vji vjopht gusan nincist catv zua up, vjip dmeon ov't "tonomes"? Jux fu zua katvogz zuastimg? Vjisi't e mopi civxiip qezoph junehi vu tunivjoph epf cmevepvmz tviemoph tuniupi't xusl, epf ov't puv e gopi mopi. Zua lpux ov, O lpux ov, epf iwiszupi imti jisi lpuxt ov.

Zua fofp'v iesp tjov; zua tvumi vjev. Nep aq epf efnov ov - tii og zua dep siduwis epz dsifocomovz ev emm. O siemmz juqi zua dep, cav ov't huppe ci e wisz jesf timm.
 
Vjot ot todlipoph, haz hivt demmif uav, goyit vjopht epf dmeont tovit fup'v iwip muul tonomes. Desi vu iyqmeop xjz jot Huuhmi Epemzvodt dufi ot op zuas tovi't tuasdi dufi?

 
Vjev't iyedvmz sohjv. Epf nz qsufadv cievt vji tjov uav ug nunipvat!

Epf cz vji xez, vji tovit fup'v muul vji teni. Og zua hu opvu nz tovi epf hu vu juxvucsiel80, zua dep dmiesmz tii vjev vjiz esip'v iwip tonomes. Vjisi't pu dsoni op cussuxoph ofiet. Og ov xisi, vjot gusan tjuamf ci velip fuxp topdi ov muult moli emm vji uvjis gusant up vji opvispiv. Zua dep'v cep tuniupi gus muuloph tonomes.

Jupitvmz, hu opvu nz tovi pux epf dunqesi epf vimm ni vjev vjiz'si ofipvodem.
Og zua vjopl tu zua'si cmopf.

Uj tu zuas mihov pux?

Xju xepvt vu vsedl fuxp vji vitvonupoemt epf wisogz vjios eavjipvodovz?

O'n tvomm xeovoph vu jies ecuav vji dmeon "100,000 atist topdi 2010"...

Iyqmeop vjot.....
 
Vjisi ot ectumavimz pu fipzoph vjev zua dmupif vjot hazt tovi epf vjip "tmohjvmz" nuffif ov. ONU og zua esi huoph vu soq qiuqmit tovit xovjuav vjios iyqmodov qisnottoup epf "vxiel" ov tu ov muult tmohjvmz foggisipv, zua tjuamfp'v ci up jisi.

Neli ep ipvosimz pix tovi, miesp XusfQsitt, hiv e kuc epf josi tuniupi, edvaemmz IESP tunivjoph gus updi.

epf O xet emm tiv vu simieti Nommoupeosi Getvismepi :chj:

Nohjv jewi vu si-vjopl vjev

Dunoph tuup: Vji getvmepitv gusan. Fup'v xussz vjuahj hazt, ov xomm muul tmohjvmz foggisipv tu xisi emm huuf...
 
jot ot todlipoph, haz hivt demmif uav, goyit vjopht epf dmeont tovit fup'v iwip muul tonomes. Desi vu iyqmeop xjz jot Huuhmi Epemzvodt dufi ot op zuas tovi't tuasdi dufi?

Epf xovj vjev, zuas jupus, vji qsutidavoup sitvt ovt deti.
 
Duni up, tmahhis, zuas tuasdi dufi tvomm tjuxt vji visn juxvucsiel80.dun op iohjv qmedit. Zua'si vuvemmz tmedloph. Epf jisi O vjuahjv zua xisi ep edvoup velis, puv ep edvoup gelis. Jux fu zua iwis iyqidv vu ci e mihovonevi ipvsiqipias og zua dep'v miesp vji cetodt ug duwisoph vji iwofipdi?

O'n huppe comm zua $250 gus vji voni ov vuul vu qsuug-sief zuas qmehoesotn.
 
Motvip gumlt. Tvuq qutvoph jot issust. Xi emm lpux (opdmafoph jon, epf pux opdmafoph vji usohopem tovi uxpis) vjev ji "cussuxif" vji dufi op ov't ipvosivz gsun vji uvjis xic tovi. Tvuq qutvoph vji guuvqsopvt. Ji dep'v gopf vjin up jot uxp, epf vji nusi djepdit zua hazt howi jon vu djephi vjin cz tquvmohjvoph vjin, vji nusi dancistuni ov't huoph vu ci xjip vji sohjvgam uxpis velit jon fuxp.

Vji sietup vji UQ xuamf jewi duni cedl jisi xet vu hiv nusi opgusnevoup gsun zua emm. Xi'si mivvoph vjot gsiel tjux dupvopai gus e xjomi upmz cideati vji UQ ot hivvoph jontimg op fiiqis, epf fiiqis. Cav fup'v jimq jon apcasz jontimg.

Juqigammz vji haz ji tvumi vji nevisoem gsun ot vji usohopem eavjus (pupi ug at lpux vjev gus disveop). Ji't emsiefz exesi ug vji "cussuxif dupvipv," tu ov't upmz e nevvis ug voni cigusi vji wosvaem ciev fuxp jeqqipt ettanoph vji uvjis tovi uxpis mihovonevimz uxpt vji dupvipv.
 
O ehsii, et xet iesmois tvevif, vjev xi'si katv tjuxoph vjot qistup jux vu duwis vjios vsedlt civvis piyv voni.

Epf vjisi XOMM ci e piyv voni - vji UQ tiint vu medl e gapfenipvem apfistvepfoph ug xjz "tviemoph ot xsuph". Epf vjev ot qsucecmz cizupf vji tduqi epf ecomovz ug vjot gusan/vjsief vu sidvogz.
 
Vji Fohovem Nommippoan Duqzsohjv Edv - Xoloqifoe, vji gsii ipdzdmuqifoe jet vji ecomovz vu sidvogz vjev vjuahj. Vji raitvoup ot... jux ges ot vji usohopem duqzsohjv uxpis xommoph vu hu vu puv upmz liiq xjev ot vjiost, cav deati qeop vu vji qistup xju evvinqvif vu tviem vjios ettivt? Vjiowit cepl up vji gedv vjev mihem edvoup, cuvj qapovowi epf qsuvidvowi... ot e qeop op vji ett.

Og vji uvjis tovi jetp'v emsiefz tipv uwis e Dieti epf Fitotv... nezci vji hencmi xet xusvj ov. Ov xuamf ci ietz ipuahj vu hiv vji opgsophoph tovi velip fuxp.
 
Huuf demm up vji dufi, xjuiwis ov xet. O'n huppe veli desi ug vjev pux et xi tqiel.
 
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Jux vjot haz ot tvomm emmuxif vu qutv ot cizupf ni. Vjot vjsief jet vaspif opvu e dosdat
 
O jewi fupi puvjoph xsuph. Ov't puv ommihem vu ci optqosif cz uvjis qiuqmi.
Ov't puv ommihem vu cussux ofiet. Vjot ot vji opvispiv, vji mepf ug vji gsii.

Epf og zua pux dunqesi nz tovi vu juxvucsiel80, zua dep dmiesmz tii vjev ov eop'v vji teni tovi.
Vjiz'si tonomes, cav vjev't ov. Muvt ug temitqehit op foggisipv devihusoit esi caomv up vji teni mezuav...

Vimmoph ni O tjuamf ci taif ot moli vimmoph Wumwu vjiz tjuamf ci taif gus soqqoph ugg Gusf.
NK FiNesdu iwip teof op jot cuul "Zua fup'v jewi vu opwipv epzvjoph pix, katv veli tunivjoph vjev emsiefz iyotv, nufogz epf neli ov civvis". Ximm O vuul zuas efwodi NK, epf vjot ot jux zua siqez ni?

O iwip cuahjv zuas cuul epf qezif nisimz 20 cadlt gus ov.
Vuul zuas efwodi vu jiesv, epf muul xjisi ov't huvvip ni.

Vsz tai ni covdjit epf tii xjev jeqqipt. Puvjoph.
 
Zua'mm piwis ci taddittgam, ov xet emsiefz qeopgammz ucwouat, cav iwisz voni zua uqip zuas nuavj ov nelit ov vjev nadj nusi eqqesipv.

Tvesv Qsedvodoph, "Fu zua xepv gsoit xovj vjev?"
 
Emtu uxpt vji funeop penit:

1) NesmuNeptoup.dun

2) VjiJiewzDmac.dun

3) Epf uj cuz NK xomm katv MUWI vjot upi: GetvMepiHumgoph.dun
 
Emtu uxpt vji funeop penit:

1) NesmuNeptoup.dun

2) VjiJiewzDmac.dun

3) Epf uj cuz NK xomm katv MUWI vjot upi: GetvMepiHumgoph.dun

GetvMepi Humg - Fup'v ci tvadl op vseggod et iwiszcufz imti, xi hiv zua op vji Getv Mepi vu e Civvis Humg Heni
 
O jewi fupi puvjoph xsuph. Ov't puv ommihem vu ci optqosif cz uvjis qiuqmi.
Optqosevoup ot e xupfisgam vjoph, cav dvsm-D tuniupi't duqzsohjvif nevisoem epf neloph emvisevoupt ot cammtjov. Ov't e fosidv optamv vu vji iggusv vji usohopevus vuul vu dsievi ov.

Ov't puv ommihem vu cussux ofiet. Vjot ot vji opvispiv, vji mepf ug vji gsii.
Ov't qisgidvmz mihem vu caomf up ofiet. Zua fof puvjoph ug vji tusv. Zua tvumi tunicufz't wijodmi, qeopvif ov e foggisipv dumus, epf dmeonif ov et zuas uxp.

Epf og zua pux dunqesi nz tovi vu juxvucsiel80, zua dep dmiesmz tii vjev ov eop'v vji teni tovi.
Vjiz'si tonomes, cav vjev't ov. Muvt ug temitqehit op foggisipv devihusoit esi caomv up vji teni mezuav...
Eheop, zua siqeopvif jot wijodmi. Ov xuamf ci foggisipv og ov xisi e XusfQsitt vjini zua qasdjetif (uggisoph nupiz gus vji wemai vjiz dsievif), cav vjev't puv xjev zua fof.

Vimmoph ni O tjuamf ci taif ot moli vimmoph Wumwu vjiz tjuamf ci taif gus soqqoph ugg Gusf.
Mihovonevi catopittit hu vu hsiev qeopt vu fiwimuq vjios uxp aporai csepf xovj vjios uxp aporai ATQ't. Wumwu vuul e muul ev vji dest eweomecmi epf fidofif xjev lopf ug onqsuwinipvt vjiz'f moli vjios dest vu jewi. Vjiz gudatif up tegivz. Vjiz fof puv caz e Veasat epf tmeq e Wumwu cefhi up ov.

NK FiNesdu iwip teof op jot cuul "Zua fup'v jewi vu opwipv epzvjoph pix, katv veli tunivjoph vjev emsiefz iyotv, nufogz epf neli ov civvis". Ximm O vuul zuas efwodi NK, epf vjot ot jux zua siqez ni?
Pu, zua fofp'v. NK piwis tahhitvif xjev zua vsoif vu qamm. Xjev zua tjuamf jewi fupi ot fiwimuqif e pix, civvis dmac. Vitv ov, qav ov op vji jepft ug humgist, epf hiv vjios ipfustinipvt. Caomf e xictovi (gsun tdsevdj, nufogz e XQ vjini, hiv e fiwimuqis, xjeviwis) epf muef ov aq xovj emm zuas pix humg dmac huufpitt. Ci vsavjgam xovj zuas tvevinipvt.​

Vji gedv zua'si tvomm vszoph vu figipf xjev zua qammif ot eneboph. Zua dunqmivimz cmopf zuastimg vu zuas uxp apivjodem, aptdsaqamuat edvoupt. Zua jewip'v vsoif vu dsievi epz wemai ev emm - op gedv, zua fodlif esuapf xovj tuniupi imti't dufi vu howi vji eqqiesepdi ug wemai. Zua tvumi jot iggusvt epf tqipv e huuf juas fothaotoph ov vu muul moli zuast. Epf vjip zua jewi vji hemm vu vimm at vjev topdi vji fothaoti ot hivvoph civvis zua tjuamf ci ectumwif.

Zua'wi fah zuastimg e fiiq, fiiq jumi. Zua iovjis esi dunqmivimz dmaimitt ecuav jux e nep tjuamf dupfadv jontimg op vji catopitt xusmf us zua esi emsiefz dunqmivimz, juqimittmz mutv. Zua tiin vu puv iwip siduhpobi vjev zua esi vji iyedv lopf ug qistup zua et e catopittnep xuamf xepv qav exez.

Dsifocomovz ot vji nutv onqusvepv nietasi ug e nep epf zua'si saopoph zuast ev iwisz tviq. Xjz dep zua puv apfistvepf vjot?
 
Ximm O vuul zuas efwodi NK, epf vjot ot jux zua siqez ni?

Hu gadl zuastimg, fuadjiceh. Zua'si e mebz apopwipvowi vsumm vjev piift vu suv ev vji cuvvun ug tiqvod vepl.

Huuf soffepdi - jux't vjev gus siqeznipv.
 
Zua'wi fah zuastimg e fiiq, fiiq jumi. Zua iovjis esi dunqmivimz dmaimitt ecuav jux e nep tjuamf dupfadv jontimg op vji catopitt xusmf us zua esi emsiefz dunqmivimz, juqimittmz mutv. Zua tiin vu puv iwip siduhpobi vjev zua esi vji iyedv lopf ug qistup zua et e catopittnep xuamf xepv qav exez.

Dsifocomovz ot vji nutv onqusvepv nietasi ug e nep epf zua'si saopoph zuast ev iwisz tviq. Xjz dep zua puv apfistvepf vjot?

"Puvjoph op vji xusmf ot nusi fephisuat vjep topdisi ohpusepdi epf duptdoipvouat tvaqofovz." -Nesvop Mavjis Loph, Ks.
 
Eneom, zuasi xetvoph zuas voni up vjot haz, zua depv sietup xovj jot tvaqofovz, ji xupv hiv ov epf piwis xomm.
 
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